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    Of course, once this post is caught up with the official release, the updates will be a week between... it's just because I have such a huge backlog. If you want to read any more, head over to my blog. The link should be in the first two chapters.
    The word "quadragonal" is the only word with "dragon" in it where "dragon" is not a root word. That makes it awesome.

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    I like this fic a lot!

    I get confused though: Does this take place in the real world or the Pokemon world? Real stuff and Pokemon stuff seem to coexist here.

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    Quote Originally Posted by SSJ3_Raditz View Post
    I like this fic a lot!

    I get confused though: Does this take place in the real world or the Pokemon world? Real stuff and Pokemon stuff seem to coexist here.
    Oh, that's because they do coexist. The fic is set in a Pokemon world that is geographically identical to the real world. The four regions are in Japan.

    Come on, no places where I can improve? There's got to be something that I'm doing wrong.
    The word "quadragonal" is the only word with "dragon" in it where "dragon" is not a root word. That makes it awesome.

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    And here's chapter 5! This one is where the story really starts getting into the interesting parts.

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    Chapter 5 - Into the Forest



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    In this chapter, I start pluralizing the names of Pokemon with the suffix of the last portmanteau-ed word in the name. So "Metapods" came about because of the word "pod" being turned into "pods".

    I don't know why I started doing this, but it's stuck until I can go back and either correct the first four chapters or the ones from 5 on.

    The reason I don't capitalize "tackle" here is because I'm using it as a verb - not as the name of the move. So the bug catcher is telling his Caterpie to literally tackle the Charmander, instead of using the move Tackle.

    The bug catcher's Metapod is Level 9, hence his strange payout.
    Last edited by Zekurom; 18th June 2010 at 08:17 PM. Reason: Spoiler tags.
    The word "quadragonal" is the only word with "dragon" in it where "dragon" is not a root word. That makes it awesome.

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    Nice Fic. I like your characters. You should read mine when you have a chance.

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    Chapter 6, for all you readers.

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    Chapter 6 - The Tournament Continues



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    I switched the point of view in this chapter to give the audience and readers a chance to view the story from one of the characters' eyes. I'll be doing this for each of Rachel, Ken, and Hikaru as the tournament progresses.
    Last edited by Zekurom; 18th June 2010 at 08:49 PM.
    The word "quadragonal" is the only word with "dragon" in it where "dragon" is not a root word. That makes it awesome.

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    Cool


    Props to Instrutilus for the sick banner.

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    Things are almost always crazy in this fic. Except when they're super angsty, and that sets in ten chapters from now, so you've got a long time to wait for that.

    When I look back, I'm not exactly sure why I titled this chapter "Enemies". You don't meet any except for Moku, and he doesn't even appear again.

    This chapter is told in the point of view of Ken.

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    Chapter 7 - Enemies



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    You're not going to find out what all that was about anytime soon.
    Last edited by Zekurom; 18th June 2010 at 08:49 PM.
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    Here's Chapter 8. I won't say anything just yet, but be prepared for immense amounts of craziness as the next few chapters come along.

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    Chapter 8 - Lost in Pewter City!



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    So, we now have a new Pokemon, Hikaru the Garchomp! And a cosplay convention! How nice.

    You'll notice that I basically throw canon out the window with this story. That's part of it.
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    Oh, come on, no reviews? Oh well, I'll trudge on.

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    Chapter 9 - A “Pokémon” Contest



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    Case in point about the craziness, Hikaru has now taken on his full role as a Garchomp cosplayer. And wouldn't you know it? He has an Adamant nature.

    I have a small disclaimer to make: I've never been to a cosplay event myself, so I wouldn't actually know anything about the types of things that they do.
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    You people are really something. Three chapters without a single review. This is the fourth:

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    Chapter 10 - To Appeal During Battle



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    Like I said - throws canon right out the window.
    Last edited by Zekurom; 17th October 2010 at 11:28 PM.
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    And here's chapter 11! My, you people are a riot.

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    Chapter 11 - To Look Good During Battle



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    And so, in this chapter, we see the scoring system in action. It has no basis in canon, being pretty much entirely my creation. I'd like comments on whether it seems realistic or not.
    Last edited by Zekurom; 18th June 2010 at 08:52 PM. Reason: Spoiler tags.
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    I feal really bad that you barley get any reveiws. Here's one of mine. I think the plot is really good. I like the discription. It paints a vivid picture in my mind especially when you said

    "Suddenly, about seven sharp leaves came shooting straight at Rachel, and two more leaves can shooting at her followed a curved pattern. Rachel dodged the first two, but the next two were intent on reaching her. After she dodged them, they swerved back. Doesn't matter, she thought, I can just burn them away. She shot flames from her hands, burning the two magical leaves to a crisp."

    You are a fantastic writer so don't give up!

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    Quote Originally Posted by alster08 View Post
    ... and two more leaves can shooting at her followed a curved pattern. ...
    Thanks for catching a spelling mistake. ^_^
    The word "quadragonal" is the only word with "dragon" in it where "dragon" is not a root word. That makes it awesome.

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    And here's chapter 12. Sorry for the really long delay, I had summatives to work on.

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    Chapter 12 - Anyone Up for Basketball?



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    I use the term "spiral-eyed" to describe the spiraly eyes that a Pokemon gets when it faints. Humans can get it too.

    Actually, in this story, humans can faint just like Pokemon do. Strange?

    I apologize if "Kaze no Message" isn't actually by Rica Matsumoto. I might be thinking of a different theme song.
    The word "quadragonal" is the only word with "dragon" in it where "dragon" is not a root word. That makes it awesome.

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