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    Default Re: Takeshi's Paradise [Rocketshipping: PG-13]

    Now that's more like it. I felt the characterization was better. They really weren't that OOC! I don't know if Kojiro would be quite that brave, and I really don't think Musashi would go "EW!", but I really enjoyed this one a lot.

    Now bring on the lemon!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Musashi View Post
    Now that's more like it. I felt the characterization was better. They really weren't that OOC! I don't know if Kojiro would be quite that brave, and I really don't think Musashi would go "EW!", but I really enjoyed this one a lot.

    Now bring on the lemon!
    XD I guess they seemed out of character to me because... i wrote it. Lol. I guess it seems better to you cuz i just watched a bunch of Season 11 eps and tried to make them more like that. XD

    And hey! Kojiro needs to be brave every once in awhile! XD

    And i can imagine her going "EW!" if she feels a certain external organ touching her... o_o;; I'd probably shriek.

    And i'm glad you like it! :D <333


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    Yes, you watching recent episodes definitely showed in your story.

    And I guess we just like writing Musashi in different ways.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Musashi View Post
    Now that's more like it. I felt the characterization was better. They really weren't that OOC! I don't know if Kojiro would be quite that brave, and I really don't think Musashi would go "EW!", but I really enjoyed this one a lot.

    Now bring on the lemon!
    Well, Rocket Girl told exactly what I wanted to say XD So I just have to agree with her ;D
    I enjoyed this chapter very much, it was very well written! I'm actually glad that you made this chapter non-lemon <3 And I love the idea od Musashi and Kojiro being locked in a tiny locker together XD As I said I like good foreplays XD

    Quote Originally Posted by CherryParanoia
    And i can imagine her going "EW!" if she feels a certain external organ touching her... o_o;; I'd probably shriek.
    But that's KOJIRO's external organ... THAT MAKES THE DIFFERENCE! XD
    I'd probably die from ecstasy <3

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    Quote Originally Posted by jessierocketka View Post
    Well, Rocket Girl told exactly what I wanted to say XD So I just have to agree with her ;D
    I enjoyed this chapter very much, it was very well written! I'm actually glad that you made this chapter non-lemon <3 And I love the idea od Musashi and Kojiro being locked in a tiny locker together XD As I said I like good foreplays XD


    But that's KOJIRO's external organ... THAT MAKES THE DIFFERENCE! XD
    I'd probably die from ecstasy <3
    Hahahahahahaha okay, you got me there. If it was Kojiro's... well lets just say it would feel much better in a moment ;D

    *coughs* i didn't say that. o_o;;;


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    Update 11/14: Chapter 3 is up!

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    Haha, that was great! XD
    I especially liked this part...
    “That's not my knee.”
    I have clamied......That's right!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Meowth View Post
    Haha, that was great! XD
    I especially liked this part...
    “That's not my knee.”
    Yeah i hoped someone would like that. XD <333


    A Close Encounter With Color is my new fanfiction! It's full of Rockety goodness! Please read! :)
    Update 11/14: Chapter 3 is up!

    And if you're into comedy with a hint of steam... try Takeshi's Paradise! It's Rocketshipping, not Brocketshipping despite the title. :P

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    Please oh please get rid of the mallet, she hasn't used that since Kanto! :P But the fic was awesome and cute otherwise. Can't wait for the lemon.

    y team

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    Quote Originally Posted by Meron View Post
    Please oh please get rid of the mallet, she hasn't used that since Kanto! :P But the fic was awesome and cute otherwise. Can't wait for the lemon.
    I wrote the mallet part in while i was still writing chapter 1 (while they were separate fics :P ). I kept it in cuz i thought it was funny. :o *still loves Kanto anyways*

    And thanks for liking it otherwise :P


    A Close Encounter With Color is my new fanfiction! It's full of Rockety goodness! Please read! :)
    Update 11/14: Chapter 3 is up!

    And if you're into comedy with a hint of steam... try Takeshi's Paradise! It's Rocketshipping, not Brocketshipping despite the title. :P

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    "That's not my knee."

    This, my friend, is why I'm going to love you forever. <3

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    Quote Originally Posted by Snake Bandage View Post
    "That's not my knee."

    This, my friend, is why I'm going to love you forever. <3
    Hahahah thanks <3333


    A Close Encounter With Color is my new fanfiction! It's full of Rockety goodness! Please read! :)
    Update 11/14: Chapter 3 is up!

    And if you're into comedy with a hint of steam... try Takeshi's Paradise! It's Rocketshipping, not Brocketshipping despite the title. :P

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