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    On Top
    a one-shot

    A/N: Just for shits and giggles.



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    Half way through I realized they were having a battle and not something else. Anyway, yes, Silver does give off the vibe that he totally wants Gold. And usually with fics it's the other way around.

    This was one of the best one-shots I've ever read. Ever. Next to Gastly's Mamas Roots. I really like the characterization and the feel that only you could have put on a story like this. Nice work, I should really read more of your stuff. I spotted one missing word mistake, but knowing you, you're probably all up on that.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cabaret View Post
    Half way through I realized they were having a battle and not something else. Anyway, yes, Silver does give off the vibe that he totally wants Gold. And usually with fics it's the other way around.
    Ooh, ooh, do you mean that there's unresolved sexual tension between the two here? 'Cause I wasn't really going for that, but it would add a layer to the fic, right? RIGHT?

    Quote Originally Posted by Cabaret View Post
    This was one of the best one-shots I've ever read. Ever. Next to Gastly's Mamas Roots. I really like the characterization and the feel that only you could have put on a story like this. Nice work, I should really read more of your stuff. I spotted one missing word mistake, but knowing you, you're probably all up on that.
    D'awww. <:)

    Thanks.

    --WAIT, WHAT MISSING WORD?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Italics View Post
    Ooh, ooh, do you mean that there's unresolved sexual tension between the two here? 'Cause I wasn't really going for that, but it would add a layer to the fic, right? RIGHT?



    D'awww. <:)

    Thanks.

    --WAIT, WHAT MISSING WORD?

    I forgot, but never mind that. I'll leave it to the grammar sticklers. I've seen a few preciousmetal stories that have really been pretty scary to read, because the characters are just so angry and crazed.

    But this isn't a preciousmetalshipping fic, but it could be.

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    I liek plot twists at the end

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