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    The way I show my love...
    by Tamer

    You've been a part of me since that first day.
    You're in my thoughts and dream,
    in every breath I take,
    and every single move I make.

    I see you when I close my eyes,
    the way you look and how you move.
    i know it's my love that I must prove,
    our joyful memories I will replay,
    and how much I love you in everyday.

    I know when you've been in a room,
    by the fragrance of your presence,
    by love's pure essence.
    Passion coursing through my viens,
    looking forward to the time that still remains.

    You're in my thoughts in every way,
    in my mind, in the words I say,
    in my soul, in how I pray.

    I am thankfull for the day we've met,
    I am sure that my love to you I will never regret..
    You are the spirit of my love,
    and the passion that rains from above.
    In my emotions that has been freed,
    in the devotions to you I feed.

    No, this is not the man I was,
    more the man I want to be,
    to be there for you to see.

    From your lips the words flowed out,
    how I wanted to jump and shout.
    I held you in my arms and..
    conformed you in my heart.

    This is how we love each other,
    this is how I show my love...


    A/N: The very first poem I've ever written. ^^

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    Well, it's freakin' awesome, especially for a first poem. You'll want to correct some spelling, though ("veins" instead of "viens", for instance).

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    Always
    by Tamer

    Always know I love you,
    always feel me there.
    Know...no matter what,
    I'll always care.

    Always know I'm here for you,
    and wish you only the best.
    When your day seems to get too hard,
    with me, your mind can rest.

    Always know there's nothing
    I wouldn't do for you,
    when you can't find your strength,
    I'll gently pull you through.

    Always know I'll give you a place,
    where you can safely stay.
    With my arms wrapped around you..
    I'll take your pain away.

    Always know you're here with me..
    you're always on my mind,
    you live right here, in my heart,
    a beautiful feeling with you, I find.

    Always know...
    that you baby, are the one,
    you fill me like no other can,
    my heart...my love...can't be undone...


    A/N: Yep, this is the unknown side of me, I am a poet :P

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    It's nice, but the last verse kinda disrupts the feel of it. Probably because of the use of the word 'baby'. It changes the tone of the whole thing.

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    Whenever we are Together...
    by Tamer

    You mean so much to me,
    more than I could ever say.
    And even for you to believe,
    I mean it in ever way.

    Whenever we are together,
    nothing can go wrong.
    And I started to think,
    that with you is where I belong.

    Whenever we are together,
    I thank God for that blessing.
    Without you by my side,
    I think I'll keep on missing.

    You take away my sadness,
    you take, with your smile, my pain.
    This feeling when I'm with you,
    is nothing I can explain.

    I wish that I could be with you,
    all throughout each day.
    Therefore the smile I want on my face,
    would never have to go away.

    You've always been there for me,
    no matter what I've gone through.
    So I just want to take this chance to say:
    "Thank you and I love you..."


    A/N: One of my best poems *sniffs* Oh, and thanks Gabbiani, I didn't notice you replying on my first poem. And I have a small note for you, there is no bad poet at all, every human is a poet, but you need a motivation to activate emotions you never knew that you could feel before. For example, knowing what love is made me write these poems...and i never knew I could write poems before...

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