Pikachu: Arms cheeks legs ears a little to thin
Pikachu: Arms cheeks legs ears a little to thin
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If I had to choose between
a Politoed and you,
I'd choose Politoed
I have a new one!
Originally Posted by Neoflare
Originally Posted by Light Yagami
Charmander: The head a little too long, but other than that I do not see any faults! It is your best yet, in my opinion. You are progressing a lot, and I think you can be a very well known scratchist, or scratcher, or what ever they are calledIf you continue.
No rates? What do people want to see?
Originally Posted by Neoflare
Originally Posted by Light Yagami
Squirtle: The shading looks square instead of circular. The legs seem too small for the body, and the tail seems to be connected to the arm.
Pikachu: It's body looks square, and the shading is odd. The arms, legs/feet and ear things are too small for the body, and the tail doesn't have the same tip as a normal Pikachu does.
Ditto: It looks much too big to be a Ditto. It doesn't really seem all that '3-d' to me. The shading, again, is off, and there should be small white boxes on some of the cornerish places.
Charmander: The head is too big, by this I mean the eyes should be closer to the nose. The legs look they are facing to the left (Our right) when the sprite itself is facing to the right (Our left).
All sprites: They all look jagged in one place or another, like on the Squirtle, there is an un-needed edge on the face, making it look like someone is pinching it's cheek, but no one is actually pinching it.
I do not need a signature to be cool, I only need mostly proper grammar. I would never tlk liek ths, so why blame me for improper grammar? At least it is good grammar.
Actually, the official D/p/Pt Charmander's body is turned, and the leg is up. Your welcome ~
I do not need a signature to be cool, I only need mostly proper grammar. I would never tlk liek ths, so why blame me for improper grammar? At least it is good grammar.

Your zorua is fantastic, really. Your sprites get better each time :)
My Black Team
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Wow, you have improved so much, the Zoura is awesome! Mqaybe a bit more shading though.
The Zoura is adoreable! The tail should be conected to the body a bit more, though.
I do not need a signature to be cool, I only need mostly proper grammar. I would never tlk liek ths, so why blame me for improper grammar? At least it is good grammar.
Thanks for the tips and compliments everyone!
I have a new mudkip up... probably isn't as good.
Originally Posted by Neoflare
Originally Posted by Light Yagami
The mudkip is pretty good, but the head looks a little off.

You've gotten better and better and I thought you hit almost-perfect with Zorua, but Mudkip is a little off. The head looks a little too squarish and the mouth is weird.
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Stay. Away. From. My. Cookie.
Yet another one up!
Originally Posted by Neoflare
Originally Posted by Light Yagami

The Zorua doesn't have any highlights, every sprite needs highlights.
And Bulbasaur is well done, but the mouth is too blocky, and it looks too much like the official sprite.
Moved to Serebii, still spriting there. ~BB
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