so im making a fan fiction of pokemon with a slightly darker feel to it . I have riters block so here I am just typing whatever comes out of my mind any critique or questions about my story of any kind would b greatly appreciated. and 2 all u flamers out there plz i no i have bad spelling its a terrible sickness but im couping this isnt the actual story so i realy dont c the importance as long as i can get my point across
my story is called Celadon Days and here is the main character...
Misa Honda was born to the daycare couple in Goldenrod city. She was a very smart , kind and gentle girl who helped her parents care for the pokemon trainers left with them. It was with one of these pokemon whose trainer left with them that Misa got her first pokemon at the age of 5 it was a vulpix and she named her Amber. About a year later there was another pokemon born at the center whose trainer didn't want and it was a rilou she named Mooshi. Misa ,Mooshi, and Amber were soon inseperable they would go every where together she would even take them to school actualy chaining herself to a pole until her parents gave in. It wasn't that she was spoilt, Misa was a very hard working girl who adorded her parents , she just didn't understand why her 2 best friends couldn't get the same education she did. At school Misa had very few friends probably because they were all into battles and she didn't had never had an interest for them (although she had participated in 1or2 contests). She did have 1 human friend and her name was Whitney
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