Damn, Gold's Pokémon are on steroids now? This just gets better and better.
You know what I'll say about the last couple of chapters. They were amazing. Great description, emotionally as well, and you've finally managed to make me like Kris. :) I'll say this though, if Spike gets Salamence, I'm siding with him. Just saying. So...Mence, come on out!
I'd say grammar was fine, and I can't wait!