I'm glad you found the fight against Team Rocket good, as it was the main focus of the chapter. As for Jinkourai, I had a lot of fun writing him as he is definitely an interesting villain. As for the experiment he was testing, let's say that the chapter was merely a hint of what is to come.The fight against Team Rocket was paced pretty well and you certainly wrote that fight the best. I was mostly interested by Jinkourai though, the guy seems like a very interesting villain plus that experiment he was testing really made him threatening, so Roger will have to learn some fighting skills of his own if he wants to survive to see the future.
Blue is no doubt a powerful trainer, but his teamwork is indeed not the best considering the way he defeated the grunts alongside everyone else. And don't worry, Rose will play her role in the group in the future.It was nice seeing Blue again to prove how bad he is at team work, though he's good at his job at least since he was able to handle his own against all the other grunts. I'm also interested to see Rose again and wonder what will happen now that she's in the cast.
Having Roger and Rose talk and interact with each other was the primary goal here considering the way they were separated from each other. That, and they also consider each other as siblings. As for Roger and his wallet, yeah poor guy XDChapter 7 was a shorter chapter but it was a good refreshing chapter, it was nice to see Roger talk to Rose again, and I feel sorry for the poor guy and his wallet xD that just has to suck.
I can't reveal anything specific, but I can tell that "Sevii" has more than one meaning in this story.I'm curious about what Team Rocket's plan will lead to though, with a name like that I feel like we're going to be seeing the Sevvi Islands again pretty soon.
I'll go and have a look. Thanks for pointing that out.Aside from that there were various places were some words were missing or spelled wrong, plus I don't know but sometimes you seem to confused were with was, it's not anything too bad though but it's easy to catch at times.
It will be a big struggle in more than one way, don't worryI'm also intrigued by the triangle you've created here. Aside from Roger and his party we also have Equality and now Team Rocket into the mix, it'll be a very big struggle from now on.