Oh, Portal. Fun times.
Dean seems like a smug guy. My views on this one keep changing, as I'll think some lines are a little wobbly, until I look closer and they aren't really. :|
The only other thing is his nose. I'm not entirely sure what's going on near the tip, but it looks like the lines in the middle are for... er... the middle part of the nose. In that case, his bridge gently slopes down in to his right nostril, which seems odd. I'm also not entirely sure what the line leading down from the middle is either... That little dent people have between their nose and mouth?
Oooo... a sharpely dressed dude and a girl in a red dress? :) (Guessing Queen is a Zoroark?)
As odd as it seems, Solomon shouldn't have that much space between his arm and his jacket if he's putting his hands that low on his back. Or butt, as the case may be.
For Queen, I'm not entirely sure what it is, but her face feels... off. I hate not being able put my finger on it. Maybe it's her almost nonexistant cheeks? I mean, I can tell where the slope of her face changes, but... I dunno.
Also, her left shoulder looks too low compared to her right. Might be the angle or her hair, but still.
Aside from all that, they both look rather stylin'
(That what you call a small update? Hate to see the big ones...)
The portrait looks nice, if a little unerving. Maybe the tiny pupils? The... little dent thing between the nose and mouth is a little off center. It should be slightly more to our right, right? Right underneath where the nose connects to the face.
Heh. The dress sketch suffers from classic "person-sketch tilted to one side" syndrome. :P
But she's well done otherwise. There's a little less space between her left eye and the left side of the face than the respective right side.
Yay! More dresses! I'm finding recently that I like pimped out costumes. Partial to bows and ribbons too. Not much else to say, though. Clothes have never been my forte. Everything looks like it's folding properly.
Colorful. I have a hard time telling if her right leg is too large, or it's just the pants. Her sneakers also look too.. thin? Er... there doesn't seem to be enough space between the bottom and top of the sneakers. I can't find the right word for it.
Otherwise, the only thing is the thing she's got between the fingers on her right hand. They, the pointer and middle finger, seem to be angled too far apart what seems to be a thin object.