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    Default Re: cmd84's scratches (new pikachu scratch)

    Pikachu: Arms cheeks legs ears a little to thin

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    Default Re: cmd84's scratches (new ditto scratch)

    I have a new one!
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    Default Re: cmd84's scratches (new charmander scratch)

    Charmander: The head a little too long, but other than that I do not see any faults! It is your best yet, in my opinion. You are progressing a lot, and I think you can be a very well known scratchist, or scratcher, or what ever they are called If you continue.

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    Default Re: cmd84's scratches (new charmander scratch)

    No rates? What do people want to see?
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    Default Re: cmd84's scratches (new charmander scratch)

    Squirtle: The shading looks square instead of circular. The legs seem too small for the body, and the tail seems to be connected to the arm.

    Pikachu: It's body looks square, and the shading is odd. The arms, legs/feet and ear things are too small for the body, and the tail doesn't have the same tip as a normal Pikachu does.

    Ditto: It looks much too big to be a Ditto. It doesn't really seem all that '3-d' to me. The shading, again, is off, and there should be small white boxes on some of the cornerish places.

    Charmander: The head is too big, by this I mean the eyes should be closer to the nose. The legs look they are facing to the left (Our right) when the sprite itself is facing to the right (Our left).

    All sprites: They all look jagged in one place or another, like on the Squirtle, there is an un-needed edge on the face, making it look like someone is pinching it's cheek, but no one is actually pinching it.
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    Default Re: cmd84's scratches (new charmander scratch)

    Quote Originally Posted by Tokyokit View Post
    Squirtle: The shading looks square instead of circular. The legs seem too small for the body, and the tail seems to be connected to the arm.

    Pikachu: It's body looks square, and the shading is odd. The arms, legs/feet and ear things are too small for the body, and the tail doesn't have the same tip as a normal Pikachu does.

    Ditto: It looks much too big to be a Ditto. It doesn't really seem all that '3-d' to me. The shading, again, is off, and there should be small white boxes on some of the cornerish places.

    Charmander: The head is too big, by this I mean the eyes should be closer to the nose. The legs look they are facing to the left (Our right) when the sprite itself is facing to the right (Our left).

    All sprites: They all look jagged in one place or another, like on the Squirtle, there is an un-needed edge on the face, making it look like someone is pinching it's cheek, but no one is actually pinching it.
    Thanks for all those tips, but did you not realize the offical charmander feet are like that? I can see how pikachu's shading is off though.
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    Default Re: cmd84's scratches (new charmander scratch)

    Actually, the official D/p/Pt Charmander's body is turned, and the leg is up. Your welcome ~
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    Default Re: cmd84's scratches (new zorua scratch)

    Your zorua is fantastic, really. Your sprites get better each time :)
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    Default Re: cmd84's scratches (new zorua scratch)

    Wow, you have improved so much, the Zoura is awesome! Mqaybe a bit more shading though.

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    Default Re: cmd84's scratches (new zorua scratch)

    The Zoura is adoreable! The tail should be conected to the body a bit more, though.
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    Default Re: cmd84's scratches (new mudkip scratch)

    Thanks for the tips and compliments everyone!
    I have a new mudkip up... probably isn't as good.
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    Default Re: cmd84's scratches (new mudkip scratch)

    The mudkip is pretty good, but the head looks a little off.

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    Default Re: cmd84's scratches (new mudkip scratch)

    You've gotten better and better and I thought you hit almost-perfect with Zorua, but Mudkip is a little off. The head looks a little too squarish and the mouth is weird.

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    Default Re: cmd84's scratches (new mudkip scratch)

    Yet another one up!
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    Default Re: cmd84's scratches (new bulbasaur scratch)

    The Zorua doesn't have any highlights, every sprite needs highlights.

    And Bulbasaur is well done, but the mouth is too blocky, and it looks too much like the official sprite.
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