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    Hi guys! Last night I tried to do a recolor of Red's HGSS sprite. This is my first recolour so please critique it. I know this is just a piece of junk but... please help me!

    EDIT: I moved the sprite to the sprite folder below...

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    PS. Please don't insult them... maybe they're not very good... but I'm just starting out....
    Last edited by adit8888; 3rd July 2010 at 10:09 PM.
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    Post Re: Please critique my sprites!

    I'm not a spriter, but I think it looks nice. Did you use Photoshop? ^_^
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    Yes I used Photoshop ^_^
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    I think it's nice. :3
    You should keep it up. I found no flaws, honestly. :3

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    Default Re: Please critique my sprites!

    Quote Originally Posted by Sora_ View Post
    I think it's nice. :3
    You should keep it up. I found no flaws, honestly. :3
    Really? Are you serious?
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    That was great. Not only was it good, but I like the color scheme.
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    Default Re: Please critique my sprites!

    We need some proper critique here.

    First of, look at his shoes. One shoe looks distorted.

    The outline is almost all black, you need to fix that.

    And there's something I quite can't put my finger on that makes me not like the recolor.
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    Default Re: Please critique my sprites!

    Quote Originally Posted by Muffin™ View Post
    We need some proper critique here.
    First of, look at his shoes. One shoe looks distorted.
    Ok, I'll try to fix it. But, which one is distorted? Is it the right one?
    Quote Originally Posted by Muffin™ View Post
    The outline is almost all black, you need to fix that.
    Well, I made almost all of the outline black 'cause I used dark colors. But, I'll try to fix it
    Quote Originally Posted by Muffin™ View Post
    And there's something I quite can't put my finger on that makes me not like the recolor.
    OK.

    Now I'll post my other sprites. Please critique them too!

    Lance without his cape. Is it good?

    Volkner with Flint's colours...
    Flint with Volkner's colours...
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    Can I use that 1st one as my avatar and in a few RPs, along with the Volknor with Flint's colors? Thanx in advance :D
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    Default Re: Please critique my sprites!

    Quote Originally Posted by adit8888 View Post
    Ok, I'll try to fix it. But, which one is distorted? Is it the right one?

    Well, I made almost all of the outline black 'cause I used dark colors. But, I'll try to fix it

    OK.

    Now I'll post my other sprites. Please critique them too!

    Lance without his cape. Is it good?

    Volkner with Flint's colours...
    Flint with Volkner's colours...
    MUCH MUCH MUCH BETTER.

    And, oh yea, I meant the right shoe from my right.
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    Default Re: Please critique my sprites!

    Very nice edits. It is a bit hard to critique recolors as it is very difficult to mess a recolor up, but I like them!

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    Default Re: Please critique my sprites!

    Quote Originally Posted by BlackWhite View Post
    Can I use that 1st one as my avatar and in a few RPs, along with the Volknor with Flint's colors? Thanx in advance :D
    You can use both for anything you want....

    Quote Originally Posted by Muffin™ View Post
    MUCH MUCH MUCH BETTER.

    And, oh yea, I meant the right shoe from my right.
    so, it's his left shoe from his PoV?

    EDIT:

    @Muffin: I've been remaking the "Dark Red", but I haven't finished it...(My brother wants to play with my laptop while I'm doing it)

    And this is a Charizard with Charmeleon's colours!

    Last edited by adit8888; 21st June 2010 at 01:04 AM.
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    Default Re: Please critique my sprites!

    Its OK in the way of recolors. The color scheme is a bit generic though. I would have adored to see a SkyBlue and a Yellow color scheme, but we can't have everything.

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    Default Re: Please critique my sprites!

    Quote Originally Posted by TehBazzard2 View Post
    Its OK in the way of recolors. The color scheme is a bit generic though. I would have adored to see a SkyBlue and a Yellow color scheme, but we can't have everything.
    Well, I made it matched Charmeleon's colors because I don't like how Charmander & Charizard have the same colors meanwhile Charmeleon's colors are different

    EDIT: Here is the "Dark Red"! Though he's not as dark as he used to.... Is he better? Same? Or worse?

    Last edited by adit8888; 21st June 2010 at 10:29 AM.
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    Very good!
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