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    This story is great! Just a question, can I take the school idea and put it into my own FanFic or not?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Crimson Penguin View Post
    This story is great! Just a question, can I take the school idea and put it into my own FanFic or not?
    You may, as long as you say where you got it from somewhere in your preface or at the end of the fanfic :) Thank you for asking first
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    Ok thanks mate. Also im looking forward to more chapters!

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    Chapter 3 Part 4

    The council arena was a set of Pokémon battle courts that were open to the public from 12 until 8 at night, within a huge building complex worth several million Poké dollars. The courts were payable for one battle at a cost of 200 Poké dollars per participant, but were free for students at the school. The building was filled with 10 full sized courts over two floors, and was heated during winter, and had air conditioning in the summer. Having opened only two years ago, it had managed to break even at the start of this year with the constant usage and the fact that it was the only one in the UK, so it was used for amateur competition
    and even for touring gym leaders.

    Rose paid for her sister, as she was too young to have a student card and then the group made their way to the centre court, which Carl and Phil were waiting by. Jeff seemed to have disappeared, but Phil still looked menacing. Stephan wasn't sure what Pokémon the boy had, but he was sure that they must be just as big and strong as him, maybe a Ryhorn or a Boldore. Either way, Stephan was sure that he was a rock or ground type trainer.

    Rose turned to Stephan and gave him a hug, which he returned, and then before they broke apart she kiss him, a short kiss that told him what she felt for him, and that everything would be fine. As she made to turn to take her place next to her younger sister, she winked and smiled, then made the 'V' sign with her fingers, the influence of the Japanese use of the sign during pictures which she had copied because she thought it was cool. Stephan just thought that it was cute. He stood next to Eric, who in turn was standing next to Jenny, and looked at the unfolding battle.

    "Ready to face defeat?" Lily called to the two boys on the other side of the court to her.

    "Fat chance!" Carl retorted, and unhooked one of the Pokéballs from his belt, tapped the centre button, and let it expand in his hand. Phil had already taken out his Pokéball, and was holding it out in front of him.

    Lily took out her Pokéball from her pocket, as she hadn't enough money to buy herself a belt, and hadn't been given one by the school, as she was too young.
    She held hers out, and Rose soon followed suit. All together, as if rehearsed for a play, they threw their Pokéballs into the air, shouting the names of their Pokémon, but it was such a confusion of noise that Stephan could not make out who said what. It wasn't until the Pokémon had fully exited their Balls that he could make out who had sent out what.

    Carl had started with his faithful Oddish, the green leaves that stuck out of its head had lengthened in the last few weeks. Expectedly, Phil had sent out a Rock type, Geodude, a large floating rock with human like arms. Lily had sent out a Vulpix, which strangely only had four tails rather than the usual six. "That Vulpix is still very young," Eric pointed out. "The tails on a Vulpix split with age, until the sixth tail is grown, then it stops until it becomes a Ninetails."
    Rose had sent out Murkrow, who was doing circles in the air a few metres up from the ground. The low ceiling would prevent a fly attack, but it still had the ability to dodge the attacks sent on it by the other Pokémon, who were firmly lodged on the ground.

    From the Pokémon sent out, Geodude was the only one that could pose a problem, as it had moves that were super-effective to both Vulpix and Murkrow. On the other hand, Oddish was looking pretty bad, with a flying and a fire type on the other side of the court. Stephan could see by Carl's annoyed expression that he knew he had picked the wrong Pokémon to start with, but he was sure that that would not dissuade him from trying to win with it.

    The match started all of a sudden, when the two sisters both pointed at the Pokémon opposite them and called out. "Go! Confuse Ray!"

    Both Murkrow and Vulpix opened their mouths, and a ray of pulsing light shot out, aiming for Oddish and Geodude. Geodude was much faster than Vulpix, and so managed to dodge the attack with relative ease, although Phil also had to side step to get out of the way of the attack. Oddish however, was too busy getting one of its leaves out of its line of sight to see the ray coming down to hit it. The impact cause Oddish to jump up and down vigorously, and helplessly cry out its name.

    Rose gave a smile, one that made Stephan feel attracted to her, that confidence in her eyes, her posture, it made him feel lucky to be with such a girl. Lily also smiled, but Stephan was not sure why, she had missed her attack, and was about to be on the receiving end of...

    "Geodude!" Phil called in his loud voice that resembled that of a military drill sergeant. "Rock Tomb!"

