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    This fic was the first one that I wrote in non-script format to be posted on the net. It was created more than a year ago and is actually finished on the Serebii forums. (So, those of you who are impatient to see the ending can go there.)

    Now, let me give you a little background in this story, as without this, the story will be a bit confusing in it's entirity.

    This is actually a supposed sequal of a currently unfinished (and will probably be forever unfinished.) story called "In the Voice of A Gypsy" by WaterEevee of Serebii. The current author of the prequel shared with me several pieces of upcoming work that she had planned, but never got to finish. (Or post for that matter.) The pieces I gathered from the story are written within the first chapter to help you in clearing up everything.

    A charcter you will come to know quite well in this story is Pik. She is not my own original creation, but the creation of WaterEevee, who I give full credit to for the charcter. I was given full 100% permission to use her and the prequel info for this story, so understand that there is no plagraism whatsoever in this story.

    The original story was created back in July 2004 and finished by November 2004. So understand that somethings were not even planned of back then. All pokemon within that weren't eveloved by a certian time are supposed evelution periods when originally created. So understand that they have every single right to be off.

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    Next up, I'll tell you about a nessecity I put into this fic.

    For those of you who are serious about the length of the chapter, I have provied it to you. This way, there is no need to copy and paste it to find out how long it really is. However, you are free to do so if you want to enjoy the story at anytime offline.

    The Special Thanks is provided for those who truly deserve it. The fic is a piece of work I couldn't do alone. Those who I give full credit to deserve it completely.

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    Okay, with that out of the way, it's time for the real stuff.

    This fanfic is made only for the purpose of entertainment. I do not seek money or fandom as a purpose for this fic. However, I would like it for you to post if you read it and give me whatever comments you feel are nessacary.

    Please do not flame me and give me a low star rating for putting in a shipping you don't like into the fic. It is highly immature and unnessacary.

    I do not own Pokemon or any of its related content. It is the sole property of Nintendo, Game Freak, Creatures Inc. and TV-Tokyo Productions. All of which deserve full credit for providing the nessacary fandom of this story.

    I also give full credit to WaterEevee of Serebii, for without her, this story would not be made possible to exist.

    This fic contains multiple accounts of sexual content. However, it is HIGHLY underdescribed to the point where you only know it happened. So, the rating is highly acceptable in that jurisdiction

    This fic holds no action battles and has nothing but romance in it. If you are not into that thing, chances are that this fic isn't for you.

    If you have any questions about this fic please feel free to post, and I'll try my best to answer it so you can understand everything.

    If you are one who is impatient, and wants to see the rest of the story before its posted, click here.

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    Now, with all that out of the way, here we go.

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    Misty's Miracle.

    Summary: Ash and Misty have been married for some time, and Misty wants to have kids. However, after failing at even becoming pregnant for so long, they decide to find out what's wrong. When Misty discovers that she has a rare condition that makes it increadably hard for her to become pregnant, and has a good chance at killing the baby if she does, how will she react? And, if she does become pregnant, will the baby survive?

    Chapter 1

    Length: 2.85 pages.

    Our story begins in Pewter City. Here, in the city of stone, a black spike haired man, who is the world famous Pokemon Breeder, known as Brock, is getting married. He is getting married to Suise, a white woman with long dark green hair.

    Brock had met Suise a long time ago in a place called Scissor Street. There, she ran her own Pokemon Salon, that was dedicated to making pokemon look beautiful on the inside. Susie was amazed by Brock’s knowledge of Pokemon care, and she gave him her beloved Vulpix, a fox kit Pokemon with six tails. A few years later, they met again. At that point, Susie had decided to enter Vulpix into a beauty contest. It wasn’t until five years after that, that they met up again. At that time, Ash, a tanned, black hair man, who was also at the wedding, had just become the Pokemon Master of the world. Susie didn’t recognize Brock right away, but Vupix did. It didn’t take long after Vulpix had jumped into Brock’s arms for Susie to realize just who she was looking at. In fact, Brock had grown a good amount of a beard, which is why Susie didn’t recognize him. They were dating since.

    It is now 3 years after they met, and it’s hard to believe that Susie was marrying Brock. In fact, it was hard to believe that any woman would marry Brock, because of the way he acted in front of pretty girls. It was just down right embarrassing with the way he flirted with them. But there was just something that Susie couldn’t help but love him about. In fact, Brock had asked Susie to marry him 8 months ago. Brock had decided to shave off his beard for this special day.

    Among the audience, were some of his best friends. Ash, in a black and white tux, Misty, a red haired girl, who was Ash’s wife, who is also a Water Pokemon master, dressed in a cascade blue, sleeveless, one piece dress, and two Pikachu, medium sized yellow rat Pokemon. Ash’s Pikachu, who was male, only having a black bow tie on, he has had since he started his journey. But Misty, who’s Pikachu was female, nicknamed Pik, wearing only a pink bow in her hair, she has had hers since a time when Ash and Misty were separated, because of duties she had to do at the gym, while her sisters were away on a trip around the world. Misty had found Pik in the basement of the gym, all hurt and covered in dirt. In fact, with how dirty she was, Misty didn’t recognize what pokemon she was, until she got her all cleaned up. She was only going to take care of it for a few weeks, just until she got her strength back, then release her back into the wild. But by that time, they had grown so attached to each other, that Misty decided to keep Pik, but never really use her for battle, as Pik didn’t like that.

