5th December 2008, 09:50 PM #1
I'm Fired Up!
Fighting Till The End
Here's teh super fic, that reminds yout not to give up,this fic may sometimes include things fromt eh real world, and the pokemon show.
Pokemon Fighting Till the End
We humans live in the pokemon world. This world is full by creatures call pokemon. Pokemon are creatures with great powers and with different abilities. We play with them, and fight together with the,, pokemon give us strength and friendship; also they help us belong, and help us with our daily lives.
It’s another great day in the Sinnoh region, this is one of the many regions that’s full of pokemon, the Sinnoh region is a region with every single type of pokemon and every single type of trainer.
In the top of a mountain a man is walking in a soft terrain full with rocks, and mud. The man is wearing a pearl white shirt, which reflects the light of the sun, his pants are brown you can’t notice that their full of mud, cause of the color; he’s also wearing brown moccasins shoes; kinda weird to wear those kinds of shoes on a hiking trip.
“Ah it’s another good day in the mountains of Sinnoh” the man took a deep breath to let the fresh air of the mountains in. “I can’t believe I’m finally here, I need to remind myself why I do this” the man scratched his head looking down the mountain.
“Okay time to work, come on out smeargle” a pokemon came out of his pokeball: the pokemon was kinda of a white and brown color, he really stood out on the mountain, he had short legs but he looked like the kind of pokemon that’s good at climbing things, the weirdest thing about this guy is that he had a painters hat, you know those French hats that painters used, and weird as it was it had a paint brush for a tail.
“So what do you think, should I draw all the bird pokemon in the trees, or the machokes, and other climbing pokemon that are climbing the mountains. Or maeby we could just simply draw everything” he turned back to smeargle. “So what do you think smeargle” the man asked as smeargle starter painting the whole mountain sight.
“While your painting I’ll get back to my book” he took a book out. The book had the title called “The tale of a hero” the book looked kinda new actually it wasn’t even finish.
The man got another pokeball out of his belt. “Go ambipon” he got his writing assistant ambipon; with his two arms he was the perfect writing parnert.
“You know what we have to do ambipon, so help me remember everything that happen that day.” You see this man and ambipon have a strong connection with each other, they are able to see in each others memory, their friendship that was so strong that couldn’t break by anything. Ambipon nodded as he and the man looked at the sky remembering everything, including the dream that had started it.
300 years ago
In a field of mountains a man and his lucario are walking in a mountain, their arms are bleeding apparently they had been in a big battle on their way to the mountain.
“Come on lucario we have to hurry” The man said as lucario just looked at him. It stopped walking and just sat there.
“Come on, we’re so close we have to hurry if we want to do the seal” then they heard an explosion and a skarmony went flying to get them, “Lucario watch out” he pushed lucario out of the way as skarmony stabbed him in the back.
He’s back was broken and bleeding there was no way he could walk, or talk cause he was coughing blood, and less save the world from the great evil that was approaching.
“Go, lucario you have to leave me here, if you don’t then everything will be lost” the man kept coughing blood lucario just stood there watching, he couldn’t move plus he was dead scare that the skarmony might comeback. But one moment his master stopped moving and breathing.
“Sir Arron, are you okay” the lucario spoke; apparently pokemon could talk in that time. Lucario kept shaking his master but he wouldn’t wake up the pokemon finally decided to take the seal, and took it to the mountain.
Lucario has never done this, he usually helped his master with the missions, but now he had to do it all alone. He had served humans all his life he didn’t know how to do this yet.
He finally saw the temple where they had to put the seal. When he got in the temple he saw the place where he had to put the seal. It was kinda of a pedestal, although it looked more like a grave; it had an empty space in the middle.
But when he was approaching it something came from outside.
In the shining night sky a shadow that you could almost see was floating, lucario couldn’t see anything till he saw its blue eyes that could paralyze you instantly, after a few seconds lucario could finally see the shadow, its white head that combine with its shadows covered his right eye; he also had a red collar on his neck kinda like a chain to keep his power under control. Finally lucario could see who this was, none other than the shadow pokemon darkrai. “So you came ha darkrai, why do you want to destroy our kingdom?” Lucario asked growling at darkrai.
“That way, everyone can see the power of darkness and no one will be able to stop me” darkrai spoke letting a maniacal laugh that was heard through the temple.
“Well, my master is hurt, my kingdom was destroyed, and now I gotta face you alone, but I’ll never give up on my mission.” Lucario’s ears raised to the air as he formed a blue orb in between his hands. “You really think you can beat me” darkrai created a ball compost of black waves when he threw them they became a beam and attacked lucario.
Lucario yelled as he threw the blue orb. Both attacks crash with each other making a huge explosion, darkrai just flinched but lucario got hit very hard by the collision of the attacks.
“Your attempts to stop me won’t work; you’re just a normal pokemon that can’t compare to the powers of a legendary pokemon like me.” Lucario got up using a lot of energy though “I won’t give up, I will fight till the end” lucario created some kind of spear that looked like a bone, it was bone rush.
“You really think that a simple bone rush will defeat my attacks” lucario started seeing things darkrai was getting bigger by the second and lucario was seeing pictures of his kingdom destroyed and everyone dead. “What is this, the kingdom is all destroy” lucario gasped.
“That’s what’s gonna happen once I defeat you, prepare yourself” darkrai fired a dark ball with a small purple sphere on the middle;, it hit lucario knocking him to the floor.
“I gotta use it now.” Lucario used his super speed to get to the pedestal of the seal darkrai couldn’t believe how fast he was; but lucario was no match for his dark powers. “Take this, dark void” dark void hit lucario’s feet this stopped him just a few inches away from the pedestal.
“This is my only choice” lucario got up. Darkrai noticed this so he fired some shadow balls at lucario, lucario just kept walking ignoring all the explosions near him when he finally got to the pedestal he got the seal out but a flying circle flew to lucario and stabbed him “AAAAAAAAAHHHHHH” lucario screamed as he got stab by the dark pulse.
“Yeah, fall to my feet you weak lucario, you deserve to die” lucario glared at darkrai. “Your wrong as long as I have a destiny, I will always fight for what’s right” lucario got up and after all he finally put the seal in the pedestal.
“You unfortunately, don’t know that it takes about three minutes for the seal to work, I think that by that time you will be dead, and I sill will have time to destroy the seal” darkrai spoke as he fired another shadow ball that send lucario flying.
Lucario thought everything was lost but a shining creature appeared before him: this creature had a blue floating body, it didn’t have either arms or legs, it had to pink circles in its back, and his face was shaped like a crescent moon. “Cresselia, the legendary pokemon of the moon” lucario was surprised to see such a legendary pokemon.
“I came to help you lucario you have fought bravely, and now the seal is set you can finally rest.” As soon as cresselia said that the seal glew in blue and it started absorbing darkrai.
“You may have defeated me this time, but I will comeback someday” darkrai’s whole body was absorb into the seal.
“Is it over?” Lucario asked as he started glowing. “It isn’t actually over, darkrai was right he is gonna comeback when the seal loses its power” cresselia answered lucario’s question. “But how will we stop him?” Lucario was worried about that great evil coming back.
“You don’t have to worry, when that day comes a new hero will rise and stopped him; but for now on we just have to wait and pray that, that new hero is ready for the challenged.” Lucario just nodded and it vanished. Things were finally calmed, for now.
5th December 2008, 09:55 PM #2
A black and white world
An interesting idea...pretty much wrecked by uninteresting telling. Sorry, this is far too bland for the story you're trying to convey.
5th December 2008, 10:00 PM #3
I'm Fired Up!
Just a prologue, teh real story takes place in the future of that, it gets more interesting.
5th December 2008, 10:25 PM #4
A black and white world
But I haven't seen any improvement in your storytelling abilities, that's the problem. It's still bland and monotone.
6th December 2008, 05:26 PM #5
I'm Fired Up!
Episode 1: It all starts on the ship
Kanto region, Celadon city. One of the biggest cities in the region of Kanto, a city with a lot of stores and buildings.
Inside a house on the outskirts of the city. In a big room full with computers, video games, magazines, books, and clothes a kid is sleeping anxiously waiting for the next day. The day he’ll finally get to go to the Golden region Academy, a special Academy that’s composed of different trainers from all the regions.