    The Geodude seemingly pulled out a pile of large rocks from nowhere, and threw them into the air. Lily quickly shouted, "Ruby! Agility!" and the rocks fell down to the ground, expelling a large cloud of dust, and engulfing the Pokémon that were fighting. Stephan tried to see what had happened, but the court was separated by the thick cloud. All he could see was Lily's worried expression on her face.
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    Chapter 3 Part 5

    The silence was broken by Rose's order to her Murkrow "Whirlwind!"

    The small bird mustered up its power and beat its wings forcefully, creating a large gust of wind that expelled the thick cloud of dust and rock away, revealing what had happened. Ruby had disappeared, apparently surrounded by a thick layer of stone. Lily whined in frustration, but Carl decided to take advantage of this moment to order his Oddish on.

    "Sleep Power that stupid bird Oddish!" he called. The Oddish however, had been confused by Murkrow's confuse ray, and so it sprayed its powder toward the nearest floating thing, which happened to be a Geodude. The powder was launched into the air, and fell gracefully onto the proud rock Pokémon, much to Phil's irritation.

    "Why did you do that!?" Phil growled, which Stephan thought was very out of character of him, to argue against Carl, who seemingly had all the power in the trio.
    Rose took this chance, and called her Murkrow, "Wing Attack!"

    The Murkrow circled the arena, and then descended rapidly at the dizzied Oddish. The small bird's wings started to glow, then a sharp white light emerged from them, and as he fell to swipe the Oddish, Lily shouted.

    "Ruby! Fire Spin!"

    Nothing seemed to happen at first, but as Carl's Oddish took the full force of Murkrow's super effective attack, the tomb of rocks started to redden. Carl cried out in sorrow for the loss of Oddish, who had been flung to his feet, and swiftly called it to return to its Pokéball. Meanwhile Phil was begging Geodude to wake up from the forced sleep that Carl's attack had accidentally put him under. It looked to Stephan as if the two sisters would pull the win off easily, since Carl and Phil weren't communicating and combining their attacks. He glanced to Eric, who was standing arms crossed and looking intently on the battle. Jenny was standing with her arms tight to her body, her hands under her chin, still worried about what had happened to Lily's Vulpix.

    "Go! Mareep!" Carl called out, throwing his Pokéball high up into the air. The yellow woollen Pokémon bleated out as it appeared, and immediately went into an offensive stance. Stephan could feel the static electricity that it was giving off from where he stood. 'Rose would have a hard time with that Mareep,' he thought.

    "Vulpix is about to get out," Eric mumbled, either to himself or to his two friends stood beside him, Stephan was not sure. But what he had predicted was happening. The Rocks were shaking under the stress of the heat which Ruby was conjuring. In a flash and a loud crack, the previously solid rock tomb both collapsed and melted around the small fox Pokémon, who looked exhausted from the continuous use of Fire Spin to get out of the constraining rocks.

    Nevertheless, both Jenny and Lily could not suppress their joy at seeing that Ruby was fine, and jumped for joy. Jenny even hugged Eric, who was startled by it and almost lost his footing.

    "Mareep, Shock wave!" Carl ordered.

    "What!?" Stephan asked aloud, shocked, how did he know that move!

    The Mareep yelled out and a large wave of electric power propelled itself from its body, like a huge screen moving forward. There was no way that either Murkrow or Vulpix could dodge it, and so they shook under the brute force of the attack. The whole group behind Murkrow and Vulpix shielded their faces from the intense attack, but it did not affect them. When Stephan looked back to the battlefield, he saw that both Pokémon hit had fallen to the ground, fainting after such a powerful move. Rose and Lily both called back their fallen partners, and Lily gave a menacing look to Carl, who was congratulating his Mareep. Stephan could not help but be impressed at the scale and power of that move.

    "Go, Darkness!" Called out Rose, and her Purrloin entered the field, claws out and growling at the Mareep.

    "Ekans! I choose you!" Lily threw her Pokéball across the field, and out came a purple snake-like Pokémon, hissing violently at the sleeping Geodude.

    It seemed to Stephan that Phil was soon going to have to switch it out for a healthy Pokémon, but as this was a three Pokémon per trainer fight, it was probably not a good idea to do that, better to let your opponent tired themselves on a useless Pokémon than potentially lose a fresh one. One thing was for sure, this was far from over.
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