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    Hi everyone! It's been a long time since I've posted here, but I am now, and it's completed work! As much as I already love that you've taken the time to read this, I also need your help; I need your opinion on it. And I don't mean just critique.

    The following four pieces in this thread just so happen to be coursework for my iGCSE English Literature and Language. However, only one can be chosen. How I wish I could submit all of these for a straight path to an A*! But I can't. Only once creative writing piece is allowed. And the main problem?

    All of my pieces earned A grades.

    Oh noez! First world problems are so deep and meaningful and problematic! /sarcasticmuch

    So, as you can see there is a poll at the top of the page, where you can vote which one out of my writing pieces was your favourite! With your help, I can select the one which will contribute in determining my future!

    (Also, if you really are bored and have way too much time on your hands, you can guess in which order I wrote these pieces over the past 18 months to guesstimate how my style and skillz have developed. They aren't in order, so don't try that.)

    Broken Hearts with a Side Dish of Revenge
    Backstory: One of the teacher's daughters who happens to be a writer gave us a workshop one lesson. At some point she passed out pictures of random people/characters, and for homework we had to write a creative writing piece using them. I had a picture of a lady wearing what looked like an apron with nothing else underneath whilst holding a baking tray with jam cakes on them.



    Playing with Time...?
    Backstory: We were looking at artwork and had to choose one of the pictures to write a piece on. I chose The Persistence of Memory bySalvador Dali



    Travel Writing
    Backstory: We were asked to recall something that had happened over the holidays, so, this is non-fiction. I decided to write about the Underage Festival.



    Marissa Lotte
    Backstory: Anyone from Castform recognise the name? We had been doing work on some London Underground fiction based on the number of seats per train, and were told to create a creative writing piece using the character we had created in the lesson. Guess I just re-used a character that was knocking around in my noggin.

    Also, for those who may be interested, I have mentioned some people based on their characters from the Castform Academy RP:

    Jone (Joe) - @The Anonymous
    LaLa (LeeLee) - @Fwee~
    Lucy/Tempest - GoldenrodGirl
    Kris (Chris) - @Stellar Haze
    Danny (Dante (Yes, I know she is female, but Danny sounds similar)) - @Uu-winchi... On!

    I have permission from
    @Ma†erialGirl McQüeen to use Stacy Lewis, for those who may be wondering.



    So, there we have it! Please vote in the poll before Monday 12th March (coursework deadline), and thank you for reading!
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    M-A-R-ISSA
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    Defo....xD

    My creative writing had to be on a "superheroes". As in everyday ones. I ended writing about this white boy who helped this Asian woman's store in Bradford when some robbers came xD

    I got 20/20 for that coursework (you know I'm good ;) ). But that was like my second twenty. I got twenty for descriptive writing. Then the other one I got 18 so still all A* coursework and now my spoken Language writing got me a fucking 15 (1 mark of an A the fucking prick). My English teacher for the last year and a half ditched us after half term so when we did this one I got 15 O.O

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ma†erialGirl McQüeen View Post
    M-A-R-ISSA
    L-O-T-TEE

    Defo....xD

    My creative writing had to be on a "superheroes". As in everyday ones. I ended writing about this white boy who helped this Asian woman's store in Bradford when some robbers came xD

    I got 20/20 for that coursework (you know I'm good ;) ). But that was like my second twenty. I got twenty for descriptive writing. Then the other one I got 18 so still all A* coursework and now my spoken Language writing got me a fucking 15 (1 mark of an A the fucking prick). My English teacher for the last year and a half ditched us after half term so when we did this one I got 15 O.O
    Knew it. XD Thanks though, I really need help~! \>0</ C'mon, people, help me decide!
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    I was gonna go with Marissa Lotte but I really liked Playing with Time due to the art trivia and the fact you used the actual picture in the story, plus it seems like an interesting contest.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Stellar Haze View Post
    I was gonna go with Marissa Lotte but I really liked Playing with Time due to the art trivia and the fact you used the actual picture in the story, plus it seems like an interesting contest.
    Thank you! I realised how much of a mistake it was to use people's names/characters because I thought they would be biased to that piece COUGH MM COUGH COUGH XD So thank you for not~! \^0^/
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    Well considering the characters didn't actually appear I would say you only based them on name xD

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    I don't care xD

    Didn't even read the others, just the Stacy one lol.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ma†erialGirl McQüeen View Post
    I don't care xD

    Didn't even read the others, just the Stacy one lol.
    Figures xD

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    No need to read the others xD

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    You're not flawless xD Geegee is xD

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    You must be having a laugh xD

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    Quote Originally Posted by Stellar Haze View Post
    You're not flawless xD Geegee is xD
    My name's Jaden Yuki! And I'm absolutely flawless! (Absolutely flawless~) XD

    Anyway, guys, please stop spamming the thread. I got all my hopes up, thinking more people had posted their opinion and voted. TT^TT
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