I loved this chapter; it helps get across the desperation. And it gives it a lot more realism. They are, after all, facing seven very powerful trainers, it only makes sense that there would be a casaulty or two along the way. Her death was very well done, as well. It must have been hard to include this, but I'm glad you did...



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