Heyo! I'm posting here to see if I can get any constructive criticism for my fan fiction I'm writing for Pokemon! c:

Summary:
Two energetic adolescents start their journey across Hoenn. They get off to a bumpy start in their relationship, but as soon as they communicate, they will realize they have a lot of things in common. Who knows? Maybe their relationship could be something special. A tale of adventure, romance, friendship, rivalry, and so much more. Welcome to Hoenn.

Link:
Under the Skies of Hoenn - FanFiction

Chapter 1



Note:
I'll continue to update this thread along with the FanFic!

I'd appreciate it if you leave a review on the site itself c:

<3