Thread: jokool's anime and manga drawings

Originally Posted by Terra-chan

It looks good! what's wrong with it?

Thanks! Eh, I don't know... I think I wasn't happy with the way the water looked. Also...

Originally Posted by Joltik

The Tree Is SLANTED!!

That! ^ I think I was trying to make the tree look like it was swaying in the breeze...

EPIC FAIL!!!

Originally Posted by jokool

Originally Posted by Joltik

The Tree Is SLANTED!!

That! ^ I think I was trying to make the tree look like it was swaying in the breeze...

I know that I'm just giving you a hard time, the wave crashing does look weird

you're off to a good start, but there's one thing that i noticed.

when you draw your girls their... er... breasts are kind of crooked and awkward looking. ^^; one kind of looks bigger than the other and they're a little saggy.

also, on the pikachu, it does look rather flat. adding 3d depth such as shading, etc will help.

i'd say more but it's 12:30 in the morning for me and i've had a rather rough day... i may review more when you post some more pictures. keep drawing.

Originally Posted by Lady Lucifer

you're off to a good start, but there's one thing that i noticed.

when you draw your girls their... er... breasts are kind of crooked and awkward looking. ^^; one kind of looks bigger than the other and they're a little saggy.

Yeah... I'm still working on... them...

also, on the pikachu, it does look rather flat. adding 3d depth such as shading, etc will help.

I'm still trying to figure out good shading techniques. Hopefully I'll be able to figure it out soon.

i'd say more but it's 12:30 in the morning for me and i've had a rather rough day... i may review more when you post some more pictures. keep drawing.

I'll probably post more pics tomorrow.

Thanks for your comments!

UPDATE!

Here's a couple more characters that I've drawn! For some reason, I decided not to color them.

I really like that girl.

Terra like!

The girl gives me a kind of creepy vibe, was that your Intention?

Originally Posted by Joltik

The girl gives me a kind of creepy vibe, was that your Intention?

Well, I was going for a goth-like look, so.... Yes?

I love how you made the girl's hair shiny by using an eraser. :D The expressions are nice too.

Your hands are pretty small though; they look really disproportionate. :x I have a hard time with those buggers too. They got some good tuts out there to help with that.

Cool stuff, looking forward to more.

Originally Posted by EmBreon

I love how you made the girl's hair shiny by using an eraser. :D The expressions are nice too.

Thanks!

Your hands are pretty small though; they look really disproportionate. :x I have a hard time with those buggers too. They got some good tuts out there to help with that.

Yeah... I'm still working on the hands. I can't figure out why they turn out so small!
Oh, BTW: What exactly do you mean by "buggers"?

Cool stuff, looking forward to more.

Again, thanks! I'll try to post more on here when I get the chance!

Why don't you use the shiny pikachu for your signature again? It looks nice

Originally Posted by Destiny Queen

Why don't you use the shiny pikachu for your signature again? It looks nice

I probably will go back to the shiny Pikachu when I get tired of my current theme.

BTW: Thanks!

Originally Posted by jokool

Originally Posted by Destiny Queen

Why don't you use the shiny pikachu for your signature again? It looks nice

I probably will go back to the shiny Pikachu when I get tired of my current theme.

BTW: Thanks!

I like the current theme.

And the shiny pikachu.

Originally Posted by jokool

Yeah... I'm still working on the hands. I can't figure out why they turn out so small!
Oh, BTW: What exactly do you mean by "buggers"?

Slang for like, "them scoundrels". XD Was referring to hands. I have trouble with those things as well.

Try drawing them way bigger than what feels right, heh. Helped me a lot.