Thread: Motherhood of some Legendaries

I know that in the games that legendary pokemon like Palkia and Lugia are
gender-less. But in this story they do get to have genders that I pick for them.
I took this story and made it soapy. General Hospital eat your hearts out!


Here's the story:

Palkia goes to visit Giratina in her Distort World and had to look for her and heard
a painful roar coming from Giratina.

" Giratina where are you? I'm here for a visit with you."

Later she heard Giratina cry. Palkia kept looking for her when she saw Giratina
rared up backwards. Giratina let out another roar.

"Where's Arceus? He did this to me! He told me he had a new world to make
and never came back. Darn that hurts! Can you please stay. OH NO!

Palkia reached and rubbed Giratina on the back and got concerned.

"You'll be fine I'm here to help. You look you will have your little one soon.
I didn't know that we could have babies. You are proving that maybe I can
have one someday."

Giratina let out another roar as Palkia rubbed her back and stomach.
Palkia reached for her cell phone and called Lugia.

"Hello! Lugia this is Palkia. Can we have a talk about a certain matter?
Wait for me at Goldenrod City park. It's important!"

"Okay palkia! I'll be waiting for you. Bye!"

(To be continued)

Giratina hugged Palkia with her wings and roared while hanging on.
Soon the baby was born and it looked like a miniture version of Giratina.

"Giratina you did it! It's beautiful!"

Palkia was in tears as she gave the baby to it's mom.

Meanwhile, in the time dimension, Dialga was with her secret
husband when all of the sudden she felt a chill in her spine.

"Hugh? Something has happened to Giratina in her Distorted World.
I felt it."

"Dialga, go for a visit. I will still be here. I know that you are
a busy girl controling time."

The phone rings.

"Dialga, this is Palkia. Giratina has had a baby and she says it
belongs to Arceus. I though you would like to know. Both mother
and child is doing good. The baby looks just like Giratina. Well,
goodbye for now."

(to be continued) <methodistgirl>

Does anyone want to discuss what I have so far?
judy tooley

Eh... I'm not sure I understand... is this going somewhere? There's not much to this at all. If you're serious about this, you should look at some of the chapter fics posted by others. Try to model somewhat by the length of the chapters and the way the stories flow.

Are you serious about getting your idea out in writing?

I was making this my answer to Life of the Legendaries. I have more to this story that will continue.
methodistgirl

Might i suggest that you look at how other fics are structured? You have ideas but you haven't really portrayed them properly, just sink a bit more time into it and you'll be fine.

Palkia calls Lugia on her cell phone.

"Lugia, I need to discuss something with you.
Were can we meet? I don't know the Johto
Region too well. But I will look for you if you
give me a certain place to go."

"Okay we will talk. I will meet you at the
park near Goldenrod City."

"I will be right there! Wait for me I need to
ask you for something."

"Okay hotshot! I will be waiting right for you."

Minutes later she finds him at the park outside
of Goldenrod City playing with the water fountain.

"Here I am! Can we go to a place that's more
private? I have something I need to ask and not
at this crowded place."

"Okay. I will take you to my cave."

When they got there she gave him a big kiss.

"Lugia, I want a baby! Since I helped Giratina
with it's baby, I want one."

"I think we can do that. How much do you
love me?"

"I will show you how much."

Palkia reached and kissed him and rubbed his
wings and his blue ones.

"My you are serious about it. Aren't you?
Okay you asked for it. We can try to start a
baby for you. Let's see if we can."