Then the alarm went off. “Okay, okay I hear you” he got up to turn off the alarm. He got out of his room to go to his bathroom and changed.
“Guess I’ll need to shave today” he washed his face and his coffee brown hair, and his White skin, he then picked the razor, and put the shaving cream on; he didn’t like to shave by himself, cause he didn’t like to get cut, but his dad said that he had to do it alone cause he was old enough.
It took him 20 minutes till he could end shaving, personally because he was going slowly so he wouldn’t cut himself this time, last time he fainted.
“Not bad still need a little more, but I don’t wanna kill myself if I keep going” he took his clothes off and took a shower.
When he got out of the shower he went back to his room to put his clothes on. “Well time to try the new package” he put on a few trends they were apparently new. It was a uniform: it came with a crimson red jacket, it had a white undershirt, the pants were also crimson red, as for the shoes they were brown moccasins, and finally it had a brown tie; although he didn’t liked using ties, but he had too.
He finally got dressed looking in the mirror he couldn’t believe he was going to the great Golden Region Academy. Normally only rich kids could go, but he was special the principal of the academy was an old friend of his family, and he offered to work in the academy grounds so he could go. So he was kinda like a charity case but he didn’t bothered.
“Well Ace, we have to go” he told himself looking at the mirror. Ace went down the stairs to the living room.
It was a normal living room having a kitchen right next to the living room, three sofas, a wide screen TV which was a gift for his father in fathers day, although Ace had to save a lot of money together with his mom to buy that thing.
“Hey mom, breakfast ready?” He asked as he saw eggs and beacon for breakfast, he went to pick up his eggs and beacon. He sat down next to his dad.
“Sure is son” Aces’ dad said apparently he got up early to see his son leave.
Ace had pretty good parents his mom being very lovely with her brownie red hair, and her pink shirt, and his dad with his straight hair, glasses, and green shirt.
Like every parent they had their ups and down. His mom being a nagger always reminding Ace about everything, mainly cause Ace forgot a lot of things, and his dad being a little inpatient and a perfectionist at everything. Their names were Aileen, and Phil.
“So today is the big day, are you excited to go to the new academy” his mom asked as she put the eggs on the desk. “Your mom’s right this is big, this academy has a great curriculum, you need to get good grades if you wanna get a scholarship” his dad took another sip of his coffee.
“Yeah but I’m going there to become a stronger trainer too” he started eating but his dad got a little annoyed.
Ace dad isn’t actually very fund of Ace wanting to be a trainer, a long time ago kids went on journeys around the world to train with their pokemon. But when it came to studying everyone got bad grades, so they decided to set the rule that only high school graduates could become trainers, but almost anyone didn’t make it, and those who did couldn’t stay in the league for too long.
“You know you also have to worry about getting into college,” his dad put down the coffee, and got up he didn’t want to argue today, after all his son was leaving today.
“Ace, go pick up your stuff, I’m taking you to the pier,” his mom said softly, and then she went to the room to change. “Yeah, I’m going, come on aipom” Ace went to the living room a monkey in color purple, with a hand for a tail was sleeping in the couch.
As the monkey got up in jump into Ace’s head just playing. “Hey little buddy” he said while he was petting aipom.
“Let’s go Ace” his mom was waiting in the door as Ace and aipom followed her outside.
They left the garage leaving the group of houses. They all looked kinda alike except that each of them had different color roof.
“I don’t think dad really cares about my dream of becoming a trainer,” Ace said trying to get a conversation. “It’s not that, it’s just that we both believe that you should try and concentrate on back up careers in case it doesn’t work.” Ace just nodded remembering all the times his dad told him to forget about training and study, the good thing is that now he was going to an academy where he could train his pokemon everyday.
In a few minutes they got to the pier. There was a big ship there, it was actually a cruise.
“Wow, look at that mom, there’s like 2000 rooms there, and look how many people” Ace was more excited than ever and couldn’t wait to get in the ship. “They say that you’re gonna get your own roommate in the ship, and that roommate is gonna be your academy roommate” his mom looked at the pamphlet of the school, and the cruise.
“Well, what’re we waiting for, let’s go aipom” Ace left the car without even worrying about his luggage. “Ace, your luggage” his mom yelled, I’m sure everyone knew who Ace was now. “Mom,” Ace muttered frowning.
Ace went to get his luggage out of the car and after promising his mom a million times he will be careful, and call her everyday she finally left him go.
“Well aipom, let’s go” Ace and aipom went up the stairs of the cruise preparing for what was coming.
As Ace got into the cruise, he saw the big living room all cover with golden lights. The lights made is seen as a very shining theater, there were at least a hundred rugs on the ship, each hall had two levels; people could stand in the terrace of each level and see what was happening below.
“Wow, if I keep looking at those lights I’ll go blind” Ace said as he turned around to see all the people. “One of this people is gonna be my roommate, I just hope is not one of those rich snots” aipom laughed as Ace checked his room number 1500.
He walked through the hallways as he saw each room, he didn’t manage to see much except all the people that were leaving their luggage; they either had a lot of luggage, or luggage that was already in the academy.
The other type of people that he saw were the very rich people that already knew each other, some of them were close. Ace knew that he was an outcast here he wasn’t just middle class, he didn’t knew anyone here except the principal, but that would make people call him teachers pet, or something.
Ace finally got to his room, he saw that his roommate was there already because there was some luggage in the second bed, and there was someone throwing things out of the closet.
Ace tried to talk to the kid but he threw a shampoo bottle and hit him in the face.
“Hey sorry dude” the kid rubbed his head smiling as he got some bandages out.
Ace didn’t manage to see much cause of the hit of the face; but he did saw a few things after he recovered: the kid was about three centimeters shorter than him, he wore a school uniform just like Ace, he had dark black hair combed in a kinda educated and normal manner, he had glasses although he didn’t looked blind from Ace point of view, he wore black shoes, and his skin was brown color.
“Don’t worry about it man” Ace rubbed his head to finish curing his head. “I’m sure you did it by accident” Ace smiled.
“Yeah, you see they make these rooms so rich, and educated; they even packed it with soaps, and shampoos, not in the bathrooms the closet, you know how weird that is!” the kid started yelling pointing at the closet.
“It’s weird, I thought you’ll be like one of those preppy kids” Ace said as he started to unpacked himself. “I know that’s what everyone thinks, especially since I’m from Goldenrod city in Johto which is known to have a lot of people with money” the kid said as he started helping Ace. “By the way my name is Juan.”
“Ace nice to meet ya” Ace and Juan shook hands. “Hey I see you have an aipom, that’s cool we both have pokemon that use their tails to fight” Juan got a pokeball out and it send smeargle out.
“Wow, a smeargle I’ve never seen one of those before” Ace had his eyes wide open as he looked at smeargle. “Yeah, they are more common on Goldenrod” Juan smiled as smeargle got in his head just like aipom got in Ace’s head.
After they stopped unpacking their stuff they decided to get out of the room and go check out the cruise, as they past through different students, from freshman, to senior.
Juan spent the whole tour telling Ace about the super rich kids and the normal rich kids, Ace noticed that Juan was actually a normal kid that just was born rich, he also noticed that he was a bit of a prankster, considering he put whoopee cushions and electric buttons in his hands, and he started making pranks to everyone.
“So, I’m hungry you wanna go to the dining room, I heard they serve pizza” Juan said smiling. Ace loved pizza a lot and knowing that Juan was kinda like him except for the prankster thing, they were pretty much alike.
As they got to the dining room they saw how big it was: it had a lot of candles in the ceiling, the desk was long there were actually two long desks, there was a buffet with a lot of things including pizza caviar, lobster, shrimps, and other kinds of food. “Wow, so far the only thing I tasted before, it’s the pizza” Ace said grabbing a plate and serve himself some pizza.
“Your right, but some of this stuff is not half bad, wanna try the shrimp” Juan said grabbing some shrimp for Ace.
After they had their plates, they went to find a seat; they found two free seats near some group of people that was talking about golf and everything rich people do. Ace noticed that with rich people there were normally rich pokemon, you know pokemon that didn’t know how to fight, and those that did weren’t probably so strong at it either. Aipom saw how many pokemon were acting just like their trainers.
