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    Yes i rewritten this fic. was half asleep on the other one. so here it is. my first Ikarishipping fic

    And this are the shippings i will add in this fic
    Ikarishipping
    Advanceshipping
    Oldrivalshipping

    the last two im not sure yet but i will update you guys if they are in. and yes the names for Green and Blue will be Gary and Amelia.

    anyway enjoy!

    Remember Me
    A Ikarishipping chapter fic


    How does it feel to lose the only thing precious to you? The only thing that makes you wake up each morning and the last thing you before you close your eyes? Even worse that the only one you loved in your life is now gone from you and their feelings are gone…like dust. Like nothing even happened.

    Chapter one
    A New beginning


    It was just another warm summer day in Hearthome. Paul, a young pokemon trainer was trainer with his Electabuzz in a local park.

    “That’s it Electabuzz!” Paul called out. “Now let’s finish it off with thunder punch!”
    “Paul!”

    The young pokemon trainer looked over his shoulder and found it was his newest rival Ash. Ash was a trainer who had been though the four regions including the Kanto battle frontier. After looking at him Paul put his attention back at the battle.

    “Paul listen to me!” Ash called out his rival.
    “I don’t need to talk to a rookie trainer like you” Paul said without even turning to face Ash’s direction.
    “Will you listen if I mention Dawn?”

    Paul didn’t reply after that. The young pokemon trainer looked to the ground and clenched his fist. His tighten his grip as hard as he can before releasing his grip.

    “Let’s finish this later” Paul declared. “Electabuzz return” Paul commanded as he got out Electabuzz’s poke ball from his belt.

    When the electric type pokemon was back into it’s poke ball Pal returned Electabuzz’s back into his belt.

    “What do you want?” Paul said as he still had his back facing Ash.
    “It’s about Dawn” Ash said.
    “I already know that” Paul said as he turned around to face his rival. “Tell me what it is with Dawn”
    “She is in critical condition in the hospital” Ash told Paul. “She needs you”
    “Is that all?” Paul asked. “Well that was a waste of time” Paul said as he put his bag over his shoulder looking like he didn’t care at all.
    “Didn’t you hear me Paul?” Ash yelled. “Dawn could die!

    Three simply words stopped Paul completely. He just stood a few steps ahead of Ash with his back facing him.

    “Don’t you care about her?” Ash asked. “Not what after you two had been?”
    “First thing there was never a we with Dawn and I” Paul said as he started to walk away from Ash.
    “Doesn’t matter” Ash replied. “She could die and all you can do is walk away like nothing happened?” Ash asked. “I know you treat your pokemon different from me but to treat Dawn like this is just plain mean. I mean she cared about you Paul!” Ash yelled.
    “Fine!” Paul called out. “I will come. Just for Dawn” Paul said as he walked towards Ash’s direction and walk to the hospital.

    The two walked all the way to the Hearthome hospital where Dawn was. When they got in front of the building the sliding doors opened as the two entered. Ash showed where Dawn was while Paul was right behind. He watched injured people getting into new rooms while the dead where getting taken out and inside one room Paul saw the dead man‘s family weeping and morning on his bed. Soon both pokemon trainers got the bluenette’s room. Paul’s eye’s widen with shock. He saw Dawn with a thick bandage around her head and bandaids on her face and her chest still had some blood marks.

    “Did this really happen?” Paul asked himself.

    Next to her was her best friend May. A young coordinator from Petalburg. Both girls had the same dream and both met at the Wallace Cup in Sinnoh. She was holding Dawn’s hand as tears ran down her face. May looked at her unconscious friend and then looked at the door and found it was Ash and Paul. Ash walked over to May and embrace her as May cried in his arms.

    “She hasn’t woken up yet” May cried.
    “Dawn will wake up” Ash replied to May. “I know she will” he muttered.

    Then something tragic happened that they all didn’t expect. The monitor’s screen started to make a sound that they didn’t want to hear. They all looked on the monitor’s screen and saw a never ending thin green line fill the bottom of the screen. May was still in Ash’s arms.

    “Dawn no!” May yelled as she tried to break free from Ash’s grip. “don’t die on us!”

    Meanwhile Paul was still at the entrance of the door. Looking at the unconscious bluenette. Soon doctors and nurses came bursting into the room pushing Paul aside. He watched as they tried to revive the young girl.