    A few months after that, Pikachu met Pik at a fair, and was instantly love struck. It was as if, he had never seen such a more beautiful creature in the entire world. Ash had run into Misty at the time, and ended up knocking her over. After she introduced Pik, she noticed the way Pikachu was looking at Pik, and decided that her and Ash should leave Pikachu and Pik alone for a while. They became friends really fast, so fast, it was as if they had met somewhere before, but they didn’t know where.

    Ash and Misty have been married for 18 months. He confessed his love to her during the fair that he met Pik at. She was about to die for a third time. It was either life or death. Misty said she couldn’t hold on when she feel off a cliff. Ash begged her not to let go, and told her right then and there that he loved her. That there was no one else in the world who he would want to be with in the end. Hearing this somehow gave Misty the strength to pull herself up. After Misty had gotten up, she took time to sink in everything that had already happened. She then told Ash that she has always loved him, but never had the courage to tell him, because she was afraid that it would destroy their friendship that meant so much to her. Ash also confessed that he had had feelings for her since he didn’t know when. However, he was too focused on Pokemon to even notice. They shared their first kiss right then and there.

    Later, after he had beaten all of the leagues in the world, and had become Pokemon Master, he asked Misty to marry him. She happily accepted. Also, when they got married, Pikachu and Pik did too. A little double wedding sort of thing.

    Among the audience also, was May, a light skinned, long brown haired girl, now a master at Pokemon coordinating, and Max, a black-haired teen with glasses, who was now the champ of the Kanto league.

    Also with the audience was a green haired man named Drew, who May was getting married to. May had met Drew a long time ago. They were both into Pokemon coordinating, and Drew wanted to be the best. He always showed that he had feelings for her in one way or another. It took some time for May to put all of the clues together, and she eventually figured it out. She figured it out when it was the championship for the #1 Pokemon Coordinator. It was a battle between May and Drew. The battle was the fiercest they ever had. In the end, amazingly, both their pokemon fell at the exact same time, resulting in a tie. After that, they had celebrated their victory at becoming #1, and that’s when May told Drew that she had figured out that he had been telling her all along in his own way, that he really likes her, and she confessed that she really liked him too. They were going out after that, and now, a marriage was on the way.

    The priest had just finished, making it official that Brock and Susie were husband and wife. They sealed it with a passionate kiss.

    We now meet at the scene of Ash and Misty driving back home to Cerulean City. Ash had decided to live with Misty at her home town, since she was still called to the gym from time to time, and she didn’t want to be far from there. Misty was in deep thought, as they were driving home in Ash’s Cadillac. Pikachu and Pik were sound asleep in the back, lying on each other with their heads touching, as it was late. Misty decided to have a serious conversation with Ash.

    “Ash,” Misty began, getting Ash’s attention, “how long have we been married?”

    “Eighteen months.” Ash answered her, ”Why?”

    “Well, I was thinking, don’t you think it’s about time we started having kids?”

    “Misty, we’ve been through this before. You know how little of a father figure I had, being raised only by my mom. I have no idea of how to be a good father. Which is why I’m taking those parenting classes. After I graduate from that, then we can have kids.”

    “But that just doesn’t feel soon enough.” Misty protested, “Besides, you’ve had tons of practice with plenty of baby pokemon, right?”

    “Yeah, but a child is completely different from a Pokemon.”

    “I know, but I don’t want to wait until you graduate.” Misty’s eyes started filling with tears.

    Ash then pulled the car off the road, and looked over at Misty.

    “Misty,” He said, using his two fingers to make Misty look at him. “If you really feel that strongly about it, then... I think we should too.”

    Misty gave Ash a kiss as if to say thank you. “How soon can we start?” She asked.

    “Soon.” He answered. “We won’t have the strength to do so tonight, and I want us to be ready for it.”

    Ash and Misty kiss once more.

    “Do you promise?” Misty asked.

    “I promise.”

    They give one final kiss as if to seal the promise, before driving back home to Cerulean City.

    ---End Chapter 1---

    Special Thanks:

    You: For reading and reviewing it.

    Me: For making it.

    WaterEevee: She was the one who came up with Pik. She is from the story, "In the Voice of A Gypsy." I also got full permission to use Pik in this story.

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    There you go! Originally as is when I posted it at Serebii.

    Remember, go to the link I provided a bit earlier if you are impatient to read the rest of the story.

    Now, I await your comments on this.

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    No comments? No problem.

    Now, the next few chapters is a simple day to day process thing of where multiple attempts of having the "special moment" end up failing for certian reasons. You'd be surprised by my imagination.

    Anyways, here it is, Chapter 2. (Those who are serious about length, don't worry, it's longer.) :)

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    Misty's Miracle

    Summary: Ash and Misty have been married for some time, and Misty wants to have kids. However, after failing at even becoming pregnant for so long, they decide to find out what's wrong. When Misty discovers that she has a rare condition that makes it increadably hard for her to become pregnant, and has a good chance at killing the baby if she does, how will she react? And, if she does become pregnant, will the baby survive?

    Chapter 2

    Note: In this chapter, and upcoming ones, I many times don't have what the pokemon said of how we hear it, just the translation. It is indicated in (). However, some are quite obvious, or mean too many things with a certian situation, so I just don't translate those.

    Length: 7.5 pages.

    The next day...

    In a few days, Ash and Misty will be going to the wedding of May and Drew. Today, they are out getting gifts for the wedding. They are now in the car with Pikachu and Pik, ready to drive off to the mall. As they are, Pikachu and Pik are talking to each other.

