Lament in Azalea Town (Poetry, Original Character)

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    Default Lament in Azalea Town (Poetry, Original Character)

    So I was bored in class one day, thinking about my original character, Nekou, and how she needed some poetry about her... here it is. (BTW, Nekou's a TR member. Thought that'd clear things up some for you.)
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    Lament in Azalea Town

    She wakes up
    looks at the clock
    (another day, another report)
    and wonders how she
    found herself in this
    world of necessary evil
    (but is it really?)
    and she wonders if there’s more
    to life than lying, stealing, dying
    over and over again
    (her soul for a second chance)
    the amnesiac girl next door, fallen to
    the Devil’s lies, searching in the
    darkness of this underground
    (but it’s such an honor)
    believing the half-truths and
    broken promises of power, money,
    belonging, within its ranks
    (where are they now, she wonders)
    and the lost girl stares at her beast
    pets it behind its black ears
    listens to its constant, loud purring
    (being careful to avoid its razor claws)
    and wonders where she’ll buy her next coffee.
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    Nekou seems heartbroken at the choices she's made in life. Very well written. I really liked the part about her and 'the black beast.'

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    Being her Sneasel.
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