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    Discailmer: I do not own the pokemon games they belong to game freak not me.

    Info: This is an idea I thought of. I thought I'd make a fanfiction on the games. The storyline is well the games. This is what you would call a book series on the games. I will be writing the fic with different versions. I am starting with the Red and Blue versions, starting with Red first. Warning the Red and Blue versions are the same story, its just that I'll be changing the names. On this version the main character's name is Red but on Blue his name is Blue. Plus on both versions there will be a few differences like in what pokemon the main character catches, as you find different pokemon on each version, like some pokemon you can catch on one version might not be on the other version. I will be writting Yellow later. It will be totually different from Red and Blue as its a special version. I will also be writing on Green if I can. Based on what version it is and what pokemon's pictured on the game box is what pokemon the main character starts off with. We already know no matter what, on Yellow he will start off with Pikachu. But on Red he will start off with Charmander. On Blue Squirtle. And on Green Bulbasaur. No this isn't the advanced versions these are the normal Gameboy ones, so the new pokemon won't be in them. Only up to 151 pokemon. Plus you normally can't get Mew unless you cheat, so I might not even put Mew in this either. If a lot of you really want the main character to catch Mew though, I might try to work something out here. Ok now onto the fic. I'll let Professor Oak take it from here.

    Intro to game(Below)
    Professor Oak: Hello. Welcome to the world of Pokemon! My name is Oak! People call me the Pokemon Prof! This world is inhabited by creatures called Pokemon!

    (A Nidorino appears.)

    Nidorino: Nido!

    Professor Oak: For some people, Pokemon are pets. Others use them for fights. Myself...I study Pokemon as a profession.

    (The main character appears)

    Professor Oak: Firist, what is your name?

    ???: My name is Red.

    Professor Oak: Right! So your name is Red!

    Red: That's right.

    (Another guy appears.)

    Professor Oak: This is my grandson. He's been your rival since you were a baby...Erm, what is his name again?

    Red: His name's Blue.

    Professor Oak: That's right! I remember now! His name is Blue! (Turns to Red.) Red! Your very own Pokemon legend is about to unfold! A world of dreams and adventures with Pokemon awaits! Let's go!

    (The screen goes blank and this is where our story starts.)

    End of Intro to game.

    PALLET TOWN

    Our story starts off with a young boy named Red. He has just turned 10 years old. He is sitting in front of his TV playing a Super Nintendo game. He notices the time. It seems it is time to get going. He went to his PC and took out a Potion. Red then went downstairs to tell his mother that he's leaving now to start his Pokemon journey. "Mom, I'm leaving now." Red told her. Red's mom turned to him, sighed and replyed with,"Right. All boys leave home some day. It said so on TV. Professor Oak next door, is looking for you."

    "Oh, he is, is he?" Red said. He'd realized he better be going then, since the Professor's looking for him. Red walked out of the house, and walked next door to his rival, Blue's house. There was no one there but Blue's sister Daisy,"Hi Red! Blue is out at Grandpa's lab." She told him. "Alright, see ya later then." Red said leaving and heading for the lab. It was right in front of Blue's house. He walked inside, only to find Blue standing there. "Hey, there Blue. Where's Professor Oak?" Red asked him. Blue turned around,"Yo Red! Gramps isn't around!" He told him. "Oh, alright then. I guess I'll go looking for him somewhere else then," Red said. "You do that!" Blue called back as Red left the lab in search of the professor.

    Red then talked with some people in the lab.

    "Professor Oak is the authority on Pokemon. Many Pokemon trainers hold him in high regard."

    He then talked with Professor Oak's aids,"I study Pokemon as Professor Oak's aid." Red then left the lab walking around town looking for the Professor. 'Where could he be?' He thought. Red then got an idea. Maybe the Professor had gone down Route 1 looking for him. Red decided to check it out. But just as he was about to enter Route 1 a voice from behind him called out,"Hey! Wait! Don't go out!" Startled Red almost jumped 10 feet into the air. He turned around and there was Professor Oak. "Oh, Professor," He said. Professor Oak walked up to Red,"It's unsafe. Wild Pokemon live in tall grass. You need your own Pokemon for your protection. I know! Here, come with me," the Professor explained to Red.

    "Oh ok. Sure I'll come with you back to the lab. Can I get my first pokemon now?" Red asked. "That's the plan." Professor Oak told Red. Red followed the Professor back to his lab. Professor Oak entered first, followed by Red. They both walked up to Blue. By now, Blue was fed up. He was very angry that his grandpa had kept him waiting so long,"Gramps! I'm fed up with waiting!" Blue complained. "Blue? Let me think...Oh, that's right, I told you to come. Just wait." He told his grandson. Blue just sighed, pissed of about having to wait even longer, to get his pokemon.