    “No” Paul thought. “This can’t be happening”

    Two months ago…

    Ash, Dawn and Brock were on their journey in the region Sinnoh. The three where at Sunny shore city. All three were at the beach enjoying themselves. Dawn was in her yellow two piece with gold small ribbons on each side. She had her Pilpup playing in the water with her while Ash and Brock were at the golden sandy beach playing beach volleyball. Meanwhile Paul a pokemon trainer like Ash had just arrived at the town. He saw the three playing at the shores of Sunny shore. He saw a girl in a yellow two piece. at first he couldn’t tell who it was until she turned his way.

    “Is that Dawn?” Paul asked himself.
    “Is that Paul?” Dawn said as she put her hand over her eyes to block the suns rays from getting into her eyes. “Hey it is” Dawn said. “Hey Ash, Brock come over here!” Dawn called out to her friends.
    “What is it?” Ash asked as he got to the scene.
    “Look it’s Paul” Dawn pointed to Paul’s direction.
    “And it is to” Ash replied. “Well I’m going back to Pikachu” Ash told his friends.
    “Wait for me” Brock called out as he started to chase after Ash.

    Soon it was only Dawn looking at Paul. She just waved at him and ran back to join the others.

    “Did she just waved at me?” Paul asked. “That is weird of her”

    Paul just watched her ran after her friends and soon after he walked off to the poke centre.

    When Dawn reached her friends she found them starting to eat Brock’s cooking.

    “What took you so long?” Ash asked as he took a bite from his sandwich.
    “Nothing” Dawn said as she took a seat a seat next to Ash. “I just waved at Paul”
    “You waving at him?” Ash asked. “Sounds like you like him” Ash teased. “I mean you wouldn’t wave at someone like that. I mean you never waved at him before”
    “Mmm….me?!” Dawn said in shocked. “Me like Paul?” Dawn asked and soon end up cracking up laughing. “What a joke. Anyway what do you know about love?”
    “Well….” Ash said as he scratched the back of his head. “Not much” Ash smiled.
    “You mean nothing at all” Brock added.
    “Hey!” Ash called out.
    “But it is true” Brock replied. “I mean when was the last time you actually grew feelings for a girl?”
    “And when was the last time you were pulled by the ear because of you flirting skills?” Ash said. “And you talk like you know a lot about love. Look at you. Even I did grew feelings for a girl I know I would beg like I’m desperate for a girl”
    “He does got a point” Dawn replied with her mouth full. “I still don’t know how Ash deal with you back at his start of his journey”
    “It took a long time to get use to Dawn” Ash replied. “Back in Hoenn I remember Max pulling his ear. I even remember May doing it once”
    “Wow” Dawn said in surprise.

    Soon the lunch Brock prepared was all gone and the three friends all got back into their normal clothes and started to head to the poke centre.

    End of Chapter one [/LEFT]

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    Cool beginning :)

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    thanks. ^_^

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    Here it is guys! the second chapter. enjoy!

    Chapter two
    Sentimental values


    The three friends arrived to their destination within a few minutes. The three all went to the desk where nurse Joy was. They asked for a room to stay in. nurse Joy gave them a room to stay in. when they got the key to their room they all headed upstairs. In their room there was two bunk beds with navy blue bed sheets to cover. When they got there they started to unpack their bags.

    “Hey Ash aren’t you suppose to unpack your bag right now?” Dawn asked.
    “I’ll do that later” Ash replied. “I have training to do” Ash told his friends before running out the door.
    “The typical Ash” Dawn sighed.

    So Brock and Dawn were the only people left in their room. Dawn had already finish unpacking and laid on the bed. When she did Ash’s bag which was on the bed fell to the ground and his items fell right out and spread all over the carpet. Dawn quickly got up and put Ash’s items back into his bag until she came across something.

    “What’s this?” Dawn asked as she showed Brock a half pink contest ribbon.
    “Well that is Ash’s contest ribbon he won back at Kanto with May. To be honest I didn’t think he would have that still with him” Brock replied.
    “Wait. Ash won a contest?” Dawn asked. “Then where did the other half of this ribbon go?”
    “It went to May. A friend of Ash”
    “Wow” Dawn replied. “I never thought Ash was interested into contest”
    “That’s Ash” Brock replied as he zipped his empty bag. “You can never know what to expect from Ash”
    “Hey guys I‘m back” Ash replied as he opened the dor to let himself in with Pikachu on his shoulder.

    Then Ash saw Dawn holding his half of the ribbon he won with May.

