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    *cackle* No, I wouldn't want to get on his bad side. I just have no life, that's how.

    biiiiiiii!

    Um...you all didn't hear that, did you?

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    <_<
    >___>

    *will NOT break into horrible dub end credits song*

    Oh, why not. "There's no time to press rewind, let's Cele-B-R-A-T-E!"

    Aw crap, I've unleashed the horror. *hides*

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    Dude, I haven't seen the 4th movie dub yet. *cackle*

    However, I will say this, speaking of the dubs of the movies, and to bring this slightly more on topic...

    Jiri's dub voice is *SEXAH!* Whee!

    And about chapter 4? It *Will* be done by my birthday, June 13, ok?

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    I've edited the first and second chapters to change his parents' nickname for him...

    btw--I've started planning out chapter 4...

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    Thank you all for reading this fic. I have no idea for chapter 5, only that I *will* write it. Now then, be good little fans and review. I'm off to bed. And...tell me anything that needs proofing, I didn't have the chance to show it to anyone.





    ...i have never liked the water...

    from my earliest memories, the water has been my downfall...

    right now i can feel the water around me, pulling me farther and farther away from the world, and I can feel the white wings around me, just like before...

    ...like before...

    mother never really did believe me...she clung to her belief of there being good in us all...in her world, she never believed that someone could do something like that...

    ...perhaps her world was like this...

    ...they held me down, beneath the water...i struggled in vain, out of reflex. they were going to kill me, i knew that, and gave in.

    and then i saw it. white wings coming to me. i knew not if it was a demon or an angel, but it was coming to take me away from there, far away.

    the great bird calmed me, took me in its wings as the breath left me, and I could feel the world melting away. death had no fear for me, not as long as this creature held me.

    there was silence, and peace, and warmth, and stillness...

    and then the world returned.

    i was no longer beneath the waves, in the wings of the white bird. instead, i was in the chair by the fireplace, a blanket wrapped around me. for a brief second, i thought i had imagined it, but then i felt the water still on my skin.

    mother told me there were many spirits of the water, but my tale of a white bird perplexed her. perhaps i had imagined it after all, imagined the safety it provided, the respite from a cruel world.

    despite this, i have kept the image of the bird in my heart. perhaps one day i shall see it again, if only in a dream.

    i am beginning to awaken. there is a calm about this place, as different as it is from the world beneath the waves. so this is where father has taken me; this is my new home.

    it is like the water. this time, there will be no white bird to save me.


    When I came to, in my father's home, the first thing I heard were the waves of the ocean.
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    *chills* Wow. These are the shortest yet most effective chapters of any fic I've read. At last, the obsession takes root... and Jiri finally realizes he is far more significant than other ordinary humans.

    Ah, a man after my own heart. *g*

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    *GREAT* part Blacky. Short, but even as short as it is, the wait was worth it just for this part - a defining part for Jiri's character.

    Great job .
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    Short works for me...

    And no, I have no target date for chapter 5. Let's say Halloween, nice deadline, ne?

    Rock, I gave someone chills...

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    *breaks out into suppy impression*
    I wanna read more! MORE! MOOOOORRRREEEE!
    Please write more! i need mroe sexy jiddy @o@(
    *mysty goes nuts*


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    First you have to tell me who "Suppy" is...

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    The evil kero-like cat in Cardcaptor sakura
    the one who gets sugar high. I love suppy.(spinel sun)


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    Gotcha.

    *gets an image of Jiri as Clow Reed*

    Huh. Should I be bothered that I could see that?

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    oh, this is a good fic, and here;'s that picture I mentioned..


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    Sweet, but you should really put that in another topic, like make one for "Nifty Japanese Toys And How To Get Them" or something

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    sure thing...I'll do that soon


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