Thread: Takeshi's Paradise [Rocketshipping: PG-13]

Now that's more like it. I felt the characterization was better. They really weren't that OOC! I don't know if Kojiro would be quite that brave, and I really don't think Musashi would go "EW!", but I really enjoyed this one a lot.

Now bring on the lemon!

Originally Posted by Musashi

Now that's more like it. I felt the characterization was better. They really weren't that OOC! I don't know if Kojiro would be quite that brave, and I really don't think Musashi would go "EW!", but I really enjoyed this one a lot.

Now bring on the lemon!

XD I guess they seemed out of character to me because... i wrote it. Lol. I guess it seems better to you cuz i just watched a bunch of Season 11 eps and tried to make them more like that. XD

And hey! Kojiro needs to be brave every once in awhile! XD

And i can imagine her going "EW!" if she feels a certain external organ touching her... o_o;; I'd probably shriek.

And i'm glad you like it! :D <333

Yes, you watching recent episodes definitely showed in your story.

And I guess we just like writing Musashi in different ways.

Originally Posted by Musashi

Now that's more like it. I felt the characterization was better. They really weren't that OOC! I don't know if Kojiro would be quite that brave, and I really don't think Musashi would go "EW!", but I really enjoyed this one a lot.

Now bring on the lemon!

Well, Rocket Girl told exactly what I wanted to say XD So I just have to agree with her ;D
I enjoyed this chapter very much, it was very well written! I'm actually glad that you made this chapter non-lemon <3 And I love the idea od Musashi and Kojiro being locked in a tiny locker together XD As I said I like good foreplays XD

Originally Posted by CherryParanoia

And i can imagine her going "EW!" if she feels a certain external organ touching her... o_o;; I'd probably shriek.

But that's KOJIRO's external organ... THAT MAKES THE DIFFERENCE! XD
I'd probably die from ecstasy <3

Originally Posted by jessierocketka

Well, Rocket Girl told exactly what I wanted to say XD So I just have to agree with her ;D
I enjoyed this chapter very much, it was very well written! I'm actually glad that you made this chapter non-lemon <3 And I love the idea od Musashi and Kojiro being locked in a tiny locker together XD As I said I like good foreplays XD


But that's KOJIRO's external organ... THAT MAKES THE DIFFERENCE! XD
I'd probably die from ecstasy <3

Hahahahahahaha okay, you got me there. If it was Kojiro's... well lets just say it would feel much better in a moment ;D

*coughs* i didn't say that. o_o;;;

Haha, that was great! XD
I especially liked this part...
“That's not my knee.”

Originally Posted by Meowth

Haha, that was great! XD
I especially liked this part...
“That's not my knee.”

Yeah i hoped someone would like that. XD <333

Please oh please get rid of the mallet, she hasn't used that since Kanto! :P But the fic was awesome and cute otherwise. Can't wait for the lemon.

Originally Posted by Meron

Please oh please get rid of the mallet, she hasn't used that since Kanto! :P But the fic was awesome and cute otherwise. Can't wait for the lemon.

I wrote the mallet part in while i was still writing chapter 1 (while they were separate fics :P ). I kept it in cuz i thought it was funny. :o *still loves Kanto anyways*

And thanks for liking it otherwise :P

"That's not my knee."

This, my friend, is why I'm going to love you forever. <3

Originally Posted by Snake Bandage

"That's not my knee."

This, my friend, is why I'm going to love you forever. <3

Hahahah thanks <3333