    (“So, what do you think is a good present for Delcatty and Beautifly?”) Pik asks Pikachu, knowing how good of friends he is with them.

    (“Hmm,) Pikachu answers, (“Let me think.”)

    At this point, Ash is having a hard time figuring out what to get Drew, as he didn’t end up knowing much about him. May was easy for him, as she was with him throughout his whole Houen journey, he knew exactly what to get her, but Drew just seemed to be so tough to figure out.

    “There it is, the Cerulean Mall!” Misty said, interrupting Ash’s thoughts.

    Ash pulled into the parking lot. The mall was much bigger than many other malls were. It looked pretty ordinary on the outside, except for the tetrahedron shaped roof at the center of it, making it one of the most unique, one floor only, malls around. Inside, the hallway had cascade blue tiles, a white painted wall, and a glass roof throughout the whole mall. They both headed to the center of the mall, with their respected Pikachu on their shoulder. They stopped at the center, and their respected Pikachu jumped off.

    The center of the mall was just a small place, where kids could participate in holiday events, it had a clock at one of the corners of it. It also had a red carpet at the place, as it elevated down to the center, with stairs and wheelchair walkways.

    “Okay Misty, this is where we split up to look for presents for May and Drew.” Ash said.

    “Okay Ash.” Said Misty in an agreeing tone.

    “We’ll meet at the food court in two hours, and have lunch there, got it?”

    “Got it, Ash.”

    (“You got that Pik?”) Pikachu asks.

    (“I sure do.”) Answers Pik.

    Misty then gives Ash a kiss on the cheek as she walks off. Ash is just standing there blushing, and staring at her, rubbing his kissed cheek gently, as she walks off. He then looks down at Pikachu.

    “Let’s get going Pikachu.” Says Ash.

    Pikachu just responded to that with a simple, “Pikachu.”

    Ash was having a hard time finding the right stores to go to, as he hadn’t been to the mall much. He was at least smart enough to use the map. As for Misty, she knew the mall like the back of her hand, as she had been there so many times with her sisters when she was younger. Though she wasn’t the one getting gifts at the time, and just ended up being the one carrying them.

    Misty had just gotten done getting a present for May, and decided to help Pik in finding gifts for May and Drew’s Pokemon. She bends down to Pik, who was carrying a gift she thought May would like, which she was having trouble with, as the bag was about the size of her. Misty did offer to help, but Pik said she could handle it.

    “So, where should we go to get presents for the Pokemon.”

    Pik sets the bag down, and starts looking around in random directions. Then, nearby, she spots something.

    (“’The Pokemon Toy Store’, over there.”) She says, pointing to the nearby toy store.

    They walk into the toy store. It was huge! The place was practically filled with toys for pokemon on every single shelf, a few were empty, but were immediately getting restocked with new toys. Many of the toys had the picture of what pokemon they were meant for on them, just in case the trainer didn’t know what kind of toy a certain pokemon would like. As they were looking around, Pik spots a toy with that of a cat with a purple mane and tail on it. Looking at it, and knowing just how much one pokemon loved to play with stuff like that, she knew just who it would be perfect for. She then calls for Misty.

    (“Hey, Misty! Over here!”) She shouts in Misty’s direction.

    Misty runs over as fast as she can towards Pik. “What is it, Pik?” She asks.

    Pik then points to the object that she was looking at that was out of her reach. (“Up there!”)

    Misty grabs the object, and sees the picture of Delcatty on it. “You think Delcatty will like this?”

    (“I know she will”)

    “Okay, we’ll get it. Let’s see what else we can find.”

    They soon get done, and after that, Misty takes a look at her watch, and discovers that it’s close to the time to meet Ash at the food court. She heads over there to meet Ash.

    At about the same time, Ash had just gotten done with shopping for May. He spent alot of time finding the perfect one for her, knowing just how important their friendship was. He shows the gift to Pikachu while walking to the food court.

    “What do you think, Pikachu? Think May will like it?” He asks Pikachu.

    (“Yea, she’ll love it!”) Then Pikachu starts thinking, (‘But what will Misty say about it?’)

    They soon arrive at the food court, and get their food. Misty, who had already gotten her food and found a spot for them, called over to Ash. They sit down with her, and start eating.

    “So, what gifts did you get?” Misty says, part way through the meal.

    “Well, I got this pretty necklace for May.” He says, showing May’s present.

    The necklace was a very pretty golden chain necklace, that hand the symbol of friendship hanging from it.

    “That’s a very pretty necklace.” She says with an evil smirk.

    “Don’t give me that look.” Ash says noticing.

    “What?” She said, trying to hide it.

    “You’re jealous, aren’t you?”

    “No!”

    “C’mon! You’re jealous that I got May such a nice present.”

    “No!!”

    “Admit it!!”

    “I’m not jealous!”

    “Are too!”

    “Are not!”

    “Are too!”

    “Are not!”

    Are too! Are too! Are too!”

    “Okay, okay! I’m jealous alright!?” She says, finally admitting it. She learned over the years with him, that it was easier to sometimes admit it, and not argue so much. “But don’t think you’ll be getting anything special from me tonight.”

    She obviously wanted to do a little something with him, but now, she wasn’t in the mood.

    “Fine!” He says, noticing what he just lost to do with her for that night. “But I’ve got something extra special planned for our anniversary coming in six months.” He said, trying to earn the privilege back.

    “What is it?” Misty asked in a begging tone, being surprised that he already had something planned.

