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    This original story is in a form of a blog. So it'll be safe to assume that the knowledge will be limited heavily, but more of the past will come in the future.

    This is told in the point of a teenage boy. His name isn't revealed, because he feels he doesn't need to do so. Backstory: He lives in a broken family and an equally dysfunctional society. Set in out time, his interests consist of video games, heavy metal music, and the miracles of science and chemistry. He's a broken soul.

    I've set the dates for some of these back then. So some dates don't match with today. The first eight, anyway. After those, the dates will match my posts. Here's "Chapter 1".

    Last edited by Dr. GM; 10th August 2010 at 10:26 AM.

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    Wow, this is weird.

    The good kind of weird.

    I'd be interested to see more as that is very, very short.

    Anyway, seems good so far.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gastly's Mama View Post
    Wow, this is weird.

    The good kind of weird.

    I'd be interested to see more as that is very, very short.

    Anyway, seems good so far.
    Coming from you, I'm extremely flattered. I'm sorta trying to grasp that Portal sort of weird.

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    Whoa. This is some serious sci-fi funk right here. Rock on.

    EDIT: I found a few extra chapters in your blog. I liked how the last one mentioned him smashing his head open with a hammer, a reference to the goddess Athena's creation via headache.
    Last edited by Der_Neuevenmenschen; 10th August 2010 at 12:04 PM.

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    Ah i'm hooked must know more!
    lol
    This looks like its gonna be awesome!

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    Default Re: Blog: Created Love (for teenage or mature audiences only)

    The next blog, for the sake of it. Here's numero dos:




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    ^^
    This is turning out quite interestingly.

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    This is really quite creepy. Not much more than that I can say.

    Take that as a compliment btw, creepy stuff is usually good imo. =)

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    Like it and yes it's like portal in a sense. It sent shivers done my spine actually. Very good. A bit of length and it would be great!



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    Excellent! Now I'm hooked on phonics
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    Next up! I'll go slower when I start writing again




    Quote Originally Posted by Gastly's Mama View Post
    This is really quite creepy. Not much more than that I can say.

    Take that as a compliment btw, creepy stuff is usually good imo. =)
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    Quote Originally Posted by Yumega View Post
    Like it and yes it's like portal in a sense. It sent shivers done my spine actually. Very good. A bit of length and it would be great!
    ...maybe I'll go for longer...
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    ^Yes, go longer! Anyway, part 3 was great too ^_^
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    Default Re: Blog: Created Love (for teenage or mature audiences only)

    After reading this entry, you've made the world the blogger lives in seem very odd, even stranger than his wonky goals of creating himself a perfect daughter.

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    Last one for the night! Part four! You'll get the other half tomorrow:



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    I just read the first four chapters, and I'm hooked. I can almost hear his half-crazed voice narrating, great job! His world kind of sucks you in, in an awesomely creepy way.
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