    “Dawn?” he asked. “Why are you holding that?”
    “This?” she asked. “Nothing. Anyway why do you have this. I mean what can you do with a half contest ribbon?”
    “It might be useless to you but it is important to me. This is the only thing that reminds me of my best friend May” Ash replied as he took his ribbon out of Dawn’s hands. “Next time can you not go though my stuff?” Ash asked kindly.
    “Yeah” Dawn said as she got off her knees.
    “Thanks” Ash replied as he put the ribbon back into his bag.

    Ash slowly zipped up his bag and sighed after. Then he got his bag and put it back on top of his bed.

    “Anyway you guys hungry?” Ash asked.
    “Not really” Dawn replied.
    “Same over here” Brock replied.
    “Well you guys can find me in the cafeteria” Ash told his friends as he ran out of the room leaving his friends behind.
    “The typical Ash” Dawn repeated ending with a sigh.

    *~*~*~*

    Darkness had already covered the city in darkness. Everyone was asleep except Dawn. She had Ash’s other half of the ribbon. She was looking at it carefully. She was at the balcony looking at it.

    “Why does Ash need you?” She asked herself. “I mean your only a half ribbon. Guess I will never understand sentimental values” Dawn sighed as she got back inside and returned the ribbon back into Ash’s bag.

    As Dawn returned the ribbon something else fell from the trainer’s bag. It was a photo. Dawn picked the object up to her face height. Since she couldn’t see the photo in the dark she went near the window so the light of the moon could make the photo brighter and Dawn could see who was in the photo.

    When the light of the moon hit the photo Dawn could see four people in it. Ash, Brock and two other people she didn’t recognized. The was a young boy around eight years old. He had glasses and black short hair. He had a lime colour t-shirt with black shorts. Then there was a young brunette girl. She looked around the same age as her. She had a red bandana with a white poke ball design on it. She had a red top with a white skirt underneath with black short shorts with a yellow waist bag lying on her waist.

    “So…” Dawn said. “This must be May” Dawn said as she looked closer into the picture. “She looks cute and pretty” Dawn told herself. “But who is this young boy?”

    Dawn thought for awhile. Thinking to who this young boy Ash travelled in his previous journey.

    “Oh well” Dawn said as she shrugged her shoulders. “It doesn’t really matter anyway” the young bluenette said as she returned the photo back into Ash’s bag.

    Soon after she went to her bed and went to sleep.

    End of chapter two

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    Well excellent description of Masato or Max keep writing this

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    Chapter three
    Manners first


    It was the next morning and everyone was awake except Dawn. She was the last one to wake up. She looked around her and saw her friends already out of bed. She took the sheets off her and started to get dress in a rush. Today was the day they would leave this town to the next town they were going to encounter. When Dawn was already dressed into the black miniskirt. She quickly looked into the mirror and put her yellow hair clips into her hair. Then rushed to put her shoes and raced to her bag and rush out of the room. When she was all ready she closed the door behind her and ran to join her friends.

    Meanwhile Paul had also got out of his room and was about to walk out of the hallway until Dawn bumped into him and made them fall to the ground. Dawn was on top of Paul. When she looked into his eyes she blushed red.

    “Would you mind to get off me?” Paul asked in a unpleased manner. “I got better thing to do then stay with you here on the floor”
    “You could ask nicely” Dawn said as she was on top of Paul’s body.
    “Oh come on” Paul said. “I don’t have time to chat with a troublesome girl like you who doesn’t know where she is going”
    “Well I will stay here until you say please” Dawn refused.
    “Fine” Paul sighed. “Can you please get off me before anyone thinks that we are doing something else”
    “That’s much better” Dawn smiled as she got off Paul.
    “Man your heavy” Paul mumbled.
    “I heard that!” Dawn called out.
    “Whatever” Paul said as he got off the floor and started to walk away from the young bluenette.

    Soon Dawn got herself off the floor and went to greet her friends. When she got there her friends saw Dawn coming out from the hallway

    “About time” Ash said. “What took you so long?”
    “I just woke up late that’s all” Dawn replied.
    “Well let’s go” Brock said.
    “Yeah let’s go!” Ash cheered.

    *~*~*~*

    It was around middy and the three had already left Sunny shore. It was also lunch time so Brock decided to make lunch. As the lunch was still getting ready they saw Paul walking towards their direction. He had his hands in his pockets. He just looked at them and continue to walk past them.