    “It’s a surprise.”

    “Tell me!”

    “If I told you would it be a surprise?”

    “C’mon! Tell me!”

    “You want to be spoiled?”

    “Yes!!”

    “Well then, maybe I’ll just return the surprise.”

    “Well then you’re defiantly not getting anything special from me tonight, Mr. Ash Ketchum!”

    Ash then noticed that he had completely lost the privilege, and just went back to eating his meal.

    At this point, Pikachu and Pik were having a conversation of their own.

    (“So, what did you get the Pokemon?”) Pikachu asked Pik.

    (“Well,”) she says while pulling out the ball she got earlier, (“I got this ball for Delcatty.”)

    (“She’ll absolutely love that!”) He said with a chuckle. (“She used to play with those all the time when she was practicing for contests.”)

    (“So, what did you get for the Pokemon?”)

    (“Well, you see, with me and Ash spending so much time looking for a present for May, we haven’t had anytime to check the stores for Pokemon yet.”) Pikachu said with a sweatdrop, being a bit embarrassed, which was obvious with the fact that he was blushing.

    (“Well, you’d better get them something good, or they’ll be quite upset, and so will I.”) She said, hinting him with something she had told him this morning.

    Pikachu obviously caught the hint, but wanted to play along.

    (“Well then, just to show you how sorry I am, I promise to get you something nice.”) He said.

    (“You don’t have to do that.”) She said, knowing he was playing along.

    (“Trust me, you’ll love it.”)

    (“Okay, I’ll be waiting.”)

    With that, Pikachu and Pik go back to eating their food. Leaving Pik with curious thoughts about what she would get.

    After lunch, Ash and Misty continue shopping. Ash eventually finds a present for Drew, and after that, starts shopping for the Pokemon. Pikachu knew that after they were done, he would have to tell Ash, just to get Pik something nice.

    It was now one and a half hours after lunch, and Ash and Pikachu had just gotten done shopping for the Pokemon, or so Ash thinks.

    “Well, I guess we’re done.” Ash said.

    (“Well, not quite.”) He said, being a bit embarrassed to tell Ash.

    “What do you mean, Pikachu?” asked Ash.

    (“Well, during lunch, I kinda promised Pik that I’d get her something nice.”)

    “How come?”

    Pikachu finally gives in, and tells Ash why he’s getting Pik a gift.

    (“Well, today just happens to be Pik’s birthday. She just reminded me this morning. I’ve got nothing for her, and she knows it. So, I’m in a bit of a jam.”) He finally confessed.

    “Wow, you really are in a jam, huh? Okay, let’s find Pik a birthday present.”

    “Pikachu!” Pikachu says all happy.

    So they head out, looking for a birthday present for Pik. They soon come to a crafts store, and go inside. While looking, Pikachu finds the perfect thing.

    Pikachu gasps when he sees it. (“Ash! Over here!”)

    Ash runs up to Pikachu. “What is it, Pikachu?”

    (“Look, it’s perfect!”) Pikachu says, pointing to the object.

    Ash grabs the object and looks at it. “You really think she’ll like this, Pikachu?”

    (“I just know she’ll love it! She has a thing for that sort of thing.”)

    “Okay, we’ll buy it.”

    Ash then walks up to the teller and hands the gift to her. While the teller rings up the gift, he asks her to gift wrap it. The teller does so, and gives the newly wrapped present to Ash. Ash and Pikachu then walk out of the store, and immediately run into Misty and Pik. Ash quickly bags Pik’s gift when he sees them.

    “So, do we have everything?” Misty asks Ash.

    “Yep, I just got done.” Ash answers her.

    “Okay then, let’s get going.”

    “Uh, Misty, a minute alone, without the Pokemon?”

    Misty just nods yes, as she is led away by Ash.

    (“So, what did you get me?”) Pik asks Pikachu, anxiously wanting to know.

    (“It’s a surprise.”) Pikachu says to Pik, who just gives him a playful jealous look, obviously wanting to be spoiled.

    Meanwhile, Ash was whispering something to Misty.

    “Did you know that today is Pik’s birthday?” Ash asks Misty.

    “Yea, she told me a few days ago. We’re planning to go out for it. Why?” Misty asks.

    “Well, the thing is, she just reminded Pikachu of it today, and he didn’t have anything for her, and she knew.”

    “Uh-oh!”

    “Yea, but you don’t have to worry, everything’s taken care of now. We found a gift for her.”

    “That’s good.” She said with a smile. “What did you get her?”

    “You’ll see, Misty. You’ll see.”

    Later that night, they were all dressed up, and heading out to the restaurant that Misty picked for Pik’s birthday. Ash was dressed in a light blue vest, with a dark blue jacket covering it, a red bow tie, and black pants to complete it. Misty was dressed in a one piece red, sleeveless dress, with a fluffy white fur near the top, and having jewels in her hair. (Check my Avatar if you’re having trouble.) Pikachu and Pik weren’t dressed up at all. Pik didn’t need to be dressed up for anyone to tell she was a girl. You could easily tell by just noticing her “longer-than-other-Pikachu” fur. Misty then sees the restaurant.

    “Over there! That’s where we’re going tonight!” She said pointing towards it.

    “The ‘Cafe ala Pokemon’?” He asked seeing it.

    “That’s the one.”

