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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 12/23 up)

    I love the Chapter and I also love DANCE DANCE REVOLUTION. I think it is cool how you included them playing it.

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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 12/23 up)

    Actually, a lot of people comment on how the like the fact that I include a lot of non-Pokemon stuff in my fics.

    It's actually because it's really only half fanfiction. You notice how I break canon to an almost criminal degree? This is because the only thing that's the same here is the universe (and even then, I have it take place on Earth). A lot of it is my original creations, and the Gym Leaders are various characters submitted by fans of the story.

    In fact, I'll extend that invitation here. If you want to send me an OC Gym Leader, simply send me a description of it and I'll see if I can include it in the story.
    The word "quadragonal" is the only word with "dragon" in it where "dragon" is not a root word. That makes it awesome.

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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 12/23 up)

    Wait, what would Jesus be, a tiny Arceus? ;D
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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 12/23 up)

    Quote Originally Posted by The Dethroned View Post
    Wait, what would Jesus be, a tiny Arceus? ;D
    Nah, Jesus would be Jesus.
    The word "quadragonal" is the only word with "dragon" in it where "dragon" is not a root word. That makes it awesome.

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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 12/23 up)

    And here's chapter 13! Now I'll just hope for more reviews instead of just views...

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    Chapter 13 - Moments of Truth



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    I sincerely apologize to the person whose Nintendo DS friend code is 2564-1073-8922. Same goes with 5681-2006-7449 and 1093-2822-1116.

    *edit* P.S. I am going to laugh out loud if anybody here actually has those codes.
    Last edited by Zekurom; 12th July 2010 at 09:08 AM.
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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 13/24 up)

    And here's chapter 14!

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    Chapter 14 - Route 51



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    This would be the point where the story starts getting more serious.

    *edit* Oh no, I forgot something! There's an intermezzo between Chapters 14 and 15. Here it is:

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    Intermezzo - Mountain Range



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    Without it, there's a gap between chapters 14 and 15.
    Last edited by Zekurom; 30th June 2010 at 07:30 PM. Reason: Ahh, forgot the intermezzo!
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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 14/24 up)

    Chapter 15, coming right up!

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    Chapter 15 - Mt. Moon



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    From here on, it's angst all the way. *spoiler, LOL*

    Just a friendly reminder. If you want to read more before I post it here, head over to my blog!
    Last edited by Zekurom; 28th June 2010 at 09:24 PM. Reason: Oh, what the hell? I've been leaving in the <!--more--> tag.
    The word "quadragonal" is the only word with "dragon" in it where "dragon" is not a root word. That makes it awesome.

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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 15/25 up)

    I read the first five chapters since I didn't have much time.
    I like your story a lot. The characters are really interesting and catchy, I like Suigen the most and the Pokemon's personalities are riot!
    (Cracked up at that Bellsprout at chapter 2 I think. And the legends are good, too.
    Keep up the good work.
    Peace!

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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 15/25 up)

    Quote Originally Posted by Thabet View Post
    I read the first five chapters since I didn't have much time.
    I like your story a lot. The characters are really interesting and catchy, I like Suigen the most and the Pokemon's personalities are riot!
    (Cracked up at that Bellsprout at chapter 2 I think. And the legends are good, too.
    Keep up the good work.
    Peace!
    Thanks.

    The legends? You mean the part where the priest keeps substituting Pokemon names? That was just a sick little joke of mine.

    Yeah, that Bellsprout has an attitude. I might give it a cameo later.
    The word "quadragonal" is the only word with "dragon" in it where "dragon" is not a root word. That makes it awesome.

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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 15/25 up)

    I also meant by the legends, Pheonix. I like his attitude.

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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 15/25 up)

    Quote Originally Posted by Thabet View Post
    I also meant by the legends, Phoenix. I like his attitude.
    Ah. It does change later on. A bit. I think.

    BTW, there's another "legend" in there, if you cared to look :D
    The word "quadragonal" is the only word with "dragon" in it where "dragon" is not a root word. That makes it awesome.

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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 15/25 up)

    Shh... I have to tell you a secret. A spoiler, to be exact. In this chapter, Hika--*gunshot*

    Whoops, that was one of my secretaries, trying to give away part of the story! Don't worry, I just dealt with her. Here's chapter 16. Enjoy!

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    Chapter 16 - Down the Mountain



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    So... did you like it? I'm concerned because this chapter got all the negative reviews that I've gotten so far for this story.
    The word "quadragonal" is the only word with "dragon" in it where "dragon" is not a root word. That makes it awesome.

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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 16/25 up)

    NO!
    You killed Hikaru! I liked him. Awwwoooo
    Ah oh well, at least he died a hero. Anyway, Nice chapter man!

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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 16/25 up)

    Thanks for the moral support, Thabet.

    Here's Chapter 17, for your viewing pleasure.

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    Chapter 17 - A Friend Indeed



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    Just a comment about my spelling, I use "center" when referring to the middle of something, but "centre" when referring to a place of gathering, like a Pokemon Centre.

    When I finally get this caught up with the official release, the line on my signature for this fic will have the next update instead of the chapter number that's on my blog.

    The background music is the first ending song to the Legendz anime.
    The word "quadragonal" is the only word with "dragon" in it where "dragon" is not a root word. That makes it awesome.

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    Default Re: Generation 2021 (Chapter 17/25 up)

    Very nice chapter, your battles are very intense and interesting.
    You use a lot of description and such almost as if you vision yourself in the scene when you write, good.
    Oh but one thing, its Buizel not bouysel, sorry but its true....hehe XD
    Look forward to the next chapter.
    Could you check out my fic while your on it?
    Thanks.

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