As they sat this group of jocks came walking to them.
“Hey look is soccer kid” the jock in the front said. He had the uniform, his head was kinda bald more like shaved, he like Juan had brown skin, and he was throwing a football up and down.
“Wow, hey Rain” Juan said frowning.
“Who’s he Juan?” Ace asked having a bite of his pizza. “He is the biggest jerk of all, we went to the same school I was in the soccer team, and he was in the football team” Juan frowned again.
“What does that have to do with it” Ace asked. “Our parents are also rivals when it comes to their companies” Juan said.
“Yeah but my dad’s makes more money than yours, I mean I have my own personal jet and you don’t have one” Rain smirked at Juan this made Juan very angry.
“Hey, stop talking so rude to people we don’t go calling you preppie and snot and all those other things, so just shut the hell up okay” Ace yelled. This didn’t help in fact it only made things worst.
Rain left after that, he didn’t want to get in trouble on day zero of the school year that would have been pathetic.
“Hey dude thanks for standing up for me” Juan said as he smiled at Ace. “No sweat, we’re friends after all right” Ace smiled as they both high five.
About an hour later they went back to the room. Juan stayed sleeping, and Ace went to check out the rest of the ship he decided to go to the game room.
“I wonder what they have in the game room ah aipom?” Aipom just raised its shoulders as they entered.
He saw the room was full of games, not like arcade games, more like super famous, the most expensive games, there was a terrace to the right for people who wanted to looked at the sea while they were playing.
“Why don’t we try the mega destroyer” aipom cheered. As Ace was approaching the game he saw three girls talking in the terrace, Ace noticed one especial girl between the three: she wore the girls uniform which consisted of almost the same as the boys except they had to wear a long skirt, besides that she had long black hair, white skin, blue eyes, and black high heels.
Ace couldn’t stay away from looking at her, in fact he was so concentrated on her he lost the game easily. “Wow aipom, look at her, she’s so hot” aipom looked at Ace with a weird look, he was afraid that Ace would just look at the girl then try to ask her out one day, the girl will say no, and Ace will be destroyed that’s how it happened all the time for him.
The girl started coming to him, Ace was getting more nervous by the second he didn’t know why she was coming to him, or if she was just there to make fun of him.
“Hey, what’s your name?” She asked as Ace started sweating. “A-Ace” he stuttered. She just smiled which didn’t exactly helped Ace “my name is Kelly please to meet ya” she gave Ace her hand as he shook it gently she left, but after a few steps she turned around and said something.
“By the way, if you want a girl to like you try using some moisturizer for your hands their really dry” Kelly said giggling. “Okay” Ace was a little calmer now but he decided to leave the game room, maybe he needed to rest now.
“So this was a great day ha aipom, looks like we had a lot of things to do today” Ace said as he an aipom were walking to the room, aipom just nodded.
As he got to the room he was ready to turn in the towel when he noticed that Juan wasn’t in the room. He went outside and saw Juan and smeargle practicing.
“Go smeargle, iron tail” Juan ordered. Smeargle’s tail glew in a white light as it hit the wall of the ship almost breaking it.
“Hey be careful you could make the ship sink you know!” Ace yelled coming close to Juan. “Don’t worry I’m just practicing, you do know that if you’re a bad trainer you get beat up by the jocks, their really cruel, like real sport players” Juan said shrugging off the conversation.
“So how was the game room” Juan asked as he and Ace sat in some chairs. “Great I met this girl; her name is Kelly” Ace said blushing. “Oh, I see Ace has a crush on someone, don’t get your hopes up she might just be kidding, considering you look like those kids you just wanna mess with” Juan laugh but Ace didn’t really liked the comment a lot.
“You know, I only got into this school because I offered to work at the campus” Ace said as Juan just looked at him. “At least you’ll work for something, ever since I was a little kid I always had things handed out to me from other people, but I always tell them to let me do things by myself” Juan looked at the stars.
Ace noticed that both Juan and Kelly looked totally different from the rest of the kids in the ship. Juan was a prankster, and Kelly was a kind girl, they both were different and alike in their own ways too. Ace started looking at the stars too as he was thinking what would happen in the academy.
“Well, I’m beat how about you?” Juan stretched as he got up. “You don’t have to tell me twice” Ace answered. They both went to their rooms looking back at all the things that had happen during the day all the people, and things they saw, and the great friends they met.
Ace, and Juan finally went to sleep, Ace took a few minutes still digesting all that had happen; in less than 24 hours, he had made a great friend, found himself a crush, and an annoying jock that is sure to make his live in the academy a living hell, yep things at the academy were gonna be great, and smooth.
But as Ace starts his adventures in the academy, things start unfolding, and mysteries will be revealing.
6th December 2008, 06:11 PM #6
Finalize! Black Ace!
It's very good, and the grammar is much better, as well as the storytelling ability.
------------------------------ And there was war in heaven. Michael and his angels fought against the dragon, and the dragon and his angels fought back. But he was not strong enough, and they lost their place in heaven. The great dragon was hurled down―that ancient serpent called the devil, or Satan, who leads the world astray. He was hurled to the earth, and his angels with him. Revelation 12:7-9
7th December 2008, 03:15 PM #7
I'm Fired Up!
Episode 2: Academy Madness
Yesterday Ace left the great city of Celadon, a city in the Kanto region. Ace got accepted in the prestigious Golden Region Academy, and he was excited to go. On the ship he met a lot of people, starting with his new roommate Juan the prankster, Rain the jerk, and Kelly; his new crush.
Ace woke up at a weird sound from the ship; it was the ship’s horn let out a WHEEEE sound. Ace looked around the thrashed room, he new that Juan had been there just by looking. Who would have thought that someone so crazy could be so messy? Ace finally got up brushing his coffee brown hair; which as always was a mess in the morning. He went to the closet and change; no really he just got in a change in a few seconds.
“Good thing all those years of practicing changing would pay off” He said laughing a little bit. He walked up to the basket where aipom was supposed to be sleeping. “Where did he go now” Ace put his head down; he knew aipom wasn’t the kind of pokemon that would stay calm.
Ace got outside of his room and started looking for aipom. He past through all the rooms and the ship’s living room; he didn’t saw aipom, or anybody. “I wonder where everybody is?” he asked with an annoyed face and scratching his head.
Suddenly Kelly came out of the girl’s hall. Ace stared at her; as always his face was blushing, his eyes were wide open, and his mouth was open. Kelly gave him a gentle smile and walked up to him.
“We better hurry or we’ll be late” She said as she grabbed his hand to take him to the front deck. “But why are we going outside?” he asked while they were walking. “To see the island, everyone comes out so that they can see the island from the distant, you could say it’s a tradition” She started running which gave Ace some trouble; since he had to catch up.
They finally got to the front deck. The deck had bars on the front so that no one could fall off, the floor was a wooden floor, there were desk and balloons all around, and everyone on the ship was there.
“I see everyone; but where’s Juan?” He asked. Then a piece of bread fell on his head, Ace looked up to the second floor. Juan, smeargle, and aipom were laughing at him, which cause Ace’s face to turn into a frown. “Nice one guys, very funny” he said taking away the bread crumbs.
“Hey you need to think faster” Juan said still laughing it out. Aipom jumped down to Ace’s head. “Hey Kelly want to come?” he looked at her, Kelly was a little nervous. “No thanks, I’ll see you at the academy” she said in a low tone and then walked up to her friends.
“So that’s the girl, she’s cute, I’m telling you she’s messing with you” Juan said giving him a teasing smile again. “Why do I think I’ll need to get use to you being annoying” Ace said with annoyance. “It’s all part of the package my friend” Juan smirked.
“I just wonder why is it that she has to leave all the time” as Ace said that Juan spotted her. He frowned a little bit, “No wonder she’s a friend of Rain’s” he pointed at the first floor, and Ace saw Kelly talking to Rain and the other members of the group. “I see she doesn’t want me to get in trouble” he smiled a little bit. Juan turned away, “I’m telling you dude, messing with you” he said word by word like if Ace was a little kid. “Shut up” Ace said throwing a weak punch on his shoulder.