    They pulled into the parking lot. The “Cafe ala Pokemon” is a fancy restaurant, that’s designed for trainers on dates with their pokemon. It has a red carpet, that is covered with 60 glass tables, which have a red tablecloth on every single one. Along with 4 wooden chairs surrounding each of the tables. Finishing it off with a single red rose inside a glass vase. All of the waiters and hosts wore black and white tuxedoes.

    A host showed Ash, Misty, Pikachu, and Pik to their table. They brought some booster seats for Pikachu and Pik. Before the host left, Misty informed him secretly that it was Pik’s birthday. The host gave Misty a nod, understanding what she said, and went into the kitchen to inform the chefs.

    Soon, a waiter came and took their order. They soon get their food, and enjoy their meal. After they got done, one of the chefs, dressed all in white, came out of the kitchen with a piece of chocolate cake, all prepared for Pik’s birthday. Pik just gave a surprised gasp when she saw it.

    “Go ahead Pik, make a wish.” Misty said to Pik.

    It didn’t take long for Pik to think of a wish and blow out the candle.

    “Okay Pikachu, give Pik the present you got for her.” Ash said handing the wrapped box to Pikachu.

    Pikachu then puts the present in front of Pik. (“Here you go!”) He said with a smile.

    (“Hmm,”) Pik said, shaking the present. (“What could it be?”) She then unwraps the present, revealing a small box. She then opens the box. Pik is speechless with the present she sees.

    Inside the box was the most beautiful flower bracelet she had ever seen in her entire life. Not to mention the only one. It was made with a mixture of rainbow colored flowers, that were arranged in such a way, that any girl would like it. Dispite the fact that it was wrapped in plastic, it still kept it’s beauty. The best thing was, that it was just Pik’s size too.

    Pik takes the bracelet out of the box, hugging it. (“I love it!”) She then holds it up to Pikachu. (“Put it on me?”) She asks Pikachu.

    Pikachu happily puts the bracelet on Pik, and receives a hug and a peck on the cheek as a thank you, which came to another, much longer hug.

    The waiter then came with the bill for the meal. Ash happily paid for it with his MasterCard. He also asked for a box, seeing as how Pik was still not letting go of Pikachu with the hug, and would never get to the cake. It looked like there was no amount of affection she could give, to show just how thankful she was.

    “Looks like Pikachu was right. Pik does have a thing for that sort of thing.” Ash said to Misty.

    “Yea. I would probably not want to let go of you too if you got a gift like that for me as a birthday present.” Misty said, admiring the scene.

    They were soon out of the restaurant, and were heading home. Misty was the one holding the box that contained the piece of chocolate cake they got.

    They soon got home, and went inside. Their house was different than what most people would think two people of greatness being married would have. It was a pretty ordinary two-story house, that was big enough for four people to live in. They did this to make sure that fans and media wouldn’t bother them. They chose a place where they knew no one would even think of looking for them to live at. Dispite that, sometimes fan girls found them, and wanted to go out with Ash, but Misty was there many times, and made it known that he was already taken. They had satellite TV, so they could pretty much watch anything. It had three bedrooms, along with three bathrooms. A living room, and a kitchen.

    Ash bent down to Pikachu and Pik while Misty put the cake in the fridge. “Okay, we’re gonna watch a movie now, and Pik, you get to pick the movie.” Ash said to Pik.

    With that, Pik ran up to the movie rack that they had, and picked out a very romantic movie that was on DVD. They put the movie in and play it. Ash and Misty were sharing the couch, while Pikachu and Pik shared the Lazy-boy chair.

    After the movie was over, Pikachu and Pik were seen asleep on the Lazy-boy chair. Pik on Pikachu’s shoulder, and Pikachu on Pik’s head. Misty turns to them, and just awes at the lovely scene she sees their two pokemon in. She then turns to Ash.

    “It would be a shame to wake them.” She said in a whispering tone.

    Ash knew exactly what she was thinking, and just got a blanket out of the nearby closet, and put it very carefully on Pikachu and Pik, as to not disturb them. Ash and Misty then go to bed. Misty had to practically remind Ash that she wasn’t in the mood to do anything special with him tonight. Ash just left it at that, and let her sleep.

    As for Pik, this was a night, she would never forget.

    ---End Chapter 2---

    Special thanks:

    Me: For making it.

    You: For reading and reviewing it.

    WaterEevee: For the discription of Pik's difference from other Pikachu.

    Shiny Jolteon: For the way the "Cafe' ala Pokemon" looked on the inside. It is "borrowed" from one of his chapters in "The Forest Newbie." It was altered to make it for Pokemon as well. Plus more tables and chairs are added.

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    I will give you my opinion ^^

    Your story is very shippy and not complicated. I like the dialogues between characters, because aren't long. First chapter is little "pink" ^_^ Everybody is married and happy, but that's okay. Misty's Pikachu has a funny name! I love it. Yellow from the manga has a female Pikachu- "Chuchu". Misty's Pik probably is similar.
    Ok, enough for today^^ I would like to see more chapters.
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    Smile what will happen?

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    No comments? No problem.

    Now, the next few chapters is a simple day to day process thing of where multiple attempts of having the "special moment" end up failing for certian reasons. You'd be surprised by my imagination.

    Anyways, here it is, Chapter 2. (Those who are serious about length, don't worry, it's longer.) :)

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    Misty's Miracle

    Summary: Ash and Misty have been married for some time, and Misty wants to have kids. However, after failing at even becoming pregnant for so long, they decide to find out what's wrong. When Misty discovers that she has a rare condition that makes it increadably hard for her to become pregnant, and has a good chance at killing the baby if she does, how will she react? And, if she does become pregnant, will the baby survive?

