What A Brother Knows (Digimon Frontier, post-series, G)

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    Default What A Brother Knows (Digimon Frontier, post-series, G)

    I know the ending's a little rushed, but it was for DigimonDrabbles on LJ and had to be under 300 words.



    Yutaka didn't know why, but Tommy had changed dramatically over the past few days. Gone was the little brat who depended on their parents for everything. Now Tommy was a new boy, helping out around the house, trying to figure out his homework on his own before asking for help, and he never ever whined any more.

    Maybe it had to do with Tommy's new friends. A few days ago, he started hanging out with some older kids, and Yutaka decided the change in his brother was due to their influence.

    "I met them on the train," Tommy explained, and that sufficed for their parents, but Yutaka wanted to know more. There had to be more to the story then that simple phrase said. So one day, when Tommy went to the park to visit them, Yutaka told his parents he was going out, and followed him.

    He was careful not to let on that he was there, walking a ways behind him and taking alternate routes when he could.

    Finally he was at the park. Tommy had already found his friends, and they were moving to a wooded area. Quickly, Yutaka hid in the bushes. From there he could hear the kids talking.

    "--weird to be back in our world already," the girl said. "And to be living an ordinary life; I still haven't gotten used to being just Zoe again." The others nodded in agreement.

    "It's lonely without having Kumamon with me," Tommy said. Kumamon? What was that?

    The stories the children told were wild. Stories of another world filled with fantastic beasts, friends and foes alike. And Tommy, little baby Tommy who was so dependent, had stood on his own and helped to save it.

    Yutaka couldn't help but feel a swell of pride.

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    It's short, but it's cute. ^.^! I loved Digimon Frontier. And I like this. :D

    D: I'm a Kingdom Hearts fan. w00t.
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    Thank you! I may do a longer version someday, but probably not.

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    Aw... Blackjack! That was sweet! I don't know how you can make this longer without losing the gentleness behind it.

    Yeah Hanako... Make it seem like you know what you are talking about. ¬¬

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    Huge news! This fic just won the "Hero worship" challenge on the aforementioned DigimonDrabbles!

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    Well, congratulations to you, Blackjack! And you were worried that the ending was rushed... If only we knew what you were up against.

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    http://community.livejournal.com/digimondrabbles/

    Poke around, they should be in the last few pages. It came down to a tiebreaker, actually, so it was a narrow win.

    All the contest ones are marked for the Hero Worship contest.

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