They could finally see the island from there. It was a big island mostly covered with trees, but on the middle there was a huge white building, with many other buildings inside; some of them being the dorms and the others being the teaching buildings, there was also a football stadium and a basketball stadium next to the soccer one.
“Wow would you look at that” Ace had his eyes way opened; he was looking around the building. “Yep, it’s big alright” Juan replied. All of the kids just kept talking like if the academy was something normal for them. “I hate people that don’t think this kinds of things are cool” Juan said turning away.
The ship finally stopped in the island; there was actually a pier that led straight to the door of the academy. Ace stared at the academy up close. “Time to go ha aipom” he looked at the little monkey that was on his shoulder, aipom nodded cheerfully. “Well lets go” Juan got a head start from everyone, Ace as always followed.
They finally got into the academy. It was full of bushes, and buildings; most of them were white the rest were brown. “Coolaid” Ace said looking around the academy. “Dude what’s coolaid?” Juan asked in a weird tone. “I created it” Ace smiled. “Don’t use it ever again or I’m moving out” Juan crossed his shoulders and started walking.
He stopped in front of the soccer stadium. “Look at that, it’s the biggest stadium I ever seem” Juan stared at the stadium with his arms crossed. “I can’t wait to play there!” he shouted throwing his arms in the air.
“I noticed there are football stadiums, and soccer stadiums; but there’s not any pokemon stadium” Ace asked looking around for anything he might have missed on the way. “I know, pokemon battles don’t give you a lot of credits as other sports, so people just made little pokemon fields near the dorms, I can show them to you if you want” Juan started running. “Isn’t there a way we can go anywhere without running” Charles whined following.
Juan stopped near a field that was next to the cheerleading building. “That’s it, there’s only fields” Ace said surprised about how little people cared about pokemon battles. “Yep but there’s fields next to every building so we don’t have to worry” Juan said getting into the field. “Hey wait” Ace went in as well.
Kelly was about to enter the cheerleading building; then she saw Ace and Juan going into the pokemon field. “I wonder what their doing” she hid inside a bush that was next to the field. “I think their going to have a battle” she said in a low tone.
“HEY KELLY COMEBACK HERE” a voice yelled at her. Kelly turned around it was her best friend Nina, she had the girls uniform, brown skin; kinda like Juan’s, some of the buttons in her shirt were unbutton, and her skirt was shorter than usual.
“Hey Nina, what is it?” Kelly asked talking to Nina as she walked back to the building. “The tryouts are about to start we’re going to be late” she said to Kelly. “Okay, I’ll go soon” Kelly looked back at Ace and Juan. “Don’t tell me you like that loser, I mean he’s far from your league Kelly, now come on” Nina grabbed her arm and took her inside. Neither of them noticed that Ace was looking at them
“Hey dude, turn around” Juan yelled from the other side of the field. “Sure, so should we start!” Ace yelled back. “Sure, go smeargle!” Juan sent smeargle to the field. “Go aipom use your mega punch” aipom leapt from the floor and its third arm glew white like a punch; unfortunately smeargle dodged the attack before aipom got a hit.
“That was a good way to dodge” Ace smiled confidently. “Yeah, smeargle and I won the Goldenrod battling tournament” Juan smirked and stared at Ace, “You have something big coming to you roomy” they both laughed. “Aipom go and use swift” aipom waved its third arm around and it let a bunch of golden starts fly around. Smeargle dodged all of the stars with ease. “I’m not stupid you know, smeargle and I’ve trained since we were little, we know what to do” Juan clenched his fist. “Then show me, aipom focus punch!” Ace shouted at aipom.
Aipom’s fist glew white again; but this time it was more of a crystal white fist. Aipom ran to smeargle and leapt out; it finally did a hit on smeargle. “Smeargle get up and use your iron tail” Juan ordered and smeargle’s tail glew iron like and it hit aipom on the face; since aipom was close enough.
“Aipom recover and use your double team” aipom started creating copies of himself all around the field. “Smeargle use your hyper beam!” Juan yelled the command and smeargle fired a deep orange beam at aipom. “Aipom get up” aipom got up a few seconds later. “We have to give it our last shot, go and use triple combo!” Ace yelled at the top of his voice. You see Ace and aipom like to create their own techniques, so they created a triple combo line in which they used all three elemental punches.
Aipom ran with a fist crackling with electricity, it destroyed the ground. Smeargle jumped; but the static of the punch paralyzed its feet. “Nice plan” Juan smirked. “It ain’t over yet” Ace threw his punch in the air, aipom’s fist glew blue and it jumped to hit smeargle, the punch froze smeargle’s legs. “Now that its legs are taking care of, go finish it off” as Ace ordered that aipom’s fist glew in a deep red color. Aipom went and hit smeargle’s gut directly.
Smeargle bounced off the floor. After a few seconds it finally stayed in the floor. Juan went to pick smeargle off the floor. “Nice battle smeargle, you too Ace I never battled someone that strong” Juan said recognizing Ace. Ace scratched his head, “thanks, me and aipom’ve trained for a long time.”
Then they heard a clapping noise. Ace and Juan looked at a kid that was clapping at them. The kid had the same uniform as them, the right side of his shirt was outside his pants and the left was in, he wore sneakers shoes, he had a pale white skin that glew with the sun, and he had a blond straight hair.
“So, you’re Ace ha” the kid asked looking at Ace. “Yeah why do you want to know?” Juan asked from inside the field. “Sorry my name’s Jake, and I was watching your battle, I saw you yesterday at the arcade, and you look like a good trainer so I wanted see what you were made of” Jake said as he got into the field. “Okay, it’s a pleasure to meet you” they shook hands. Juan took a few minutes before trusting Jake but they finally got to a friendship point; barely.
They went outside the field and kept walking through the academy. “So are you guys joining a team?” Jake asked when they past through the stadium. “Yep, I’m joining the soccer team” Juan said pointing at himself. “I’m not sure, I already have to work at the campus I don’t think I’ll have time to do any sport” Ace said raising his shoulders. “I’m joining the basketball team, so far its two out of three” Jake said. The guys didn’t really paid attention to his comment.
Then a group of girls came running at them. They all surrounded Jake, taking down Ace and Juan on the process. All the girls were screaming the same thing; they wanted Jake to go out with them. “Girls, calm down, I’m hanging with my friends right now, so let me be” he said making the group of girls divide. The girls left and Ace and Juan got up; after a few minutes of shaking in the floor though. “What the freakin hell was that!” Juan yelled after cleaning a footprint off his shirt. Jake laughed, “Let’s just say that if you want to hang with me, you’re at your own risk of getting run over by girls” he laughed again.
“Maybe we shouldn’t be around him” Juan whispered to Ace. Ace took a step forward. “Would you give us some tips on how to get girls” Ace said bowing to Jake. “I would but I don’t really know my self, it just happens” Jake scratch his head in nervousness. “Can we just go see our dorms, please I’m anxious” Juan said breaking up the silence that was going on.
Juan and Ace got a different dorm from Jake’s so they have to separate. “Wow look at this place!” Juan yelled looking at the living room. The living room had about five big red couches, one couch where you could sink if you sat down, three flat screens TVs, and about five stairs leading to five halls of rooms.
“Maybe we should check our rooms out” Ace grabbed Juan and took him into one of the stairs. They found their rooms it was number 1500. They saw their room wasn’t as big as the room on the ship; but it worked for them. The room had a green floor, aqua blue walls, the beds had crimson red sheets, and there were two closets for both of them. “Like I said look at this place, it’s so cool” Juan said staring at the bedroom. “Yep, now let’s put our stuff here and then we have to go meet with Jake” Ace reminded him; he put his luggage on the bed and left the room. “Oh come on, let me rest” Juan said following Ace for a change.
When they got outside they decided to go to Jake’s dorm. They were already by Jake’s dorm that they just had to get in; but they noticed that a crowd was forming in the poke field nearby. “What’s happening there?” they said at the same time; they started walking to the crowd.
They saw that Jake was having a pokemon battle. It was against Rain himself. “Why are they fighting?” Ace asked a spiky hair kid nearby.
“I don’t know I think Rain started calling a girl ugly, and that kid jumped in to help her” the kid stared back at the battle that was about to start. Ace and Juan went past the crowd and into the pokemon field.