    The Prof. (I'm saying it this way from now on. Tried of spelling it out all the time) then turned to Red,"Here, Red. There are three pokemon here." He said opening up the balls. Three Pokemon poped out. The first one was a Bulbasaur, then a Squirtle and lastly a Charmander,"Haha! They are inside the Poke Balls. When I was young, I was a serious Pokemon trainer.In my old age, I only have 3 left, but you can have one choose." The Prof. said grinning. Blue turned all red with rage,"Hey! Gramps! What about me?" He complained. The Prof. rolled his eyes,"Be patient! Blue, you can have one too." He asured him. "Yea have a little patience, will ya." Red demanded. "Shup up, and just pick will you!" Blue hollered at Red. "Ok, ok don't have a cow." Red told him.

    Red then looked overeach Pokemon carfully, and decided on the Charmander. Blue then picked the Squirtle. "Ok, see you later Prof. and Blue." Red said but just as he was leaving, Blue called out,"Wait! Red!"

    Red turned around,"What do you want now!?" He asked, kinda annoyed. He wanted to go ahead and get going. "Let's check out our Pokemon. Come on! I'll take you on!" Blue said, walking up to Red,"Find! Your on!" Red said as Charmander ran up beside him,"Char!" It agreed with it's new trainer. The battle then started. "Go get it Charmander!" Red said. Charmander ran out onto the battle field. "Go Squirtle!" Blue comanded. "Squir!" Squirtle said entering the battle field as well. The battle started.

    Since Charmander and Squirtle were only at level 5 they only knew 2 moves. Charmander only knew Scratch and Growl and Squirtle only knew Tackle and Tail Whip. "Ok, Charmander, Scratch attack!" Red called out making the first move. It was a Critical hit! "Yey! Wait ago Charmander!" Red cheered. "It's not over yet Red! Squirtle, use Tail Whip to lower Charmander's Defense!" Blue told his Pokemon. Squirtle used Tail Whip on Charmander. It worked. Charmander's Defense started falling,"Charmander! Hang in there! Fight back with another Scratch attack!" Red called out, encouring his Pokemon. "Char!" Charmander screamed attacking. Squirtle lowered Charmander's Defense some more.

    "You can do it Charmander!" Red called. Just then Squirtle Tackled Charmander lowing it's HP by half,"Hang on!" Red told it. "Ha! That won't help it! This match is mine!" Blue said laughing. "I won't give up, go Charmander Scratch with everything you got!" Red told it. "CHARMANDER!!!!!" Charmander jumped at Squirtle and Scratched it with everything it had. Squirtle then fainted. Blue was in shock about this,"Squirtle return!" He said calling it back into it's ball. Charmander gained 70 EXP Points and grew to level 6.

    Blue was pissed,"What! Unbelieveable! I picked the wrong Pokemon!" But he payed Red 175 points for winning anyway. Red called back Charmander. "Ok! I'll make my Pokemon fight to toughen it up. Red! Gramps! Smell ya later." Blue said as he then left the lab to start training. Red then said bye to Prof. Oak,"Bye Prof." The Prof. gave Red some advice before he left,"Red, raise your young Pokemon by making it fight."

    "Thanks, I will," Red said waving. This was just the beginning of his and Blue's journey as Pokemon trainers.

    A/N: Ok, what do you think of the first part? Yea I know it's stort but hey, this is a book series on the games right, so I can't really add anything that wasn't in the game to this to make it longer, then it would be a fanfic instead of a book series. Anyway, review and maybe I'll hurry up and start posting the Blue version as well.

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    Each new person talking NEEDS to have a new paragraph. You can't cram a multiperson conversation into one paragraph. It makes it almost impossible to read.

    And even in a novelization, you need to have characterization. Why should we care about this? Especially since it's a story we've seen before. What sets this apart from playing the game aside from making it boring?

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    it's not set apart from the game, it's a book on the game

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    By "set apart" I mean "makes unique". Why should we read a dry and boring recap of the game when we could be playing it instead? Give us some reason to read your story.

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    why, I think dry recaps are fun, that's what it's supposed to be is a dry recap of the game

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    Quote Originally Posted by Blackjack Palazzo View Post
    By "set apart" I mean "makes unique". Why should we read a dry and boring recap of the game when we could be playing it instead? Give us some reason to read your story.
    Yeah I agree with Blackjack on this one...

    Yeah, you CAN make a fic based on the games, but it's not really interesting if the dialogue and plot are the EXACT SAME as the game. It's almost like copying and pasting if you will. I'm not saying there's anything wrong with making a game fic, but you should expand your horizons, use your imagination.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Konekodemon View Post
    why, I think dry recaps are fun, that's what it's supposed to be is a dry recap of the game
    Then don't put it in the fic section. Make a walkthrough or something.

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    but it's a walkthrough story not a plain walkthrough

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    Quote Originally Posted by Konekodemon View Post
    but it's a walkthrough story not a plain walkthrough
    *facepalm* J...just stop it. Please. It's a walkthrough "story"?!?! There's no such thing! In fact, even if it is a walkthrough *story*, it shouldn't be in this section. This is the Writer's Corner, not the Walkthrough Center! The Writer's Corner is for FANFICTION, NOT FREAKING WALKTHROUGHS! [/yelling]
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    Exactly. There's nothing to differentiate this story from what you'd find in a guidebook, and it really has to stand alone.

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