Pokemon Green Adventures[Lastest Episode:002]

@Raichu:Haha..We'll see ;D
@Blazaking:Thanks for the tip

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Originally Posted by Blazaking EX

Just that Leaf's text is hard to read. Make it darker.

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On that note, it would also be better if you made the names bold to difer a bit from the text,

Good Thinking :D

It's okay 'part from the spelling errors.

I have noted the Errors,And fond out why my spell check wasn't working.

i actually like this a lot. my only suggestions is to use the rectangle tool in MS Paint for the borders of your panels.

Thanks!I have been using GIMP for the panels,and paint for the text,So it shouldn't be a problem.

Heheh, this made me giggle a lot.

"Find a rival,Beat his ass."
"Such a big ambition!That's my boy!"

Other than the minor grammar mistakes, and layout issues, this is actually quite good. I'll be looking forward to more. =D

Sorry for delay,The next chapter should be here at 6PM GMT.

haha i can drop of school lol

Great I can't wait for part 003

Thank you.A chapter hasn't been posted for 30 days, but I hope to get back on track.

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Originally Posted by The Golden Tyranitar

Thank you.A chapter hasn't been posted for 30 days, but I hope to get back on track.

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Maybe I should update my comic.