“Jake what the hell happened?” Ace asked as they got to Jake. Jake turned around to see them in the face, “This jerk called that girl over there ugly just because she didn’t want to kiss him, he told her that she had to do it no matter what, so I jumped him; but he was stronger and pushed me away, so instead I challenged him to a pokemon battle” Ace stared at the girl with brown and blond hair that was crying. He turned to Rain who was glaring at him.
“Hey look, the blond loser’s a friend of the king of the losers” they all started laughing. Ace noticed that Nina, and Kelly where with them, Nina was laughing too but Kelly was just staring at him with a sad look. “Jake, teach him a lesson” Ace said putting his hand of Jake’s shoulder. “You don’t have to tell me twice” Jake got into a battle stance and got his pokeball out. “Let’s go my friend, we have to win this battle” Jake threw the pokeball to the air and a buizel came out. Buizel was a weasel pokemon, it had an orange fur with a yellow floater, it had two tails which buizels usually use as propellers for when they swim.
“Wow, a buizel, I never seen one of those before” Ace stared at buizel till the battle started.
“Okay, then I’ll fight with this go usaring” Rain threw his own pokeball and a big brown grizzly bear came out, it had a yellow circle in its chest.
Jake threw his hand in the air so that he could give his first command. “Go buizel, aqua jet” buizel shoot water all around its body and became a water rocket, when the rocket was about to hit usaring it grabbed the aqua jet and threw buizel to the other side of the field. “I won’t let this happen go buizel, use water gun” buizel fired a stream of water at usaring’s chest.
“Usaring hyper beam” Rain ordered. Usaring fired a hyper beam from its mouth, the beam almost hit buizel; buizel dodge the attack in the last minute and went back to its battle stand. “Okay buizel, go and use your sonic boom” Jake threw his fist on the air with a confident look. Buizel jumped into the sky and it started spinning, after a few spins its two tail shoot wave of air at usaring, the sonic boom made a straight hit.
“Usaring thunder punch” usaring took its chance to attack and it got its fist to crackle with electricity. The punch leapt and hit buizel on its chest, it also electrocuted its body. “Buizel, get up and use brine!” Jake yelled his command and buizel fired two jets of water out of its mouth, one of them hit usaring on the back and the other one hit it in the front.
“I’m tired of playing with you, usaring use focus blast!” Rain yelled at usaring. Usaring fired a huge blue blast from its mouth; the blast hit buizel and sent it flying. “Buizel noooooooooo!” Jake ran to assist his pokemon. Buizel could barely move after that focus blast. “The battle’s over and I win” Rain turned around to look at Ace and the others. “Nice try losers; but there’s no way you can beat me on a battle” he laughed together with his group and they left.
“Don’t worry Jake, you were pretty good” Juan said patting Jake on his shoulder. Jake stared at him, “Yeah, but I wanted to teach him a lesson.” Ace just stared at Jake’s disoriented face; he grew angry at the sight of his friend being sad cause of Rain. He turned to look at Rain’s group; he saw Kelly wasn’t even happy about being with them. He became really angry at him. *Rain, next time, I’ll battle with you, and I’ll win for sure* he thought clenching his fist with fury.
Ace and Juan went back to their rooms and where ready to got to sleep after the big day they had.
Ace was staring at the roof of his room, Juan was playing with a videogame Ace bought to school. Juan looked at him from his bed, he got up and walked up to his. “Come on, I know Rain’s a jerk; but eventually you’ll learn to live with him” Juan said patting Ace on the shoulder.
Ace continued staring at the roof. “I know but Jake was sad about it, and he didn’t just embarrassed Jake, he embarrassed that poor girl, and I’m sure that Kelly doesn’t even wants to be with him.” Juan went back to his bed before he said something. “Just know that Rain has a lot of people on his side, you lose a battle with him, you become the school loser for the whole four years.”
Ace stared back at the roof. After a few minutes he finally turned the lights off, he turned around on his bed so that his back would look at Juan, and close his eyes.
*I will beat him, I’m going to show everyone* he thought before he fell sleep on his new bed.
So Ace finally got to the academy, he and Juan met a new friend name Jake who was kinda odd, and after watching Jake lose against Rain, Ace finally decided that he will take care of Rain once and for all.
TO BE CONTINUED…
18th December 2008, 10:27 PM #8
Wow cool, as blackjack said the idea is interesting but the way it's being told is kinda bland but I got more into it as I kept reading. Another problem is grammar but overall a good story.
22nd December 2008, 10:28 PM #9
I'm Fired Up!
Chapter 3: Sun vs. Rain
Ace woke up at the sound of his alarm clock; Juan also had a super technology advanced clock, actually he had three of them, and they were all at full volume.
Ace finally got off bed. He went to his closet, he looked on his suitcase and got out a hammer he had packed in; he looked like one of those killers in horror movies. Ace went to his side of the bed and started hammering the clocks. Juan woke up all startled; like if he hadn’t slept for ten hours; which was the time they gave students till class started.
“What the hell!!!” Juan said jumping out of fear. Ace growled at him. “Juan, the next time that clock sounds, I’ll hit you with this” Ace put the hammer on Juan’s face. “Hey, no need to be so drastic, I wanted to make sure I woke up” he said nervously; he didn’t wanted to get hammered like that clock.
Ace just went back to his side and started changing; he turned to Juan. “Dude, I don’t feel good changing in front of another guy, so turned the hell around” Juan noticed that Ace was in a bad move; who wouldn’t it was the first day of school, and after what happened yesterday is no wonder.
They went down to the dorm cafeteria. Ace served himself some eggs and bacon and went to sit down on a table nearby; Juan did the same. “So what do you think we got?” Juan asked taking a bit of his blueberry pancakes. “I don’t know, probably the usual you know math, history, English” Ace took a piece of bacon. Everyone was staring at them. “What’s up with them?” Ace asked looking at the crowd. “After yesterday everyone thinks that your going to challenge Rain soon, I do too” Juan said taking another bite. “I wanted too, but there’s no need for that” everything went quiet after that.
Ace and Juan were walking down campus looking for their class building. “Hey Juan, what you got?” Ace asked looking at Juan’s schedule.
Juan’s class schedule
Algebra 1b- Mr. Thomson
Gym- Mr. Camden
Pokemon studies- Mr. Krane
Ace stared back at Juan. “Hey we got third and fourth period together” he said happily (I’m trying to use some Tom Swifties so here you go). “Yeah, too bad, I heard Mr. Camden likes to kill his students when it comes to gym” He started to pout at the thought. “I thought you liked gym?” Ace stared at him with a confuse face. “I do, but this guy has a reputation, anyway I gotta go” Juan walked away from Ace and went into a building nearby.
Ace was still looking around for his first period building; he had to hurry the bell was about to ring.
Ace’s class schedule
Algebra 1a- Mrs. Jonson
Spanish- Mr. Sanchez
Gym- Mr. Camden
Pokemon studies- Mr. Krane
Ace finally found his building, it was a very weird shaded building; it had numbers and formulas all around, it also had a lot of letters that form the word math on the middle of the building.
Ace ran down the hall; class was about to start and he didn’t wanted the teacher to think that he was a troublesome kid. When he finally entered the classroom he saw that every kid in the class was already there. Ace stared at his teacher, she had a white skin, with short brown hair, she was wearing a white working coat, and had a long white skirt.
“May I help you” Mrs. Jonson asked looking at Ace with her glasses. Ace just got nervous; but he managed to get the words out. “I’m Ace Sun, and I’m sorry I’m late for class” Ace stuttered with nervousness. The teacher just pointed Ace to his seat, it was in the right end of the class room; too bad that the seats were like college seats, it went from down to up till the seats reached the ceiling.
Ace sat on his seat; it was very comfortable, like a luxury seat. Ace turned around and guess who was there, Kelly was seating next to him.
“Hey Ace” She said nervously. “Hey Kelly, I didn’t know we had this class together” Ace laughed a little bit, although it made the teacher shut him off.
On and off first period was kinda fast, the teacher just explained all of the things they were going to do for the year; around ten minutes before class Ace fell sleep, which actually gave away the fact that Kelly was sleeping with her eyes open.
