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    Well, he *did* comment that they liked each other, and he kept insisting to that degree...remember in the ep with Danny? And then with the Nidoran in love?

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    Wow. Just...wow. That was really dark, but well written. ^^ I *loved* how you interspliced the story with Tracey's narraration--it added a completely new dimension that the story HAD to have.

    Really, there are no critiques I can make. Just watch for some iffy repitition, and that's it! Wonderful job, Blackjack.
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    Thanks! Haven't seen you in a while, where've you been?

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    Originally posted by Blackjack Gabbiani
    Thanks! Haven't seen you in a while, where've you been?
    Her day job keeps her rather busy... torturing the souls of the evil, and all that. You know?

    so sell your suit and tie and come and live with me
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    Ah, I see. I used to work in a video store.

    ...which is kinda like being paid to be tortured for 5 hours straight.

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    *grins* I'm usually more active at night. (You know, being Satana and all...) That, and school is an absolute bitch.

    You can always IM me, stranger. ^_~
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    ...dude, someone else on this board has a character named Satana...

    can't tell you who, but...

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    Must be modeled after me. I am, after all, the original mistress of the underworld. ^_~
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    *giggle*

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    Whee! Angst Poke Fic! And with human characters from the show! Yay!

    The main reason I stopped reading Pokemon Fanfics was the lack of original from the show/game characters fics, everyone had original of their own characters. so this would make a change. This is so cool! Suicide notes rule. The way I saw it, the fic got a really suspense of "Tracey can't see above the knees from under the bed" until Giovanni took the gun out, of course, I imagined that, but it was the kind of scene the fic gave me, which is great! I don't get scenic imaginations form any fic! (not something to be proud of, really)

    The writing style: Fine with me, I think it doesn't push it with the description neither it lacks of it, so I think you got a nice story here!

    Go angst!

    *sticks HA Warning! to this fic (Heavy Angst)
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    Well, from his vantage point, he's seeing it at like a 3/4 angle (or is that 2/3? Well...from above, as he's seeing it through a grate in the above room...)

    And thank you! If you like, I have a ton more on here, too!

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    :D
    Muy bien!
    *hugs Gio*
    He's not that evil!
    ...Then again, I'm f**ed up.
    This was good, though. The depression sense around it, the darkness... Very, very nice.

    "A darker dream that has no ending
    That's so unreal, you believe that it's true.
    A dance of death out of a mystery tale..."

    ~*Hyde, A Dangerous Game*~

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    *g* thank you.

    And *MY* take on Gio *IS* that evil...*g*

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    IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT!

    This fic just won Best Short Story at Sakura Con! I won a DVD of a series called Ai Yori Aoshi *haven't watched it yet, anyone seen it?*

    Anyway, the tally book with the judges' comments about the stories said "Wow. I've never read a Pokemon story quite like this before."

    Heehee. I rule.

    Oh, and a Jesse cosplayer won Best Monologue at the cosplay, so it was a good year for Pokemon at the con...

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    Originally posted by Blackjack Gabbiani
    IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT!

    This fic just won Best Short Story at Sakura Con! I won a DVD of a series called Ai Yori Aoshi *haven't watched it yet, anyone seen it?*

    Anyway, the tally book with the judges' comments about the stories said "Wow. I've never read a Pokemon story quite like this before."

    Heehee. I rule.

    Oh, and a Jesse cosplayer won Best Monologue at the cosplay, so it was a good year for Pokemon at the con...
    YAY GO YOU! WOHOO! *claps* WOHOO!

    so sell your suit and tie and come and live with me
    leukemia schizophrenia polyethylene
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    she used to be beautiful once as well

    plastic bag, middle class, polyethylene
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    if you don't believe this, sell your soul
    if you don't get into it, no one will

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