Pocket Monsters: The Battle Quest (7) - Page 7

Page 7 of 10 FirstFirst ... 56789 ... LastLast
Results 91 to 105 of 139
Like Tree33Likes

Thread: Pocket Monsters: The Battle Quest (7)

  1. #91
    Registered User CyberPika's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2011
    Gender
    Male
    Posts
    105

    Default Re: Pocket Monsters: The Battle Quest (6)

    UGHHHHH!!!!!! How do you get some many fans when no one reads my fic!!
    Pika to the mofoing Chu!

  2. #92
    Registered User Chimchar98's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2010
    Gender
    Female
    Location
    Treasure Town
    Posts
    196

    Default Re: Pocket Monsters: The Battle Quest (6)

    Quote Originally Posted by CyberPika View Post
    UGHHHHH!!!!!! How do you get some many fans when no one reads my fic!!
    Some of these fans are people who read this story earlier when it was slightly different, before Legacy reworked it. Why is nobody reading YOUR fic? Because, you hardly ever update your story, and while you have potential, you don't take anyone's advice on how to be better, throwing a tantrum everytime someone criticizes you about your work. The ONLY WAY you can be a better writer, which is what you want, right? is to take their advice, apply it to your story, and learn from it. which you are NOT doing doing at all!

    Take me as an example, I was a horrible writer several years ago, my plots made no sense, my characters were flat, my writing was in script format most of the time, and while my attention to detail was good, my stories still were kinda boring and didn't go anywhere. I had a villain appear out of nowhere with no explanation whatsoever once. Over the year, with lots of practice and advice, I've slowly gotten better in my writing, and while I still consider myself an "amateur" fiction writer, I know for a fact that I'm a LOT better than I was several years ago, because I made an actual effort to be better in my writing.

    That's what you need to do to become a better writer! Take peoples advice, use it, and make an effort to tell an actual story instead of just one paragraph or a few lines of script. People will be willing to read your story, if you actually work on it.

    *sigh* But, you won't listen to me. You obviously never listen to anybody. You'll call me "mean" and "jerkish", and you won't take my advice, nor anyone elses. And if you don't take our advice, you won't become better. If you don't become better, you'll keep getting criticism, and nobody will read your fic. Sure, everyone always has their first failure, but, if they learn from it, they can make sure to fix it next time and try harder for their next story.

    But, I've probably worn out your short attention span already. You probably looked at the first paragraph and said, "you're mean!" and turned away without reading the rest. Why do I even bother telling you this, when you won't listen to a word we say?

  3. #93
    Registered User CyberPika's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2011
    Gender
    Male
    Posts
    105

    Default Re: Pocket Monsters: The Battle Quest (6)

    Ok I get that legacy is better than me but you don't have to keep saying stuff in a mean way besides legacy already told you to stop being mean and saying thing like go away.
    Pika to the mofoing Chu!

  4. #94
    Registered User Chimchar98's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2010
    Gender
    Female
    Location
    Treasure Town
    Posts
    196

    Default Re: Pocket Monsters: The Battle Quest (6)

    Sorry.

    This was written before Legacy said that. I'm not sayin' you're bad, you just need practice. That's all. Seriously, I'm sorry about what I said earlier. I was just frustrated.

  5. #95
    Reader and Writer Legacy's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2009
    Gender
    Male
    Location
    Earth
    Posts
    3,394
    Blog Entries
    65

    Default Re: Pocket Monsters: The Battle Quest (6)

    Hey guys, as much as I love the posts on my fic, let's keep the discussion about the story :)

  6. #96
    Registered User Chimchar98's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2010
    Gender
    Female
    Location
    Treasure Town
    Posts
    196

    Default Re: Pocket Monsters: The Battle Quest (6)

    *nods* Right!

    Hmmm... that exploding Silph Co. building wouldn't have a connection to a certain other building exploding on a certain island, would it?
    Legacy likes this.

  7. #97
    Reader and Writer Legacy's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2009
    Gender
    Male
    Location
    Earth
    Posts
    3,394
    Blog Entries
    65

    Default Re: Pocket Monsters: The Battle Quest (6)

    Quote Originally Posted by Chimchar98 View Post
    *nods* Right!

    Hmmm... that exploding Silph Co. building wouldn't have a connection to a certain other building exploding on a certain island, would it?
    What do you mean?