    “Hey guys have you seen Pilpup?” Dawn asked.
    “The last time I saw him was at the old bridge over there” Brock replied as he pointed at a old bridge that looked like it was about to break.
    “Okay then” Dawn replied. “I will go get him” Dawn said as she got off the grass and walked over the bridge where Paul was heading to.

    When Dawn got the bridge she carefully got Pilpup into her arms. Paul was right behind her and didn’t say anything but to push her aside with his shoulder. Dawn didn’t like this and chased Paul who was now on the old bridge.

    “Hey that wasn’t very nice!” Dawn yelled.
    “Like I care” Paul replied with his back facing Dawn.

    Dawn told Pilpup to join the rest of the group. She slowly put Pilpup to the ground and he walked back to the rest of the group as for Dawn she walked up to Paul and poked his shoulder. He still didn’t turn around to face her so she got his shoulder and turned his around to face her.

    “And it’s isn’t nice to talk to people if you have your back facing them!” Dawn yelled at Paul.
    “And who are you to say this?” Paul asked in a uncaring manner. “My mother?” Paul replied as he turned away from the young bluenette and continue his way.
    “Come back here!” Dawn yelled. “I’m not finish with you!”

    As Dawn made her step the rope of the old bridge broke and made both Dawn and Paul fall into the river below them. Both Ash and Brock rushed to the scene but all they could see was a broken bridge.

    “Dawn!” they both called out. “Where are you?”
    “Down here!”

    Both boys looked down and saw Dawn hugging Paul as he was holding onto a branch. Dawn was holding to him tightly as he was hugging her with his other hand.

    “You troublesome girl” Paul muttered. “You always have to put me into your troubles don’t you?”
    “Does it look like I like where we are right now?” Dawn yelled. “A place of sudden death!”
    “I rather die then hear your nagging voice” Paul sighed.
    “Even though they are at a place of sudden death they can still fight” Ash sighed. “Guys hold on!” Ash called out. “We will get you two out of there!”
    “Was that a joke?” Paul said.
    “Well I’m not laughing” Dawn added.

    Then suddenly the branch Paul was holding on made a sudden crack. Both knew what this meant. Soon another crack appeared on he branch. Soon the branch broke and both fell to the river below them. Both made a huge splash when both hit the water. Paul was the first to put his head over the water and felt the water pushing him towards a water fall. Paul looked around to hold onto but only could find a rock that was in the middle of the river. Paul wrapped his arms around the rock. As he was holding on the rock he found Dawn unconscious and floating to the water fall. he stretched his arm to reach the unconscious bluenette and grabbed her and dragged her towards his body. Paul reached to his belt where is pokemon was stored and threw a poke ball into the air.

    “Honchkrow come out!” Paul said as he threw the poke ball into the air.
    “Honchkrow!” the bird pokemon said as it was released from it’s poke ball.
    “Honchkrow bring her to that sandbar over there will you?” Paul commanded his pokemon.
    “Honch!” it replied as it grabbed Dawn by it’s feet and flew to the sandbar and put the girl softly down.

    As Honchkrow was going to return to it’s master he saw that he wasn’t there anymore. His master was taken by the tide.

    “Honchkrow!” The bird pokemon panicked. “Honchkrow!”

    The panicking of the bird pokemon made Dawn wake up. Dawn looked around and saw Paul’s Honchkrow in panicked as it’s wings where up calling out his masters name. then Dawn knew what had just happened. She quickly got off the sandy ground and stood up holding her heart.

    “No…” Dawn muttered. “It can’t be….”

    End of chapter three

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    Well you seem to hae Shinji's personality ight that's great :) Keep writing please

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    Ahem. While it is a great story and all, please use double spacing (as in clicking "Enter" twice) as it helps the reader and doesn't confuse them so much.

    I mean, I don't think
    It's that easy to read
    A block of text that is
    Ten lines long and is
    Capable of confusing
    Even some guys I
    Know who can read
    And write some very
    Horrible handwriting.
    If ya need me, I'm probably playing some Mann vs Machine: http://steamcommunity.com/id/optimatum

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    Well even though you're not double spacing your doing an excellent job :)

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    thanks and i might put what Optimatum's idea into mind.

    next chapter coming soon. ^_^

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    What's the odlrivalshipping pairing Battlefreak?

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    Oldrivalshipping is the shipping of green and blue from the pokemon manga pikachu.

    i might add/not add oldrivalshipping. depends on the story line.

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    So you mean the girl trainer from Firered/Leafgreen x Gary

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    Yes. thats right.

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    Cool that's also one of my favorites

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