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    Default Re: Pokemon Green Adventures[Lastest Episode:002]

    @Raichu:Haha..We'll see ;D
    @Blazaking:Thanks for the tip

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    Default Re: Pokemon Green Adventures[Lastest Episode:002]

    Quote Originally Posted by Blazaking EX View Post
    Just that Leaf's text is hard to read. Make it darker.
    On that note, it would also be better if you made the names bold to difer a bit from the text,

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    Default Re: Pokemon Green Adventures[Lastest Episode:002]

    Good Thinking :D

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    Default Re: Pokemon Green Adventures[Lastest Episode:002]

    It's okay 'part from the spelling errors.

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    Default Re: Pokemon Green Adventures[Lastest Episode:002]

    I have noted the Errors,And fond out why my spell check wasn't working.

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    Default Re: Pokemon Green Adventures[Lastest Episode:002]

    i actually like this a lot. my only suggestions is to use the rectangle tool in MS Paint for the borders of your panels.
    Send me a PM if you want help with an RMT or TeamBuilding (i reserve the right to refuse assistance at my discretion)


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    You son of a bitch.

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    Default Re: Pokemon Green Adventures[Lastest Episode:002]

    Thanks!I have been using GIMP for the panels,and paint for the text,So it shouldn't be a problem.

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    Default Re: Pokemon Green Adventures[Lastest Episode:002]

    Heheh, this made me giggle a lot.

    "Find a rival,Beat his ass."
    "Such a big ambition!That's my boy!"

    Other than the minor grammar mistakes, and layout issues, this is actually quite good. I'll be looking forward to more. =D

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    Default Re: Pokemon Green Adventures[Lastest Episode:002]

    Sorry for delay,The next chapter should be here at 6PM GMT.

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    Default Re: Pokemon Green Adventures[Lastest Episode:002]

    haha i can drop of school lol
    Typhlosions mine

    avatar credit goes to Blazaking EX great work

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    Default Re: Pokemon Green Adventures[Lastest Episode:002]

    Great I can't wait for part 003

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    Default Re: Pokemon Green Adventures[Lastest Episode:002]

    Thank you.A chapter hasn't been posted for 30 days, but I hope to get back on track.

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    Default Re: Pokemon Green Adventures[Lastest Episode:002]

    Quote Originally Posted by The Golden Tyranitar View Post
    Thank you.A chapter hasn't been posted for 30 days, but I hope to get back on track.
    Maybe I should update my comic.

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