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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 17/25 up)

    Quote Originally Posted by Thabet View Post
    Oh but one thing, its Buizel not bouysel, sorry but its true....hehe XD
    I do say something about this and how I use "Buoysel" even in real life.

    And you're welcome! ^_^
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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 17/25 up)

    Oh, hey, it's a reader.

    Hey there. So, uh... it's been 24 hours... got my story?

    Oh. *smacks lips quickly* I... you know what, just give me till next Friday, I'll have it for you by then.

    Oh. Oh, that's funny, I could have sworn I said, have it today.

    Yeah, I don't have it, sorry.

    Oh. Well. Alright then. *drinks glass of orange juice* Mmm, that's some good OJ. *throws the glass in Ztobor's face*

    OWWWW! AUUUGGGHHHHH!

    *while Ztobor continues screaming* Yeah, that hurt? That hurt?

    WHAT THE HELL?!?

    Yeah, that don't feel so good, does it? No, eh? *kicks Ztobor in the foot*

    AAUGH!

    *punches Ztobor twice, then throws him on the floor* That's what happens, man. *kicks*

    OH MY GOD!

    Yeah, that's what happens. *kicks Ztobor four times, then starts punching* Where's my story? You gonna give me that story? Where's my story, man?

    *groans in pain, as the reader grabs a shower rail*

    *beats Ztobor with the shower rail* Where's the story? *continues beating* Yeah, you like that? That feel good? That feel good? *drags Ztobor to the toilet, and puts his head in* Where's my story man? *starts beating Ztobor's head with the toilet seat* Where's my story?

    *crumples on the floor, exhausted*

    You've got till five o'clock. You hear me? You've got till five o'clock!

    *groans* You freaking psychopath!

    *throws Ztobor a towel* Now clean yourself up.

    All that happened nearly eight hours ago, and it's already more than three hours past five. Not to go against the wishes of a reader, here is the eighteenth chapter of the series.

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    Chapter 18 - Onwards



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    If you want a rough scene of what happens in that little skit up there, watch this video.
    Last edited by Zekurom; 7th July 2010 at 06:08 PM.
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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 17/25 up)

    Quote Originally Posted by Zekurom View Post
    They kept walking. As they entered the city, Rachel noticed the various foreigners that Ken had talked about who were here partaking in the spiritual activities of Japan, including an authentic shrine that people were visiting. But what really caught her eye here was... "A Gym?!?"
    Something about this paragraph seems uncomforble. Other than that, you impressed me once again.

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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 18/25 up)

    I liked the chapter a lot, keep writting!

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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 17/25 up)

    Quote Originally Posted by alster08 View Post
    Something about this paragraph seems uncomforble. Other than that, you impressed me once again.
    Probably the part about "including an authentic shrine", which has ambiguous parallel structure. You don't really know if I'm referring to the landmarks of Japan or the people themselves, the latter of which seems more natural grammatically but doesn't make any sense.

    I'll see what I can do to correct it.
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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 18/25 up)

    Chapter 19. One of the readers told me that this chapter melted her brain. Well, the Gym challenge also melted Rachel's, so that's no excuse. ^_^

    Here it is!

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    Chapter 19 - The Dark Maze



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    Credits: Thanks to Kyoshiro Nara from FanFiction.net for the Gym Leader.
    Last edited by Zekurom; 8th July 2010 at 04:39 PM.
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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 18/25 up)

    Awsome chapter.

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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 18/25 up)

    I liked the chapter quite a lot, I enjoy the most is the Pokemon even if they barely speak.
    The gym leader was great and so was the challenge, I liked it.
    Can't wait for more.

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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 18/25 up)

    Without the little warning at the end, you'd never know what happens next until you actually read this chapter. It's pretty knee-jerking.

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    Chapter 20 - The Abduction



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    If Donovan actually has a canon name, I'm deeply sorry.
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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 20/25 up)

    This chapter is amazing. I love the story.

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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 20/25 up)

    Let's see now... chapter 21. I still haven't finished writing Chapter 25. Shame. I'm almost caught up now.

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    Chapter 21 - The Break-In



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    The writing gets a little wonky here, so bear with me.

    Lukas is another character, submitted by Nianque from FanFiction.net.
    Last edited by Zekurom; 11th July 2010 at 11:47 PM.
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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 21/25 up)

    You know, I just found out that the DP anime had its own cosplay convention, and that my rendition of it completely breaks the canon type.

    Here's Chapter 22. Enjoy!

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    Chapter 22 - The Story



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    I haven't finished writing chapter 25 yet, and it's been over two weeks T_T
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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 22/26 up)

    Chapter 23 to 26 are kind of unclear for me, because I'm bad at writing villains for fear of them being doing something cliché like trying to destroy the world in order to take over it, and then realizing that I have to do that anyway.

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    Chapter 23 - The Reunion



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    After Chapter 26, the story should be back to normal.
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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 23/26 up)

    Chapter 24! If this keeps up, this'll be the longest chain of chapters without a review yet!

    We're almost caught up with the official release here.

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    Chapter 24 - Breaking In Again



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    This chapter is one giant fight scene. Hooray for 20-minute fight scenes.
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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 24/26 up)

    Sounds interesting. Very good so far, Zekky. Also, not to pester, but would you kindly read my dark fic again? I added a ton to it.

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