Ace finally got out of the classroom, although he went to have a little conversation with Kelly before he went to his next class. “So Kelly, I’ve wanted to ask you this the whole day” Ace said seriously (see there’s another one). Kelly stared at him before answering, “What is it?” she asked with a sad look on her face. “Well, why do you hang out with Rain, I mean he’s a jerk” he said. “Rain’s popular and our families always wanted us to be together so I just hang out with him” she said walking off. “You don’t have to, we’re on this school without anyone else you can make your own choice!” he yelled, Kelly didn’t answered.
Ace was walking down to the languages building. The building was practically brown with a lot of flags in it, there were flags from most of the countries that speak Spanish, China, Japan, Korea, France, Germany, and Hungarian. Ace stared at the building in awe, “Wow, there’s a lot of flags right there” Ace gasped and got in the building.
When Ace entered his class he saw that it was the same as the algebra class; except that there were all kinds of Spanish things around. “Cool” Ace took his seat.
Again another surprise, Jake was on his Spanish class, he sat on the row below him. “Hey Jake!” Ace yelled.
“Oh hey Ace, how you doing man” Jake took his seat and started talking to Ace. “So are you feeling okay about yesterday” Ace asked him; obviously referring to his battle with Rain. “Doing okay, buizel is a little embarrass about it tough” Jake shrugged. The Spanish teacher came in. His teacher looked very weird, he was bald with brow skin, he had a long mustache, he was wearing a broken jacket and old brown pants.
“Hola studiantes” Mr. Sanchez said to them. The whole class looked pretty clueless; well not Ace, half of his blood was Spanish, and he could practically understand 90% of the stuff. “Hey, did you know what he said” Jake asked in silence. “Yeah, he said hello students” Ace said with a smile. “You know Spanish don’t you?” Jake looked at him with a frown. “A little” Ace gave him a grin.
The whole class went by again. The teacher threw a few words here and there; but Ace managed to pass through the first day.
“So, what class do you have now” Jake asked. Ace stopped and gave him an annoyed look. “Dude, we have lunch” he yelled and kept walking. Jake follow, “Hey, I didn’t know.”
When they entered the cafeteria there were a lot of students already. Jake looked at the line, “At this rate, we won’t be able to get lunch” Jake said in a sad way. “Let’s just look for Juan” Ace started walking. He finally saw Juan sitting on a table by the window. “Hey guys over here” Juan said waving at them.
“So, how have your day gone” Juan asked eating some frenchfries. “Well, I got algebra and Spanish” Ace told him grabbing some fries. “I got computers and Spanish” Jake said trying to grab the fries but Juan slapped him in his hand.
Rain and his group walked past them together with Kelly. Ace and the others were hoping for him to just pass by; not such luck. Rain leaned close to Jake.
“Hey losers, how have your sucky day been?” Rain asked mockingly. Ace just blew him off. “Shut up Rain, don’t you have to go discover how to use fire or something” Ace said. Rain just got up and grabbed his tie. “Listen I don’t care about beating you anymore, so just shut it, or die” Rain said with fury.
Ace chuckled. “Your right, I don’t care about either” Ace grabbed Rain’s hand. “So, how about we settle this” Ace flipped him over and made him crash with another table. Rain got up and tried to give Ace a punch; but Ace jumped him and took him down. They started throwing punches, and kicks at each other.
It took about five minutes for a teacher to get there and stopped the fight; Ace was more beat up than Rain, but he looked like he could take some more.
“Let me go!” Ace yelled while he was being stopped by Juan. “Yeah, leave him to me!” Rain yelled being held off by one of his friends. “Rain, I’m tired of you treating everyone here like crap, I challenge you to a pokemon battle after school” Ace yelled getting out of the cafeteria.
Ace finally got to the gym on time; he had to go to the nurse’s office for some recovery. Ace wasn’t welcome by Mr. Camden well, he looked like an army man, and he had huge muscles, a short army brown hair, and a sleeveless blue shirt.
“Why are you late scumbag!!?” Mr. Camden yelled spitting at Ace. “I was in the nurse’s office” Ace said cleaning the spit up. “Okay, just for that you got the whole class three laps” He yelled again.
Everyone was angry at Ace for giving them a hard time, Juan wasn’t so much angry but he still was. “Wow, tough break dude” Juan said running besides him. “Well, I’m just worry about the battle, I mean Rain looks like a strong trainer” Ace said with a worried look.
They finally stopped running and started playing soccer; yeah they didn’t really explained what they were going to do for the year, just run and play till you die, how fun right.
Ace finally came out, all of his body was aching like crazy; actually the pain even had a rhythm. Juan came to him and gave him a slap on the back, Ace screamed cause of the pain. “Sorry dude” Juan said laughing. “Don’t worry so guess we got pokemon studies next, I think that’s the class that’ll be easier after Spanish” Ace said patting his shoulder.
They were finally in fourth period pokemon legends. The classroom was the same as the others, except that it was mostly black. Juan stared at the classroom. “What’s with the black?” Juan sat next to Ace as they waited for their teacher to come.
The teacher looked like a scientist, he had round oval glasses, with brown coffee hair, he was wearing a lab coat, and had brown pants. Mr. Krane turned around and faced the students.
“Hello student’s my name is Mr. Krane, and I’m your teacher for this year, now to tell you the truth I’m new here, I just got here yesterday from the Orre region” Mr. Krane wrote his name and region on the board. “Hey, Ace I heard of this guy, he help in the Cipher problem that was happening on Orre 9 years ago” Juan whispered to Ace.
“I see some of you know me” Krane looked at Ace and Juan. “Don’t worry, I won’t bite, you see I help my stepson Michael save Orre from the evil shadow pokemon team Cipher’ Krane also wrote that; everyone was happy that at leas they’ll get a good story.
Krane talked about his adventures in Orre the whole period, leaving Ace and Juan to have some entertainment before the great battle.
Ace was on his room looking for aipom’s pokeball. “I found it’ he said with a serious tone. “You sure you want to do this, is really dangerous?” Juan looked at him with sad eyes.
Ace stared at him with a confident look. “Listen Rain has been a jerk all this time, I’m tired about what he does, and I’ll battle him no matter what” Ace walked out of the run. Juan chuckled, “Ace Sun, you’re really something” he stood up and walked off.
Ace finally got to the pokemon field that was in front of his dorm. Rain was waiting with his arms crossed. “Finally, are you ready to lose” Rain smirked. “Yeah, but I’m ready to see you lose” Ace said with confidence. “Okay, go usaring” Rain threw his usaring in the battle. Before Ace put aipom in, he thought about Kelly; she was standing there with a sad face like last time; she knew this wasn’t right. Ace growled and threw aipom’s pokeball on the floor.
Aipom looked at usaring, no matter what it wasn’t scare by the big grizzly’s size. “Okay let’s go” Jake said putting some flags into the floor. “Good luck” Juan said sitting in the stands.
“Okay aipom use thunder punch” aipom leapt up and its fist glew yellow with some sparks, it went to hit usaring. “Usaring ice beam” usaring fired an icy beam at aipom. “Now go fire punch” aipom got its fist red and it went to attack usaring. “Usaring, use your mega claw” usaring’s claws glew a deep white and both attacks crashed.
“You think you can beat me with brute force, your more stupid than you look, prepare to die” Rain mocked Ace. “I’ll win to show you and everyone, go aipom double team” aipom nodded and it created various copies of itself. “Oh really, usaring use focus blast” usaring growled and it fired a huge ball of energy at one of them.
Ace laughed. “That didn’t work for my count” he said smiling. “Oh yeah, well look at this, go usaring use earthquake” usaring created a huge shock wave that destroyed every single aipom, and it gave a lot of damage to the real one.
Aipom got up after struggling. Rain laughed maniacally, “Now what loser, you think you can beat me, your just a loser like everyone of your friends” he kept laughing.
Ace opened his mouth. “SHUUUUUUUUUUTTTTTTTT UPPPPPPPPP!!!” Ace yelled at the top of his voice. “I’m tire of you treating people like objects, I’m tired of you treating Kelly like a trophy, and I’m tire of you insulting my friends. Ace growled with fury, “Now this gets serious” he said.
Aipom got up and looked way stronger than before. “Now aipom use your focus punch” aipom’s fist glew white and he jumped at usaring. “Really thunder punch” usaring did that and both pokemon gave a punch to each other.