    Chapter 2

    Note: In this chapter, and upcoming ones, I many times don't have what the pokemon said of how we hear it, just the translation. It is indicated in (). However, some are quite obvious, or mean too many things with a certian situation, so I just don't translate those.

    Length: 7.5 pages.

    The next day...

    In a few days, Ash and Misty will be going to the wedding of May and Drew. Today, they are out getting gifts for the wedding. They are now in the car with Pikachu and Pik, ready to drive off to the mall. As they are, Pikachu and Pik are talking to each other.

    (“So, what do you think is a good present for Delcatty and Beautifly?”) Pik asks Pikachu, knowing how good of friends he is with them.

    (“Hmm,) Pikachu answers, (“Let me think.”)

    At this point, Ash is having a hard time figuring out what to get Drew, as he didn’t end up knowing much about him. May was easy for him, as she was with him throughout his whole Houen journey, he knew exactly what to get her, but Drew just seemed to be so tough to figure out.

    “There it is, the Cerulean Mall!” Misty said, interrupting Ash’s thoughts.

    Ash pulled into the parking lot. The mall was much bigger than many other malls were. It looked pretty ordinary on the outside, except for the tetrahedron shaped roof at the center of it, making it one of the most unique, one floor only, malls around. Inside, the hallway had cascade blue tiles, a white painted wall, and a glass roof throughout the whole mall. They both headed to the center of the mall, with their respected Pikachu on their shoulder. They stopped at the center, and their respected Pikachu jumped off.

    The center of the mall was just a small place, where kids could participate in holiday events, it had a clock at one of the corners of it. It also had a red carpet at the place, as it elevated down to the center, with stairs and wheelchair walkways.

    “Okay Misty, this is where we split up to look for presents for May and Drew.” Ash said.

    “Okay Ash.” Said Misty in an agreeing tone.

    “We’ll meet at the food court in two hours, and have lunch there, got it?”

    “Got it, Ash.”

    (“You got that Pik?”) Pikachu asks.

    (“I sure do.”) Answers Pik.

    Misty then gives Ash a kiss on the cheek as she walks off. Ash is just standing there blushing, and staring at her, rubbing his kissed cheek gently, as she walks off. He then looks down at Pikachu.

    “Let’s get going Pikachu.” Says Ash.

    Pikachu just responded to that with a simple, “Pikachu.”

    Ash was having a hard time finding the right stores to go to, as he hadn’t been to the mall much. He was at least smart enough to use the map. As for Misty, she knew the mall like the back of her hand, as she had been there so many times with her sisters when she was younger. Though she wasn’t the one getting gifts at the time, and just ended up being the one carrying them.

    Misty had just gotten done getting a present for May, and decided to help Pik in finding gifts for May and Drew’s Pokemon. She bends down to Pik, who was carrying a gift she thought May would like, which she was having trouble with, as the bag was about the size of her. Misty did offer to help, but Pik said she could handle it.

    “So, where should we go to get presents for the Pokemon.”

    Pik sets the bag down, and starts looking around in random directions. Then, nearby, she spots something.

    (“’The Pokemon Toy Store’, over there.”) She says, pointing to the nearby toy store.

    They walk into the toy store. It was huge! The place was practically filled with toys for pokemon on every single shelf, a few were empty, but were immediately getting restocked with new toys. Many of the toys had the picture of what pokemon they were meant for on them, just in case the trainer didn’t know what kind of toy a certain pokemon would like. As they were looking around, Pik spots a toy with that of a cat with a purple mane and tail on it. Looking at it, and knowing just how much one pokemon loved to play with stuff like that, she knew just who it would be perfect for. She then calls for Misty.

    (“Hey, Misty! Over here!”) She shouts in Misty’s direction.

    Misty runs over as fast as she can towards Pik. “What is it, Pik?” She asks.

    Pik then points to the object that she was looking at that was out of her reach. (“Up there!”)

    Misty grabs the object, and sees the picture of Delcatty on it. “You think Delcatty will like this?”

    (“I know she will”)

    “Okay, we’ll get it. Let’s see what else we can find.”

    They soon get done, and after that, Misty takes a look at her watch, and discovers that it’s close to the time to meet Ash at the food court. She heads over there to meet Ash.

    At about the same time, Ash had just gotten done with shopping for May. He spent alot of time finding the perfect one for her, knowing just how important their friendship was. He shows the gift to Pikachu while walking to the food court.

    “What do you think, Pikachu? Think May will like it?” He asks Pikachu.

    (“Yea, she’ll love it!”) Then Pikachu starts thinking, (‘But what will Misty say about it?’)

    They soon arrive at the food court, and get their food. Misty, who had already gotten her food and found a spot for them, called over to Ash. They sit down with her, and start eating.

    “So, what gifts did you get?” Misty says, part way through the meal.

    “Well, I got this pretty necklace for May.” He says, showing May’s present.

    The necklace was a very pretty golden chain necklace, that hand the symbol of friendship hanging from it.

    “That’s a very pretty necklace.” She says with an evil smirk.

    “Don’t give me that look.” Ash says noticing.

    “What?” She said, trying to hide it.

    “You’re jealous, aren’t you?”

    “No!”

    “C’mon! You’re jealous that I got May such a nice present.”

    “No!!”

    “Admit it!!”

    “I’m not jealous!”

    “Are too!”

    “Are not!”

    “Are too!”

    “Are not!”

