Thread: Pokemon pen and Paper RPG (help needed)

Okay I'm making a pen and paper RPG, but I need help doing it. I'm good with making the rules (coveting them from the video game n' stuff), but I suck on the writing so I'm asking for help. if there is anything you want to add post it here and I'll put it in the book (well if it's good that is).

I really need help with the fallowing sections:
1. Trainers section. it will talk about what a trainer is and what they do in the world.
2. To become a master section. talking about gyms baggies and how to become a master of pokemon (i want to keep things like the anime not the video game so no elate 4 n' stuff)
3. World and Regions section.

But if there is anything you think needs adding post it and if I like it it's in.
also tell me if you don't get/understand something and I'll try yo fix it.

take a look at what I have so far:
http://www.overzealousgames.com/images/dump/PokemonRPGvr0.1.pdf

Note: Remember this is a fan RPG so there will be no printing of the book and there will be no money involved.

PS this is a work in progress so keep looking at the above link to see all fixes n' all that jazz.

Whoa! This is cool if you can pull it off

You SERIOUSLY need to work on your grammar and spelling if you want anyone to take you as anything resembling a professional. "Gym baggies"? "Elate 4"?

And if it's based on the anime, why have natures? Those don't seem to exist there...while the Elite 4 *does*.

Originally Posted by Blackjack Palazzo

You SERIOUSLY need to work on your grammar and spelling if you want anyone to take you as anything resembling a professional. "Gym baggies"? "Elate 4"?

And if it's based on the anime, why have natures? Those don't seem to exist there...while the Elite 4 *does*.

Yeah i know grammar and spelling i have dyslexia bad so that's why i'm putting it out there. i have all the rules figured out but i'm very bad at the grammar and spelling stuff. so yeah if someone wants to help with that it would help.

I'm very bad at spelling myself, so I get friends to help me with it.

We have a beta thread if you want to find someone to assist you.

I'm good at grammar and spelling. If you need help with that, I can be of assistance.

Originally Posted by Umbreon Freak

I'm good at grammar and spelling. If you need help with that, I can be of assistance.

Yeah that would be nice. Read the thing and post stuff that needs fixing.

BOOK UPDATED
http://www.overzealousgames.com/images/dump/PokemonRPGvr0.1.pdf

I can help you with the gotta catch'em all part, and maybe I can get a few gymleader pictures

Originally Posted by elleryferrer

I can help you with the gotta catch'em all part, and maybe I can get a few gymleader pictures

I have just been garbing place holder images for the time being. The only complete image is the cover so if anyone finds/makes any good images link to them in this thread and I can put em' in the book in a matter of minutes.