The battle kept going on like that for a good five minutes. Juan stared at the battle with nervousness; he has never seen Ace fight like that. “What is it Juan” Jake asked with his flag on his hands. “Ace looks so confident, like if hew would do anything to teach him a lesson, it kinda scares me dude” Juan said. “I know but he wants to defend us” Jake said.
Kelly was hearing the conversation from far. Nina looked at her.
“Kelly, are you okay, don’t tell me you still care about that loser” Nina said smirking. Kelly frowned and looked at her, she finally decided what to do for herself. “You know what Nina, shut up, Ace has something none of you have, he cares about people, and he cares about what people think about themselves, and he wants to protect them, if you don’t like that then don’t live with it, but you can’t make me do the same” Kelly started walking to Ace’s side of the field.
Rain looked at her. “If you go, you’ll be a loser” he said. “Then so be it” Kelly finally got to Ace’s side. “Okay, so I guess I’ll take care of you first, usaring use thunder punch on Kelly” usaring leapt to use a thunder punch. Ace saw this and he got in front the attack.
A million sparks coursed to Ace’s body, but it didn’t matter to him. Kelly looked at him about to cry. “Why did you do that?” she asked. “You’re my friend and I will protect you no matter what, believe it” Ace almost fell unconscious but he turned to look at Rain.
“Idiot, Rain smirked, usaring go back to aipom with a focus blast” usaring fired another focus blast. Aipom almost got hit by this; but it caught the focus blast right in his hand, without falling off. “What!!!” Rain yelled looking at aipom. “Aipom and I fight for the people we care about, right now our strength is unlimited” Ace said throwing his fist in the air. “Now aipom finish with a focus punch” aipom’s punch glew white again as it attack usaring.
“Usaring finish it with your own focus punch” usaring did the same. Both attacks were so strong they practically repelled each other; but they finally found they’re way and crashed sending huge waves of energy that started to destroy the field. Ace covered his eyes, his clothes was stating to get cut cause of the energy; Rain’s clothe were too.
There was a huge explosion. Ace and Rain were gasping after the explosion. Finally the cloud of smoke started to disappear.
Aipom was still standing and usaring was practically hibernating. “We made it” Ace jumped up. “We finally made it!!!” Ace yelled. All of his friends ran to hug him, and some of the kids that Rain had mocked.
Rain looked at Ace. He walked up to him, “Ace, that was a great battle, thanks for giving me the best battle of my life” Rain gave him his hand, and Ace shook it. “No problem Rain, anytime” aipom came to Ace and got on his head. “Thanks aipom” aipom nodded cheerfully.
Kelly started walking to him. “Ace thanks for teaching me to choose my own path” Kelly hugged Ace; this got Ace to blush again. Kelly touched his hand, “you have been using moisturizer” Kelly giggled. Ace just kept blushing.
Ace and Juan were finally back on their room after passing through the congratulation faces.
Juan was about to go to sleep. “Dude, tomorrow, don’t hammer me to death” Juan yelled looking at him. “Don’t worry, in fact your in case of the hammer” Ace gave him his hammer and went to sleep. “Juan thanks for being my friend” he said before he turned around. “Don’t worry, you got guts, I like that on a friend, now good night” he turned his light off. “Good night” Ace muttered before he went to sleep.
So Ace first day wasn’t so bad, first he had a lot of freaky teachers, specially after meeting professor Krane. Then he had a fight with Rain in the cafeteria; which led to a pokemon fight after class. Finally after having a raging battle Ace managed to get Kelly to listen to him and he got Rain to respect everyone. So now Ace’s Golden academy career has started.
24th January 2009, 09:49 PM #10
I'm Fired Up!
Re: Fighting Till The End
Chapter 4: Extra Curriculum
It’s another bright day in the Golden Region academy. All the students are in class waiting for their last period to end; after all they get a free day with no parents, no worries, and since the year just started no homework.
Professor Krane’s class is about to end; but not a lot of people are paying attention anymore. Ace started snoring and drooling on his seat. Practically every student could hear his snores but no one wanted to wake him up, especially since they could have the opportunity to watch Ace make up some excuse for why he was sleeping; which was something he had done a lot.
“Hey Ace, wake up” Juan started shaking Ace’s body so that he would wake up from his deep sleep. Ace moved Juan’s hand away.
“Shut up Juan, I need to sleep” he said and then he started snoring again. Professor Krane walked up to them and he shushed Juan so that he wouldn’t say anything.
“Ace its pizza day in the cafeteria” Krane whispered into Ace’s ear. Ace raised his head instantly. “Really what am I still doing here” he got up but then noticed that he was in fourth period; in other words he already went to lunch. “Oh, now I get it” he sighed as he sat back down.
The bell rang, Ace and Juan got up and were about to ran out; but Krane called Ace back to his desk. “What is it Pro?” he asked when he walked up to Krane’s desk. “Well Ace, I gotta say I’m concerned about your usual habit of sleeping in class” Krane took out a bunch of paper and showed them to Ace. “You’ve been here for two weeks and you’ve been caught sleeping this much” he said; Ace just stared at the papers.
“Sorry Pro, but I just don’t have anything to do after class, so when I think of that I get bore in class and then I fall sleep” he shrugged and then walked back to the door. “Well sports started a few days ago, you can take one of them” Krane took out every single sign up sheet for every single sport. “I’ll think about it” he took the sheets and then walked off.
Ace was walking down the hall when he saw Kelly putting on a poster for cheerleading try outs. Ace blushed a little bit, but then he walked up to Kelly. Kelly saw him after a few seconds and turned to look at him. “Hey Kells” He waved at her while he was walking.
“Hey Ace, guess you just came out from your fourth” she smiled at him and finished putting on the posters. “Yeah, Professor Krane held me out after class for sleeping” he chuckled a little before recovering his posture. “I see you should probably try to do something about that” she said looking him with a slight smile.
“Yeah, he gave me this sheets so that I can try out for different sports” he showed her all of the sheets, Kelly just passed through then giving a small glance to every single one of them; after that she gave them back to Ace. “Isn’t Juan in Soccer?” she asked showing him the Soccer try out sheet. “Yeah, maybe I can get him to give me a spot on the team’ Ace said taking the sheet from her. “Do you know how to play?” she gave him a big grin. “A little, but I still suck, well I better go back to my room and change, bye” Ace turned around and started to walk away.
Ace got out into campus; even though he was far from the football stadium he could still hear the sound of practice and the crashes the players got. “Maybe it isn’t so bad to try out for a sport, but I still got those extra jobs the director gave me, then again he hasn’t told me what I have to do so” he started running to his room hoping that Juan was still there.
When Ace got to his room he saw Juan putting on his red soccer uniform. He had a short sleeve red shirt with white shorts; the shorts had black lines on them. “Hey Ace, what is it?” he asked walking up to Ace. “You think you can get me a spot of the soccer team” Ace knew that he couldn’t just asked him right away; but he just had to let it out. “Course man, in fact I got you your own uniform in case you’ll decided to go for it” he said and then gave him an uniform that looked just like his.
“Thanks, I guess” he went into his closet and put on the uniform. Ace came out a few minutes after that, he was wearing the uniform but the shirt was a little tight for him. “Dude, I don’t think you gave me the right size” he said trying to make his shirt more comfortable. “I thought I did, you said you were a small right” Juan looked at him with a nervous look. “DUDE, I’m like medium, almost large!” he yelled; although he made Juan jumped up.
Juan got back up and started to see if he could still hear anything. “Can’t we just go Ace” he said and then opened the door. “Sure, I just hope this works” he followed Juan out of the room. Aipom jumped out from the closet; apparently Ace gave him a small basket where he could sleep on. “Okay Aipom, you can come” he let the happy monkey climb on his head and then they started walking out.
Ace could see the soccer field that was close by, a lot of kids were lining up for the try outs. “Wow there’s certainly a lot of people trying out” he said looking at the keeps that were signing in. “Yep, let’s go” Juan started walking towards the desk.
While they were walking to the soccer field, Ace sneaked a peek on the cheerleading building. He looked through the window and saw Kelly in a blue cheerleading outfit. *Is that Kelly* he though while his face was blushing.