    Are too! Are too! Are too!”

    “Okay, okay! I’m jealous alright!?” She says, finally admitting it. She learned over the years with him, that it was easier to sometimes admit it, and not argue so much. “But don’t think you’ll be getting anything special from me tonight.”

    She obviously wanted to do a little something with him, but now, she wasn’t in the mood.

    “Fine!” He says, noticing what he just lost to do with her for that night. “But I’ve got something extra special planned for our anniversary coming in six months.” He said, trying to earn the privilege back.

    “What is it?” Misty asked in a begging tone, being surprised that he already had something planned.

    “It’s a surprise.”

    “Tell me!”

    “If I told you would it be a surprise?”

    “C’mon! Tell me!”

    “You want to be spoiled?”

    “Yes!!”

    “Well then, maybe I’ll just return the surprise.”

    “Well then you’re defiantly not getting anything special from me tonight, Mr. Ash Ketchum!”

    Ash then noticed that he had completely lost the privilege, and just went back to eating his meal.

    At this point, Pikachu and Pik were having a conversation of their own.

    (“So, what did you get the Pokemon?”) Pikachu asked Pik.

    (“Well,”) she says while pulling out the ball she got earlier, (“I got this ball for Delcatty.”)

    (“She’ll absolutely love that!”) He said with a chuckle. (“She used to play with those all the time when she was practicing for contests.”)

    (“So, what did you get for the Pokemon?”)

    (“Well, you see, with me and Ash spending so much time looking for a present for May, we haven’t had anytime to check the stores for Pokemon yet.”) Pikachu said with a sweatdrop, being a bit embarrassed, which was obvious with the fact that he was blushing.

    (“Well, you’d better get them something good, or they’ll be quite upset, and so will I.”) She said, hinting him with something she had told him this morning.

    Pikachu obviously caught the hint, but wanted to play along.

    (“Well then, just to show you how sorry I am, I promise to get you something nice.”) He said.

    (“You don’t have to do that.”) She said, knowing he was playing along.

    (“Trust me, you’ll love it.”)

    (“Okay, I’ll be waiting.”)

    With that, Pikachu and Pik go back to eating their food. Leaving Pik with curious thoughts about what she would get.

    After lunch, Ash and Misty continue shopping. Ash eventually finds a present for Drew, and after that, starts shopping for the Pokemon. Pikachu knew that after they were done, he would have to tell Ash, just to get Pik something nice.

    It was now one and a half hours after lunch, and Ash and Pikachu had just gotten done shopping for the Pokemon, or so Ash thinks.

    “Well, I guess we’re done.” Ash said.

    (“Well, not quite.”) He said, being a bit embarrassed to tell Ash.

    “What do you mean, Pikachu?” asked Ash.

    (“Well, during lunch, I kinda promised Pik that I’d get her something nice.”)

    “How come?”

    Pikachu finally gives in, and tells Ash why he’s getting Pik a gift.

    (“Well, today just happens to be Pik’s birthday. She just reminded me this morning. I’ve got nothing for her, and she knows it. So, I’m in a bit of a jam.”) He finally confessed.

    “Wow, you really are in a jam, huh? Okay, let’s find Pik a birthday present.”

    “Pikachu!” Pikachu says all happy.

    So they head out, looking for a birthday present for Pik. They soon come to a crafts store, and go inside. While looking, Pikachu finds the perfect thing.

    Pikachu gasps when he sees it. (“Ash! Over here!”)

    Ash runs up to Pikachu. “What is it, Pikachu?”

    (“Look, it’s perfect!”) Pikachu says, pointing to the object.

    Ash grabs the object and looks at it. “You really think she’ll like this, Pikachu?”

    (“I just know she’ll love it! She has a thing for that sort of thing.”)

    “Okay, we’ll buy it.”

    Ash then walks up to the teller and hands the gift to her. While the teller rings up the gift, he asks her to gift wrap it. The teller does so, and gives the newly wrapped present to Ash. Ash and Pikachu then walk out of the store, and immediately run into Misty and Pik. Ash quickly bags Pik’s gift when he sees them.

    “So, do we have everything?” Misty asks Ash.

    “Yep, I just got done.” Ash answers her.

    “Okay then, let’s get going.”

    “Uh, Misty, a minute alone, without the Pokemon?”

    Misty just nods yes, as she is led away by Ash.

    (“So, what did you get me?”) Pik asks Pikachu, anxiously wanting to know.

    (“It’s a surprise.”) Pikachu says to Pik, who just gives him a playful jealous look, obviously wanting to be spoiled.

    Meanwhile, Ash was whispering something to Misty.

    “Did you know that today is Pik’s birthday?” Ash asks Misty.

    “Yea, she told me a few days ago. We’re planning to go out for it. Why?” Misty asks.

    “Well, the thing is, she just reminded Pikachu of it today, and he didn’t have anything for her, and she knew.”

    “Uh-oh!”

    “Yea, but you don’t have to worry, everything’s taken care of now. We found a gift for her.”

    “That’s good.” She said with a smile. “What did you get her?”

    “You’ll see, Misty. You’ll see.”

    Later that night, they were all dressed up, and heading out to the restaurant that Misty picked for Pik’s birthday. Ash was dressed in a light blue vest, with a dark blue jacket covering it, a red bow tie, and black pants to complete it. Misty was dressed in a one piece red, sleeveless dress, with a fluffy white fur near the top, and having jewels in her hair. (Check my Avatar if you’re having trouble.) Pikachu and Pik weren’t dressed up at all. Pik didn’t need to be dressed up for anyone to tell she was a girl. You could easily tell by just noticing her “longer-than-other-Pikachu” fur. Misty then sees the restaurant.

