A XY series Fanfiction ! Need's Review!
by, 4th May 2013 at 06:39 AM (694 Views)
(Ash & a Female cast reach a Sudden city ! )
Female Cast : So , This is where we suppose to meet the Photographer ! Okay, satoshi , Let........
(She see Satoshi & Pikacha are standing in a front of Ice Cream truck)
Satoshi : 2 Ice Cream For me & Pikachu !
Female Cast : Satoshi , What are you doing ?
Satoshi : Buying Ice cream , You want One !
Female Cast : No , A superior Evolved being like me doesn't need thing like that .
Satoshi : Come on , Those are Delicious !
(Satoshi show her his Ice cream)
Female Cast : They does look testy..... Whatever ! We Suppose to collect important information about ''****'' region's Legendary Pokemon so Prof can finish his research and you're suppose to help me ! We also need a Photographer & thats why we came here , remember !
Satoshi : Come on , A little sightseeing doesn't hurt !
Female cast : Off course , It does ! We are in a strange city and who knows what kind of freak might show up !
Satosh : What Kind Of Freak ?
(Right that moment , Ash & Female cast saw a guy running Toward them ! As he came close and Jump toward the female cast)
Male cast : HELLOOOOOOOO
(Before he reach the Female Cast , She punch him right at his face and send him flying unconscious)
Female cast : SEE , THIS IS THE KIND OF FREAK I'M TALKING ABOUT !
Satoshi : You killed him !
(Satoshi goes close to the male cast and Pocked his unconscious body ! Then he look toward the female cast with Thumb up )
Satoshi : (Female cast's name) , I will dispose the body So you better run toward the next city as fast as you can !
Female cast : WHY ARE YOU TALKING LIKE A MURDER ACCOMPLISHES !
(But the Male Cast suddenly stand up and come close the female cast and grad her hand)
Male Cast : To think such beautiful hand process such a force ! I'm even more proud to be working with you in your quest !
Satoshi : Noway , He okay ?????
Female cast : Don't tell me , you're ........ !!!!!!
Male Cast : Yep , I'm the partner who was chosen by the prof to be your partner Or You can say Destiny brought us here together !
(He gave female cast a flower)
Female Cast : huh !!!
Satoshi : Hey Pikachu , Doesn't this feel kinda familiar !!!
Pikachu : Pikaaaaaa
(A Chibi from of Brock appear in Ash & Pikachu's fantasy where he propose to a girl and get rejected )
Male Cast : Here , A present to celebrate our partnership !
Satoshi : WoW , Do you have a present for me !
Male Cast : Get Lost ! My present are for Cute Girl , Those aren't for annoying pest !
Satoshi : Ahhhhhhh , Thats not fair !
Male Cast : Deal with it , You can't get everything just because you're the main character , Don't Forget it !
Satoshi : What ?????
(While the Female cast look another way)
Female Cast : My poor Amazing quest ! Why does a Superior intellectual Evolved human being like me has to travel with such Inferior unintelligent Under evolved Boys !