“Ace come on” Juan was waving at him to come. “The field is just around the corner” Juan started running again.
When they got in they saw all the kids that were trying out. Some were practicing their kicking techniques; others were practicing evading obstacles; and the rest of them were practicing tricks. “Man Juan, I don’t know if I can be as good as any of them” Ace said looking at the field with a nervous look.
“Come on Ace, you’re gonna do fine” he gave Ace a small pat on the back; Ace waited for Juan to walk away from him before he could winced. *Damn, he hits hard* he thought.
Then the coach came walking up to them. He had a red jacket; his head was bald and he had white skin; he also had a gut that could pass out for the world itself.
“All right ladies, give me 25” he said; intantly everyone except for Ace dropped to the floor. “Go any problem maggot?” he asked. “Oh you mean twenty five push ups, sorry my bad’ he laughed nervously and then dropped on the floor instantly.
The practice went on pretty slowly for Ace, he couldn’t keep up with everyone else, he sucked at kicking, or pretty much anything; not just that but he even made a goal for the other team.
Ace and Juan had just come out of the soccer field. “Man, you suck” Juan said throwing the ball at Ace’s head. “You should probably try out for another team” Juan then got a head start to their room.
Ace was sitting on a bench near his third period the next day. “Well, we can scratch soccer out of the list’ he said throwing a soccer ball into the bushes. Then he saw Jake walking up to him.
“Ace, how have you been” he asked as he was walking up to him. “I heard you tried out for the soccer team and that you sucked” he started laughing; Ace just frowned at his comment.
“Jake, did you just come to laugh at me?” Ace asked with a big frown on his face.
“Nope, I came to say that you can try out for the basketball team if you want’ Jake smiled at him. *I’ve only played basketball once, but people said I wasn’t so bad, so maybe I should* Ace turned to look at Jake. “Okay, I’ll do it” he said as he got up.
Ace changed into the basketball uniform. It was composed of a red sleeveless shirt and a white undershirt; Ace’s shirt had the number 0 on it though. “Man, I hope I don’t suck like yesterday, well I won’t know till I try” he started walking out of the room.
Ace walked into the basketball field; and like last time he saw all of the kids that were trying out. Again and again he thought why was he even there, Jake just told him to try out and he did that; but he just couldn’t stop feeling like an idiot.
He did felt like an idiot; things went even worst than in soccer, he hit his face with the ball four times, then he tripped over the floor and he made another player fall off; as for shooting baskets let’s just not go there.
“Don’t worry Ace, that wasn’t so bad” Jake patted his back.
“Yeah right’ Ace said frowning. “You know I should just go back to my room and rest up, I should just give up” Ace walked off back to his room.
While Ace was walking he saw Kelly walking to her room with Nina. She turned to look at Ace. “Hey Ace, I didn’t know you were in the basketball team” she said smiling at him widely.
“Well…I was just…trying out” he said nervously. “But I stunk” he said and then kept walking.
“Well, I’m sure you’ll find something you’re good at” she smiled at him and then walked off with Nina.
“Hey Ace, maybe you should try for track in two days” Nina said finally having a place in the conversation. “You should try it” she said.
“I don’t know’ Ace just kept walking.
The next day Ace was doing his homework on the quad. He was waiting for Kelly to come and help him with his algebra homework. “Man, what’s taking her so long” he starred at the sky.
“Okay Kelly, this will make Ace try out, that I’m sure” Juan said as he turned to look at Kelly and her Delcatty.
“Are you sure this will work Juan, I mean Ace did said that he didn’t wanted to do it” Kelly said with a nervous tone.
“He’s just scare cause he thinks he’ll suck again, he’ll probably will but he at least has to try” Juan put some kind of vaccine in Delcatty. “It’s and X-speed, this will help you go faster, okay Kelly you ready” Juan turned to look at Kelly.
“Ace, help Delcatty is running away!” Kelly yelled from the distance; Delcatty passed by Ace and kept running ahead.
“I’m on it” Ace got up and started chasing it; when Delcatty turned to look back Ace was already a few inches close to it. “I got you” Ace grabbed its tail and after a few seconds it stopped it.
“Wow, Ace that was so cool, how did you do that?” Kelly asked while she returned Delcatty.
“I don’t know, I never knew I was that fast” Ace looked at her with a confuse face and started to pass his hand through his head.
“Well, then try out for track, you’ll be a great member” she smiled at Ace; this just made it impossible for him to deny, so he nodded.
“Okay, I’ll do it, but if I suck it’s your fault and Juan’s over there’ he pointed at the corner where Juan was hiding. “I’m not an idiot, I saw you guys talking” he laughed.
Ace and Juan went to the track the next day; Ace was ready to run it out. “Okay Ace, good luck and don’t suck” Juan said as he walked to the stances. Ace just rolled his eyes.
A lot of people were trying out. A girl walked up to him to say hi. She had long blonde hair, she had a white shirt and blue mini shorts, she had thin legs and various spots on her face.
“Hey, I’m Sasha, nice to meet you” she stretched out her hand; Ace just shook it.
“I’m Ace, same for me” he said. After a few minutes they were put to run three laps around the track. *Man this is harder than I thought* he thought while he was running.
They had to run all around campus, an Ace almost fell over one time. After two hours or so Ace managed to finish with his try outs
The coach walked up to them. He had a black jacket with a pointy hair do, he had white sneakers and black pants.
“Okay, you all did well, tomorrow we’ll post the results outside the gym” everyone picked up their stuff and left.
When Ace was walking back he saw Kelly waiting for him near his dorm building. “Kelly, what are you doing?” he asked walking up to her.
“I thought you’ll need someone to help you with any problems” she said looking at him with a smile.
“Thanks, I think I do need someone to help me out once in a while” he started laughing and then looked at the setting sky.
“Ace” Kelly started talking before blushing and looking away. Ace just starred at her; he wanted to look away too but someone needed to act serious between the two. “Well Ace, as you know we’ll be having a free night soon, you know students get to go out at night for a fireworks festival” she said; Ace remembered reading about it in the school’s handbook.
“So, what about it?” he asked trying to see the point in all of it.
“Well, I want it to see if you…would go to the school’s theater with me” she blushed and look at Ace directly on his face. Ace just starred trying to hold his excitement. “If you don’t want to then” Ace cut her off.
“Don’t ask me twice, I’ll go” he said holding her hands. After a few seconds Kelly looked at both of her hands being held by Ace. “Oops…sorry” he started laughing nervously.
“Well, you better go and get some sleep, cause if you get in the team you won’t have time to rest’ she giggled; Ace started walking away to his dorm.
Ace was back in his room; he was smiling like crazy. “Man, what happened you look like you just saw a girl naked” Juan said while he was watching some TV; he had gotten a huge plasma screen for their room.
“I got a date with Kelly, but who knows, I might see a naked girl when I go with her” Ace laughed. Juan just smiled back at him.
“Or she’s messing with you” he said restating his point of Kelly messing with Ace, something he has said since the year started.
“Shut up” Ace threw a pillow at him. After that they both went to sleep, the next day the results of the try out will be out.
The next day everyone was gathering in the gym and they were looking at the results of the try out. Ace managed to get through the crowd and started looking at the result sheet.
“Let’s see, Ace Sun, Ace Sun, Ace Sun” Ace was looking down the sheet; he was last, but he was in. “All right!” he yelled. Juan walked up to him.
“Wow, you made it” he smiled at him; Ace just nodded.
“Yeah, now things are getting the way I like, in three days I’ll have my date with Kelly” he said trying to contain himself.
“Have you been on a date before though?” Juan asked. This is what broke Ace’s bubble.
“DAMNNNNN ITTTTTTT, I’ve never been on a date before!!” he yelled. “Man, what am I gonna do” he held his head in a worried tone.
“You got me, I’ve never been on a date either” Juan shrugged. Ace just fell down. He will have a date in three days with the cutest girl in the world and he didn’t eve knew what to do.
So, Ace finally decided to take an extracurricular ability, and now he’s on the track team and he’s gonna have a date with Kelly, he’s finally gonna have his first date and to put a bumper in the party, he doesn’t know what to do.
24th January 2009, 11:21 PM #11
Re: Fighting Till The End