    “Over there! That’s where we’re going tonight!” She said pointing towards it.

    “The ‘Cafe ala Pokemon’?” He asked seeing it.

    “That’s the one.”

    They pulled into the parking lot. The “Cafe ala Pokemon” is a fancy restaurant, that’s designed for trainers on dates with their pokemon. It has a red carpet, that is covered with 60 glass tables, which have a red tablecloth on every single one. Along with 4 wooden chairs surrounding each of the tables. Finishing it off with a single red rose inside a glass vase. All of the waiters and hosts wore black and white tuxedoes.

    A host showed Ash, Misty, Pikachu, and Pik to their table. They brought some booster seats for Pikachu and Pik. Before the host left, Misty informed him secretly that it was Pik’s birthday. The host gave Misty a nod, understanding what she said, and went into the kitchen to inform the chefs.

    Soon, a waiter came and took their order. They soon get their food, and enjoy their meal. After they got done, one of the chefs, dressed all in white, came out of the kitchen with a piece of chocolate cake, all prepared for Pik’s birthday. Pik just gave a surprised gasp when she saw it.

    “Go ahead Pik, make a wish.” Misty said to Pik.

    It didn’t take long for Pik to think of a wish and blow out the candle.

    “Okay Pikachu, give Pik the present you got for her.” Ash said handing the wrapped box to Pikachu.

    Pikachu then puts the present in front of Pik. (“Here you go!”) He said with a smile.

    (“Hmm,”) Pik said, shaking the present. (“What could it be?”) She then unwraps the present, revealing a small box. She then opens the box. Pik is speechless with the present she sees.

    Inside the box was the most beautiful flower bracelet she had ever seen in her entire life. Not to mention the only one. It was made with a mixture of rainbow colored flowers, that were arranged in such a way, that any girl would like it. Dispite the fact that it was wrapped in plastic, it still kept it’s beauty. The best thing was, that it was just Pik’s size too.

    Pik takes the bracelet out of the box, hugging it. (“I love it!”) She then holds it up to Pikachu. (“Put it on me?”) She asks Pikachu.

    Pikachu happily puts the bracelet on Pik, and receives a hug and a peck on the cheek as a thank you, which came to another, much longer hug.

    The waiter then came with the bill for the meal. Ash happily paid for it with his MasterCard. He also asked for a box, seeing as how Pik was still not letting go of Pikachu with the hug, and would never get to the cake. It looked like there was no amount of affection she could give, to show just how thankful she was.

    “Looks like Pikachu was right. Pik does have a thing for that sort of thing.” Ash said to Misty.

    “Yea. I would probably not want to let go of you too if you got a gift like that for me as a birthday present.” Misty said, admiring the scene.

    They were soon out of the restaurant, and were heading home. Misty was the one holding the box that contained the piece of chocolate cake they got.

    They soon got home, and went inside. Their house was different than what most people would think two people of greatness being married would have. It was a pretty ordinary two-story house, that was big enough for four people to live in. They did this to make sure that fans and media wouldn’t bother them. They chose a place where they knew no one would even think of looking for them to live at. Dispite that, sometimes fan girls found them, and wanted to go out with Ash, but Misty was there many times, and made it known that he was already taken. They had satellite TV, so they could pretty much watch anything. It had three bedrooms, along with three bathrooms. A living room, and a kitchen.

    Ash bent down to Pikachu and Pik while Misty put the cake in the fridge. “Okay, we’re gonna watch a movie now, and Pik, you get to pick the movie.” Ash said to Pik.

    With that, Pik ran up to the movie rack that they had, and picked out a very romantic movie that was on DVD. They put the movie in and play it. Ash and Misty were sharing the couch, while Pikachu and Pik shared the Lazy-boy chair.

    After the movie was over, Pikachu and Pik were seen asleep on the Lazy-boy chair. Pik on Pikachu’s shoulder, and Pikachu on Pik’s head. Misty turns to them, and just awes at the lovely scene she sees their two pokemon in. She then turns to Ash.

    “It would be a shame to wake them.” She said in a whispering tone.

    Ash knew exactly what she was thinking, and just got a blanket out of the nearby closet, and put it very carefully on Pikachu and Pik, as to not disturb them. Ash and Misty then go to bed. Misty had to practically remind Ash that she wasn’t in the mood to do anything special with him tonight. Ash just left it at that, and let her sleep.

    As for Pik, this was a night, she would never forget.

    ---End Chapter 2---

    Special thanks:

    Me: For making it.

    You: For reading and reviewing it.

    WaterEevee: For the discription of Pik's difference from other Pikachu.

    Shiny Jolteon: For the way the "Cafe' ala Pokemon" looked on the inside. It is "borrowed" from one of his chapters in "The Forest Newbie." It was altered to make it for Pokemon as well. Plus more tables and chairs are added.

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    what is going to happen?

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    what is going to happen will they have kids

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    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered
    what is going to happen?
    Don't quote the whole chapter.

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    The story is decent and nicely shippy. However, your descriptions could be a little better. The phrase "that's designed for trainers on dates with their Pokémon" is unintentionally hilarious.

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    Pokeshipping and contestshipping!You rock pokeplayer984!But like everone said,what IS going to happen?Please tell.
    Sigh,welcome to my life.......

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