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    I warn you, there is a bit of profanity here...

    This peom is about Pokémon, vaugly, as I perfer not to be blunt. Kudos to those who can figure it out.

    This is one of my most recent poems, and was pretty popular when I posted it at SPPf so...

    Truth

    Walking out away from home,

    You seem to forget that you’re alone,

    The same happens all down the street,

    Walking forward to whom they meet,

    Holding these truths, holding these lies


    Fed with what they saw through the window

    Ready and restless to watch a different show

    Soulless, thoughtless unified machines

    Filled with shit they call dreams

    Falling behind, falling away


    River running lie-driven and wide-eyed

    Knife stained in regret, the grudge died

    Dropped down to echoes at the stone

    Freedom fallen a right to be alone

    Just a machine, another machine


    Eyes open to another day,

    In a different light, angle or way

    A soulless, thoughtless alienated machine

    Filled with the pain of a hopeless dream

    Holding these truths, holding these lies

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    I'm not sure if I truly 'get' poetry or not, but this is terrific.

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    Basicly it is about the naivety of trainers, and how one person hates thier dreams because at it he himself failed. He holds a grudge against trainers and tells him that they will phayl..

    I just wrote from a third person.

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    WOW!! This is really good no this is great stuff you have here my friend.
    Look at my Electric Team: ,,, ,
    "Life is so short that it most be lived slowly"
    -Buddhist saying

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