Yes! I am replying! Great work! I'd suggest longer chapters, but that's because I'm used to writing tome-sized ones meself.
I haven't seen the second movie yet, but I think I know of the character Jiri, and you're staying true to him, so kudos! One of the hardest things to do (and believe me, I know) when writing a fanfic that involves/revolves around characters from the animé is staying true to their original essence, and I believe that’s what you do, so bravo.
Not much else to say, really. I’m looking forward to seeing how you will tell the story from here, so don’t delay Chapter Five too long. Halloween is a little far away for my liking.
Once again, great work.
~Rocky “Whoop! There it is!” Cliffs