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    Default Godo's Taking Flight small-shots (current; song:Flight)

    For all of my posts: these are "short" stories, songs, or poems.
    For this one:Okay, this is my attempt at poems and provides some backstory to the flock's deity, Hiutzilo.
    _____________________________________
    Change

    There was a deity that controls
    The sun, and was a master of
    War. People believed that he could burn
    Out the sun, so he was worshipped
    By an ancient tribe as the creator.
    They offered their own for sacrifices,
    And he was flattered. But he felt
    Sorry for those poor souls, along
    With the brave spirits that lost
    Their lives and battle and
    Women that lost theirs in childbirth,
    And turned them into birds of his own
    Creation. The birds, of course, could
    Move at the speed of the light
    That the deity himself emanates.
    Their wings could flap fast and steady,
    With the sound of a hum. The sacrifices
    Lasted for decades, and then they stopped
    When foreign people came. Over the
    Years, flattery turned to hunger in the
    Deity’s mind, and was enraged when his
    Sacrifices stopped arriving. With savageness,
    He went on a rampage, leaving very few
    Alive. It took him years to realize what
    He did. What have I done!?
    Nobody can worship me and no sacrifices
    Either…
    he thought. But then
    He spotted one of his creations flying from his
    Godly throne. My creations! Surely
    They’ll worship me. That is,
    If my hunger doesn’t rise again.

    He thought with a guile on his face.
    *********
    The first of the reincarnated
    Birds had formed a counsel, and decided that
    Their deity was different. He had changed.
    So they tricked him into falling into a
    Deep slumber with the help
    Of his sister and her sorcery.
    And the deity’s last thought was:
    I changed.

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    Last edited by boondockArtist; 10th May 2011 at 12:47 PM.

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    Now you have to go"

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    Awesome.

    It would work well as a RAP, to be honest.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Transform View Post
    Awesome.

    It would work well as a RAP, to be honest.
    0_0', I don't know how it would be a rap; it's a little bit long for that, and then there's the fact that I don't like rap ...
    But thank you for liking it. I might just make this a dump for all of my Taking Flight shorts...

    "Hello Goodbye, Twas nice to know you
    "Hello Goodbye, I'm rather crazy
    How I find myself without you
    And I never thought I was crazy
    That I'll never know
    But what do I know?
    I let myself go"
    Now you have to go"

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    Default Re: Godo's Taking Flight small-shots

    this is my first attempt at a song (and please note that this is supposed to be country song lyrics...)

    Flight

    Here I sit,
    Once again,
    Stiff with pain
    And stuck with fear
    Girl, I just want to
    Take flight with you
    and forget
    My fears.
    But now I’m stuck in
    A chair in this
    Dark room, with
    Nothing to do but
    Pass the time
    Thinking of a rhyme.

    Here I am
    Once again,
    Feeling like I’m
    In a gutter,
    Thrown around,
    Beat to the ground.
    Girl, I just want to
    Take flight with you
    And forget
    My pain
    And more

    But now I’m stuck
    In this dark room,
    Staring out of the widow
    Out to the stormy sky.
    There I was
    Once again,
    Listening to the radio
    Tuning it to the news
    Hearing nothing
    But bad news,
    But feeling
    Glad that your name
    Didn’t pop up.
    I just want to
    Take flight with you
    And forget
    The worries
    And more.

    But now I’m in a dark room
    Stuck on a chair
    Stiff with pain
    Gathered from
    These past few weeks
    Stuck with fear
    Of what I seen,
    What I hear
    All I want to do is fly with
    You girl, but I’m stuck here
    For now.
    But soon I’ll be in the
    Air with you…
    Last edited by boondockArtist; 28th May 2011 at 12:26 PM.

    "Hello Goodbye, Twas nice to know you
    "Hello Goodbye, I'm rather crazy
    How I find myself without you
    And I never thought I was crazy
    That I'll never know
    But what do I know?
    I let myself go"
    Now you have to go"

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    Default Re: Godo's Taking Flight small-shots (current; song:Flight)

    There a tune?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Transform View Post
    There a tune?
    You mean music? I'm going to that after I'm done posting this...

    "Hello Goodbye, Twas nice to know you
    "Hello Goodbye, I'm rather crazy
    How I find myself without you
    And I never thought I was crazy
    That I'll never know
    But what do I know?
    I let myself go"
    Now you have to go"

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    Default Re: Godo's Taking Flight small-shots (current; song:Flight)

    LOL...
    I claimed Phoenix Wright 2001 ~ Pursuit Cornered.
    Quote Originally Posted by PkmnGreen View Post
    "Mario made Yoshi fall down a cliff to save himself! What an asshole!"
    Quote Originally Posted by $aturn¥oshi;bt213233
    I like to throw turnips at people and say "Take that, Shy Guy!"

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