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    Quote Originally Posted by adit8888 View Post

    EDIT: Here is the "Dark Red"! Though he's not as dark as he used to.... Is he better? Same? Or worse?

    The shoes look better, but I think that the darker red looks better.
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    Quote Originally Posted by adit8888 View Post
    Well, I made it matched Charmeleon's colors because I don't like how Charmander & Charizard have the same colors meanwhile Charmeleon's colors are different

    EDIT: Here is the "Dark Red"! Though he's not as dark as he used to.... Is he better? Same? Or worse?

    No.

    I liked the other one better. I just wanted you to just tone down on the "black everywhere."
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    Quote Originally Posted by Muffin™ View Post
    No.

    I liked the other one better. I just wanted you to just tone down on the "black everywhere."
    Oh... OK.

    EDIT: Here's the new "Dark Red"! Is he better? Worse? Or just the same? Please critique him!


    EDIT2: Here is a Blue Charizard:



    Is it good?

    EDIT3: C'mon... please post here and critique my sprites, guys! Now I tried to splice Flareon and Jolteon. Since this is my very first splice, this is probably the ugliest sprite in the alcove... please critique!

    Here it is:

    Last edited by adit8888; 23rd June 2010 at 05:22 PM.
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    Default Re: adit8888's sprites page! (Please critique)

    I love the flint with volkners colours it is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    could i use it as my avatar

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    Default Re: adit8888's sprites page! (Please critique)

    Quote Originally Posted by P0kEmOn View Post
    I love the flint with volkners colours it is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    could i use it as my avatar
    Of course! Just credit me....

    EDIT: I have made 2 new splices... Magmar/Electabuzz and Chimchar/Pichu... please critique them!


    Magmabuz... this one is very hard... what do you think?


    Chimchu... this one is not so hard... is it good?
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    Default Re: adit8888's sprites page! (Please critique)

    That Electabuzz one looks GOOD.

    The Chimchar one is kind of simple.



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    Default Re: adit8888's sprites page! (Please critique)

    Quote Originally Posted by Wind View Post
    That Electabuzz one looks GOOD.
    Thanks! That one is painful to make....
    Quote Originally Posted by Wind View Post
    The Chimchar one is kind of simple.
    I can only think of that....
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    Default Re: adit8888's sprites page! (Please critique)

    Quote Originally Posted by adit8888 View Post
    Of course! Just credit me....

    EDIT: I have made 2 new splices... Magmar/Electabuzz and Chimchar/Pichu... please critique them!


    Magmabuz... this one is very hard... what do you think?


    Chimchu... this one is not so hard... is it good?
    Yay! A new spriter^^

    Magmabuzz is ok. Next time try adding more from the other pokemon :)

    Chimchu, yes it is simple, but there are a lot of ways to improve it. Keep practicing and you'll get the hang of it^^

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    Quote Originally Posted by 400BadRequestPr View Post
    Yay! A new spriter^^

    Magmabuzz is ok. Next time try adding more from the other pokemon :)

    Chimchu, yes it is simple, but there are a lot of ways to improve it. Keep practicing and you'll get the hang of it^^
    OK... I'll keep practicing....
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    Default Re: adit8888's sprites page! (Please critique)

    hi adit! its me morru:)
    I see you've taken into spriting.. so far, everything's well! remember to keep practicing^^
    should you make a shop in the future, i'd like it if we were affiliated:)

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    Quote Originally Posted by MorruMaster14 View Post
    hi adit! its me morru:)
    I see you've taken into spriting.. so far, everything's well! remember to keep practicing^^
    should you make a shop in the future, i'd like it if we were affiliated:)
    Thanks for your comment Morru! Now i have finished some new splices... unfortunately, it looks worse than the others... please critique it guys, so I can fix what's wrong with him.

    Here it is! The Pikaferno:



    EDIT: Another not-so-good splice... Raifernape. Please critique him!

    Here it is:



    EDIT2: I made some recolors for variation... please critique them!

    Here is the Dark Salamence, or as I called it, Deathwing:



    And here is the Blastoise-colored Manaphy, or simply, Blue manaphy:



    PS. I made these as parodies on my friend's username....

    EDIT3: Here is another not-so-good splice... Typhlozone. Please critique!



    EDIT4: I made some recolors again for variation... please critique them!


    Red Salamence

    Blue Groudon

    Green Groudon

    White Groudon

    Gray Groudon

    And I retried Joltreon. What do you guys think of this?

    Last edited by adit8888; 5th July 2010 at 10:55 PM.
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    Default Re: adit8888's sprites page! (Please critique)

    Your're sprites are really nice.

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    Default Re: adit8888's sprites page! (Please critique)

    the typhlozone is great!
    you should fix the tail of pikaferno.

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