Walt Disney World had just opened a brand-new Park [Okay, "Park" in this case is not referring to the place's name: it's its description. Therefore, Park should be park; with a lowercase p.]
, and this was one of the rare occasions that the five Kingdom Keepers, Finn, Charlene, Maybeck, Willa and Philby, had permission to be in the Parks [same here]
in daytime without disguises. Of course, the fact that they needed tough security guys around them to scare off autograph hounds put a bit of a damper on the day, but they had fun nonetheless.
They were now walking to Finn’s mom’s car with their friends, Jess and Amanda, who they considered honorary Keepers, and talking about their day. “What a weird name,” Maybeck said [1 [see below]]
, prompting amused looks from his friends. “What’s so funny? I mean, come on, think about it. ‘The World’. It has OT written all over it.” Laughter ensued. “Guys, he has a point. Not that the name has anything to do with it, but the OTs are gonna jump all over a new park, a new location for the magic. They’re gonna assume the defenses here aren’t strong enough yet. I’ll monitor activity tonight, but you don’t have to be ready. In all likelihood, they’re gonna make a plan first.” Philby said. [Okay, first you use the correct grammar in , then you go incorrect here. The period after first in Philby's dialogue should be a comma.
Finn replied, “Hey, I thought I was the leader!” This time, the laughing was unanimous.
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Finn’s phone, on vibrate and wrapped in foil like always, woke him up. It was a group text from Philby.
Got somethin @ TW. U know what to do.