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    May Still Have Hope TeamGalacticMercury's Avatar
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    Warning: Depressing

    A non-pokemon poem


    Silver Eyes


    Into the summer's night,
    I howl grievingly.
    You're losing your last fight,
    Darkness absorbing you thievingly.


    I remember when we danced together,
    Beneath the autumn moon.
    I remember when we sung together,
    Beautifully as a loon.


    I can't forget the hunger,
    Starving near to death,
    Or silently, solemnly grieving
    Our pup's final breath.


    The memories are fading
    As you're breathing grows ever faint.
    Your lovely eyes are dimming,
    I know it is too late.


    The precious, sacred liquid
    Is seeping no longer.
    The redness has stained the grass,
    Along with your silky fur.


    I know the time is here
    When I must bid you farewell,
    I let your struggles cease
    Before my tears should swell.


    I hope that, wherever you are,
    You are safe and warm and alive.
    I will never forget our time together,
    My beautiful silver eyes...

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    Anyway, I was bored and has a bit of inspiration. Thoughts? Critisisms? And yes, I know, Thievingly is not a word, but i needed something and nothing else came to mind. It is pretty easy to figure out what I mean.
    Last edited by TeamGalacticMercury; 24th April 2011 at 04:57 PM.

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    Default Re: Silver Eyes (Poem)

    Wow, awesome poem TeamGalacticMercury! Sorry I missed it until now!

    Love the gracefulness of your words and the tradegy of death and the way you describe it. Awesome!

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    Default Re: Silver Eyes (Poem)

    It's a very emotional poem, very poetic( lol,shaped like itself). Now, I wished I was less lazy so I can even get started on my poem. Your's is amazing.

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