  8. #98
    Yeezy taught me The Booty Warrior's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2009
    Gender
    Male
    Location
    In a land of peace
    Posts
    304
    Blog Entries
    64

    Default Re: Pocket Monsters: The Battle Quest (6)

    Quote Originally Posted by Legacy View Post
    What do you mean?
    Sounds like he's referring to New Island from the movie?
    "I never sleep, 'cause sleep is the cousin of death." - Nasir bin Olu Dara Jones, N.Y. State of Mind

  9. #99
    Reader and Writer Legacy's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2009
    Gender
    Male
    Location
    Earth
    Posts
    3,394
    Blog Entries
    65

    Default Re: Pocket Monsters: The Battle Quest (6)

    Quote Originally Posted by The Booty Warrior View Post
    Sounds like he's referring to New Island from the movie?
    Oh! Haha, sorry I'm slow. But I guess my confused response gives you an answer to your question :)

    Thanks, Booty Warrior.

  10. #100
    Yeezy taught me The Booty Warrior's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2009
    Gender
    Male
    Location
    In a land of peace
    Posts
    304
    Blog Entries
    64

    Default Re: Pocket Monsters: The Battle Quest (6)

    Quote Originally Posted by Legacy View Post
    Oh! Haha, sorry I'm slow. But I guess my confused response gives you an answer to your question :)

    Thanks, Booty Warrior.
    Well, you can just call me "Booty". Rolls off the tongue much faster.

    Welcome. Though, now that I think about it. Maybe he's actually referring to the Burned Mansion on Cinnibar Island?
    "I never sleep, 'cause sleep is the cousin of death." - Nasir bin Olu Dara Jones, N.Y. State of Mind

  11. #101
    Reader and Writer Legacy's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2009
    Gender
    Male
    Location
    Earth
    Posts
    3,394
    Blog Entries
    65

    Default Re: Pocket Monsters: The Battle Quest (6)

    Quote Originally Posted by The Booty Warrior View Post
    Well, you can just call me "Booty". Rolls off the tongue much faster.

    Welcome. Though, now that I think about it. Maybe he's actually referring to the Burned Mansion on Cinnibar Island?
    Haha, either way, the Silph facility explosion does not have any direct correlation to anything in the canon universe. Aside from several subtle odes to the canon world here and there that the attentive reader may or may not notice, Pocket Monsters is mostly completely separate from the anime/games/manga.

    Thanks for reading though. And Booty, I left a review on your fic.

  12. #102
    Registered User Chimchar98's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2010
    Gender
    Female
    Location
    Treasure Town
    Posts
    196

    Default Re: Pocket Monsters: The Battle Quest (6)

    Oh well. I tried.

    oh, and Booty Warrior? I'm a girl.

  13. #103
    Yeezy taught me The Booty Warrior's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2009
    Gender
    Male
    Location
    In a land of peace
    Posts
    304
    Blog Entries
    64

    Default Re: Pocket Monsters: The Battle Quest (6)

    Quote Originally Posted by Legacy View Post
    Haha, either way, the Silph facility explosion does not have any direct correlation to anything in the canon universe. Aside from several subtle odes to the canon world here and there that the attentive reader may or may not notice, Pocket Monsters is mostly completely separate from the anime/games/manga.

    Thanks for reading though. And Booty, I left a review on your fic.
    Ah, I see. Well, I guess you weren't kidding when you said it's going to be all-new. I am impressed, and now further intrigued at this building explosion.

    And thanks for the review. Much appreciated. ^^


    Quote Originally Posted by Chimchar98 View Post
    Oh well. I tried.

    oh, and Booty Warrior? I'm a girl.
    Oh, dear me. I apologize. I'd seen your gender icon before, but I'd forgotten to internalize it. My bad. ^^;
    "I never sleep, 'cause sleep is the cousin of death." - Nasir bin Olu Dara Jones, N.Y. State of Mind

  14. #104
    The Dimension Wizard Flaze's Avatar Moderator
    Join Date
    Sep 2008
    Gender
    Male
    Location
    Why do you care
    Posts
    59,609
    Blog Entries
    151
    Add Flaze on Facebook
    Follow Flaze on Tumblr Visit Flaze's Youtube Channel

    Default Re: Pocket Monsters: The Battle Quest (6)

    Quote Originally Posted by Chimchar98 View Post
    *nods* Right!

    Hmmm... that exploding Silph Co. building wouldn't have a connection to a certain other building exploding on a certain island, would it?
    World Trade Center right? that's the feeling I got too well actually I mentioned it back in the first Pocket Monsters fic.

  15. #105
    CEO of the Monsters Lugion's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2010
    Gender
    Male
    Location
    Texas
    Posts
    1,712
    Blog Entries
    99

    Default Re: Pocket Monsters: The Battle Quest (6)

    Quote Originally Posted by Stellar Haze View Post
    World Trade Center right? that's the feeling I got too well actually I mentioned it back in the first Pocket Monsters fic.
    No, I'm pretty sure he was referring to the Pokémon Mansion, but I got the same feeling as well.

Page 7 of 10 FirstFirst ... 56789 ... LastLast

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •