27th January 2009, 01:08 PM #1
Dedicated Shinji Fan
Before you start reading, be aware that I'm going to create a drabble for every arc of Pokémon fanfic. These drabbles are going to summarize my character's feelings throughout the arc. Because my story is incomplete, I may backtrack, so please be sure to read the titles of each drabble carefully. Don't be afraid to ask questions, and enjoy the first arc's drabble.
Beginner's Journey Arc (Arc 1)
Before I began my journey, all was not pleasant. I had been beat down and, just when I thought all was safe to stand, I was beaten down again. I had only one friend. Nay, the one I called 'foster father' was no friend, but an adoptable. Safely assuming that I was beaten by those who weren't my friends for the last time, I stood. No longer was I taken down. Because of this, I acted quickly. Swiftly and silently, I infiltrated the trust and boundaries of my enemy. Beware, for I shall certainly triumph over my enemy. Over Roketto-Dan!
It's exactly 100 words and 438 characters. Average words per sentence: 10. Maximum words per sentence: 20 Average word length: 4 (crap!).
Last edited by ShinjiLover; 4th February 2009 at 04:03 AM.
4th February 2009, 04:02 AM #2
Dedicated Shinji Fan
The Perfect Revenge
Infiltration. Annihilation. Obliteration. That's how to create the perfect revenge. Compensation. Revelation. Redemption. That's how to create the perfect revenge. Revenge is but one of the things on my mind. Inside of this hell, I'll make my move. I'll make a great discovery; I'll be certain to give them what they deserve. My mind is set on this long and short term goal. I'll be sure to make them all pay for what they did. They will repent their sins. Infiltration. Annihilation. Obliteration. That's how to create the perfect revenge. Compensation. Revelation. Redemption. That's how to create the perfect revenge.
There are exactly 100 words and 521 characters. Average words per sentence: 5. Maximum words per sentence:14. Average word length: 5 (1 better! ^_~)