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    Originally posted by Blackjack Gabbiani
    I get the feeling I wandered into the middle of something here...
    Just an old friendship, Blackjack (though it was more at one time). Timarelay and I have known each other for a while, and tremendously enjoy making fun of each other ^^;;.
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    He's an evil director / He'll give out infractions / Do something wrong / And he takes direct actions
    Then what'll he do?/ He'll permaban you / You find your name slashed / With a message, 'Adieu'
    Sooooo...watch out!
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    Ah, I see now. Thanks!

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    My God, BJG. With all this murder and suicide, you're making me seriously psychotic with each fic I read! XD

    No, seriously, your fic do death right. I think that seeing your perspective on things has helped mine immensely. You seem to have a whole different view of the characters, and that's something I find very valuable. Not to say, "You show me exactly what not to do," but your planning of the character makes me want to check and double-check my own character theory.

    Another great one, BJG. You're an inspiration to the entire Pokemon fan fic community! ^_^
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    *head swells like a balloon* Fan-freakin'-tastic! But...can you say just *one* little critisism? I can't fit my head in the room anymore! Just ONE tiny little--oh, I can do this...

    TENDANCY TO REVIEW WHORE!!!

    *head reverts to normal*

    WHEW! That was a close one! Yeah, I think my main problem comes from being a review-driven author, and if I don't get *some* advice, I don't know what do to next! Like...right now I'm working on the third chapter of "Obsession" and have no idea what to write. I turn to the reviews and they're all praise! GAK! Say *something* constructive! Please!

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    Well, BJG, I'm glad I'm not the only one with that problem. The fourth story of JTC is turning out the same way. In fact, until last night, it was really goin' down the tubes. I simply wrote out the chapter titles, and let those guide me. Through the chapter titles, I was able to ask the queston, "What do I want to get accomplished in this chapter?"

    Just some general advice! ^_^
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    Well, the trouble is that with Obsession, there *are* no chapter titles...

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    ::sniffle:: Kennnnji... ::cries:: (and those... other two people who died... whoever they are, lol, I love Kenji ^^) I'd read this before, but forgotten how it ended...

    I really should stop reading your fics, BG; they always make me cry. ::sniffle:: But this was good ^^

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    I endeavor to please. *bow*

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    He dies again...

    But that was good. Vey good. I really like how you've portrayed Kenji... though I think I prefer Kenji/Ookido-hakase to Hanako/Ookido-hakase; but that's just little ol' perverted me. This one is brilliant too...

    I'm getting urges to write more Mandragora from reading such darkness...

    Darkness is always good. And wrong is a colloquial view, but let's not go into that...

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    Originally posted by Pluvius
    though I think I prefer Kenji/Ookido-hakase to Hanako/Ookido-hakase; but that's just little ol' perverted me.
    No, I think Kenji himself likes that one best...*g* What *is* it about Oak, anyway? I'd think it was phermones or something but Tracey wanted him before they even met...

    I'm getting urges to write more Mandragora from reading such darkness...

    Darkness is always good.
    Indeed it is. And thank you! I hope to inspire more!

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    Hanako/Ookido-hakase/Kenji?

    <snicker> But anyway. I do really enjoy Kenji stories actually... even though he seems so much of a pervert in the actual anime. My opinion, however, and I'm not sure if anyone else shared such a view on him...

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    How so? Aside from the basic voyuristic nature of the Watcher...but remember, Oak was a Watcher when he was younger, and he didn't seem like that at all *well, looking back on it he did, but that's only because of the night in the tree with Ash*

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    Originally posted by Blackjack Gabbiani
    How so? Aside from the basic voyuristic nature of the Watcher...but remember, Oak was a Watcher when he was younger, and he didn't seem like that at all *well, looking back on it he did, but that's only because of the night in the tree with Ash*
    Exactly.

    <humms> Kenji and Satoshi, sitting in a tree...

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    so for you all Watchers are voyuers by nature?

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    I think that all watchers are vouyeristic in nature, but that Kenji is moreso than others. He just seemed... 'Oh! I want to come with you so I can meet Ookido-hakase'... and I don't know why, but I used to think he was always glancing at Satoshi-kun and Kasumi-chan.

    But I'm corrupted in almost every way... I like Kenji though, especially his voice actor in the English dub, too.

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