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Thread: Eolas: The New World Beyond (Chapter One)

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    Default Eolas: The New World Beyond (Chapter One)


    ^Thanks Blazeaking

    This is the rework/continuation of my old fanfiction with the same name. This story is loosly based on the old one, but is very noticeably different. The prequel takes place before genertion 5, so no Unova pokemon will be involved, and also before the movie Destiny Deoxys (or when ever you believe Deoxys first came to Earth.)

    Also, if you want to help this story out, please check out this thread.

    The first person to tell me Why the title is "Eolas" gets a shout out.
    The first person to tell me why the Deoxys king's name is "King Felix" gets a shout out. (Two Reasons)


    Preqeul


    Chapter One
    Last edited by sqwat500; 19th March 2013 at 09:11 AM.
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    Default Re: Eolas: The New World Beyond (2.0)

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    THIS POKEMON HAS AN INTERIM SPRITE DONE BY ME. IT STILL NEEDS A REAL/OFFICIAL SPRITE


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    THIS POKEMON HAS AN INTERIM SPRITE DONE BY ME. IT STILL NEEDS A REAL/OFFICIAL SPRITE

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    THIS POKEMON HAS AN INTERIM SPRITE DONE BY ME. IT STILL NEEDS A REAL/OFFICIAL SPRITE

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    THIS POKEMON HAS AN INTERIM SPRITE DONE BY ME. IT STILL NEEDS A REAL/OFFICIAL SPRITE

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    THIS POKEMON HAS AN INTERIM SPRITE DONE BY ME. IT STILL NEEDS A REAL/OFFICIAL SPRITE

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    THIS POKEMON HAS AN INTERIM SPRITE DONE BY ME. IT STILL NEEDS A REAL/OFFICIAL SPRITE


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    THIS POKEMON HAS AN INTERIM SPRITE DONE BY ME. IT STILL NEEDS A REAL/OFFICIAL SPRITE
    Last edited by sqwat500; 22nd July 2013 at 10:42 PM.
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    Default Re: Eolas: The New World Beyond (2.0)

    one more for pokedex
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    Default Re: Eolas: The New World Beyond (Read the prequel, dex under construction)

    Chapter One

    It’s been two weeks since the world has fallen. It started out simple- minor shakes, small forest fires, and short lightning storms. Then the tornado came. It was devastating, taking many lives and injuring even more. However, we assumed help was on its way. It never came. A small team of five, maybe six people went out for help. It never came.

    Most of us regained our sense of community-sharing the remaining food, shelter, and medical supplies. However, this sense of safety disappeared when the Killnet began to attack. The normally solitary Pokemon were attacking in swarms. Never before had there been a recorded attack by two or more Killnet- it was always one. To counter, Curefly, the natural counter to Killnet, were collected in nets and released when the Killnet came. While this tactic had worked when dealing with one Killnet, the swarm massacred the healing Pokemon. We simply had to succumb to the fact that when the swarm came, people died.

    The dwindling population was no match for the next test. A Massive earthquake ripped through our city, taking my parents, my brother, my sister, and I assume the rest of our population. How have I survived? Luck. Unbiased, unprejudiced, fair luck. But nothing was fair about this.

    This will be my final entry in this journal. I plan to travel north to the League, the most fortified place in Eolas where the old Pokemon trainers were. Pokemon training and battling was outlawed 25 years ago, by the five trainers resigning at the League. Pokemon were deemed “savage monsters” from then forth. They kept their own Pokemon, using the excuse that they were kept to “maintain the peace.” Hopefully things will be better there.


    I rolled up my note, and placed it on the ground. It had no value to me, but it may for someone else- a survivor who needs direction, or a scholar in the future studying our history. I had nothing else but the clothes on my back, a few berries I scavenged for, and a full water bottle in my backpack. I turned, and took a final view of my destroyed home town. I saw the remains of my house, my parent’s restaurant, and the rest of the debris that was once my city. I began to turn my head away when I saw something out of the corner of my eye. It was a small building, completely intact, that I had never seen before.

    I walked down the hill towards it, to investigate.
    “Time. Space. Reverse.” I read off the door. I was certain I had never seen this building before, but I reached for the doorknob and walked in.

    There was only one room, dimly lit by an overhead lamp. Beneath it stood a wooden table, and resting on this table was six spherical balls and a pocket-sized, computer-like device. While I’ve never seen these things before, I know exactly what they are from school- six Pokeballs and a Pokedex. The trainers at the League had every Pokeball burned, and Pokedexs were discontinued and outlawed. Suddenly, there was a crash, and one of the walls disappeared. The building started spinning rapidly, and I was able, thanks to the missing wall, dive out. I looked back, and the building disappeared, and I had narrowly escaped going along with it. Remembering what I saw in the building, I reached my hand into my pocket.
    Last edited by sqwat500; 19th March 2013 at 09:20 AM.
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