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    Default cmd84's.Teh Pig's/Sandile's scratches (new snivy scratch)






    This is the new one!


    Another one? :P


    You know the BEEdrill (This is my favourite pokemon, and the first non-gen 1 I scratched:



    If you're doing the mascot of pokémon, why not do the mascot of BMGF too?


    EDIT: Just realized I have all the Gen I starters done, including pikachu!

    It's on a rock because Megu's feet made it look that way.


    obese snivy incoming!

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    Default Re: cmd84's scratches

    It's all really great for your first.

    I would suggest working on making the head a little more thin though, and maybe a little onm the legs.

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    Default Re: cmd84's scratches

    I just thought that I can't cram hundreds of scratches into one place. this is now a placeholder for more scratches.
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    Hmm... you may be right about the head but squirtle always had those li'l fat legs...
    Oops, I mis typed that, I meant the left leg (his right) just looks a bit off.

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    Default Re: cmd84's scratches

    You're right about that, I tried to make it naturally fit in, but I guess I didn't do it right :P
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    Quote Originally Posted by cmd84 View Post
    You're right about that, I tried to make it naturally fit in, but I guess I didn't do it right :P
    Ah, okay, still a great sprite even with it though.

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    Default Re: cmd84's scratches

    It's totally out of proportion, but I can tell that you have good technique and skill, and know how to do the job properly, just keep playing around with the lineart and it'll turn out great. Can't wait to see more!
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    Default Re: cmd84's scratches

    The tail seems to merge with the arm. Maybe slighty separate it?

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    Quote Originally Posted by BuizelBoy View Post
    It's totally out of proportion, but I can tell that you have good technique and skill, and know how to do the job properly, just keep playing around with the lineart and it'll turn out great. Can't wait to see more!
    i don't get what you mean, could you please revamp the sprite to show what you mean?

    And BI... I kinda got that, but I couldn't think of a way to do it...
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    Default Re: cmd84's scratches

    Cool I think its great either way. Make another!

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    Default Re: cmd84's scratches

    The limbs are rather off, don't you think? Plus, work on the white rim of squirtle's shell should need some work. The 'mouth' needs to be reshaped, and where is its tail? Lastly, the shading is fine, but could still use more improvement.
    Keep it up.

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    The head is too wide, the shell is too wide too, and the legs should fit into the front of the shell, and not hang off the bottom.

    Sorry if I sound harsh, because the technique is pretty good and you're showing a lot of potential!
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    Default Re: cmd84's scratches (new pikachu scratch)

    I have another one up but its not as good as I'd hoped :P
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    Default Re: cmd84's scratches (new pikachu scratch)

    I kind of like the squirtle better.

    For pika, the body and ears are too box-like...

    But it still shows promise.

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    Default Re: cmd84's scratches (new pikachu scratch)

    also, Pikachu's cheeks need to be bigger than that.

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