Thread: Pokemon Green Adventures[Lastest Episode:002]

My sprite comic.I'm new to this business,so any constructive/instructive criticism you may have,please tell me.
Anyway here is chapter 001

And 002:

Hmmmm... pretty good.

I like how you've contained quite a lot of humour in it. The only I thing you need to improve is the dodgy title screen, because all the sides are going this way and that, if you know what I mean.

Other than that, it's great. Glad to see more sprite comics here.

Thanks for the advice!THe title sceen was one of the bigger slip ups...but I'll sort it for 002

Yep, that'll be good.

Hmm, I can't see it...

I'll post a link off site...ummmm..hang on...Here we go :D

The comic is fun :D

Although you should probably make it bigger, I had some problems reading.

Its only small because I had to link off site,the real thing is bigger.
try this link

Nice! I'm kind of enjoying this comic spree. DHL inspire you?

He sure did ;D
Chapter two up soon.

Hahaha, great to know that I inspired you.

hey the comic is great
"Find a rival, beat his ass" lol

And...002 is here!

Haha, very funny.
If I'm not wrong, everyone picked the Pokémon that fits their names, right?

I like it! Just that Leaf's text is hard to read. Make it darker.

Otherwise, I love it!