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The way Pokemon XY Anime should begin !

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[B][B]PS :I'm simply posting a BASIC storyplot for Pokemon X & Y Anime !
The actual Anime should be as Good as this or better then this- [/B][/B]

-1) The episode begin by showing 4 other NPC of Pokemon X & Y .
First Screen : Serena wake up and look at the window . Then goes down-stare to have Breakfast.
Second screen : Trevor studying and modifying his Pokedex .
Third screen : Shauna sitting on a sofa & laughing at something on TV .
Forth screen : Tierno watching a video to learn new Dance move.
Last screen: Ash standing in front of a mirror and looking at his new outfit.

-2) Ash goes downstare and meet his mother . [B]Its reveal that Ash & his Mom Moved to Kalo region to live with his father who settle down on kalo region for his work . [/B]

-3) That day is also Ash's Birthday which mean he's now officially 11 year old . Delia tell him that his father left him a present before going to work .

-4) That present was a pair of Roller-skate.

-5) Ash goes outside to try his new Roller-skate . He has problem at first but manage to master it .

-6) But he let his guard down and Dump into into Serena .

-7) This is how there conversation goes -
[SPOILER][QUOTE]Ash : Ouch , it hurt
Serena : Excuse me but would you get off me !
Ash : Woops , Sorry !
(He & Serena get up)
Serena : Huh , You shouldn't skate so recklessly ! Or else you might get in bigger accident . There are rule about skating and you should respect it ! Following rule ensure a good life for everybody and those who doesn't follow rule will cause trouble for everyone and he would .....................
(As Serena lecture Ash about public safety , Suddenly a gust of wind flow by and shake Serena's skirt enough for Ash to see her panty . She hold her skirt and look at Ash with slight angry and embarrassed expression . Her face was Red and She say)
Serena : D-Did you See ?
Ash : No NooNo no ! But wearing panty with Teddybear's face a little..............
(Suddenly there is a sound of a huge explosion . Next We see Ash on the ground with spinning eye)
Ash : she too strong for a girl
Serena : y-you ! Do you know what you down ? Oh no , I won't get [B]Married [/B] anymore .
(As she's about to cry and Ash get up and try to console her )
Ash : That not true ! Your too Cute so there will be plenty of Man who want to marry you . There no way a beautiful girl like you will be unmarried .
(Serena look at Ash with strange expression )
Serena : CCC-Cute , Y-You think I'm cute ??
Ash : Off-cource You're cute ! You are very cute
Serena : R-really , Thats so bold , I mean I got my look form My mom and she's very beautiful but for me to be that cute , That not Possible ! But My parent & friend admit I'm cute too but that just praise ! But Since My mom is beautiful So I Must have inherit something for her and My grandmother was ..........
Ash : This girl has Issue's !
( As Serena keep mumbling about being cute , Ash try to get away from her But then A girl was running toward them )
Shauna : S e r e n a !
(Shauna unintentionally push Ash and hug Serena . Ash start spining because he was still wearing his roller skate)
Shauna : Oh , its so nice to see you and your skin is as smooth as always .
Serena : Shauna let got .
Shauna : Noway , Hey what you doing here .
(Then Shauna see Ash )
Shauna : Oh my , I never knew my Serena become so daring that she getting Lovevy-Douvy with a Boy first thing in the morning .
Serena : T-That's Not True , I don't ever know this guy .
Shauna : So It Love at First sight !
Serena : No , Your getting it all wrong .
(As Serena try to convince shauna , Ash try to make a second attempt to get away from them . But at the moment , Shauna notice Pikachu beside Ash .)
Shauna : AHHHHHHHHHHHH, THATS THE MOST CUTEST LITTLE THING I EVER SEEN !
(She pick up Pikachu and desperately hug it . Ash tries to warn her )
Shauna : Ohhh , I never knew that are Pokemon as cute as this one
Ash : Hey way Don't .......
(Too late , Pikachu shocked her . But she turn out alright )
Shauna : WoW , Even its attack are cute !
Serena : Shauna , Are Your Okay ????
Ash : Is she's even a human ?
Shauna : Come on , Serena ! Try to pet its head .
Serena : But .......
Shauna : Don't be afraid , Com on , Pet its head .
Serena : Welllll
(Serena slowly and gently touch Pikachu's head . Then she slowly pet its head )
Pikachu : Chaaaaaaaaaa
(sight blush & smile appear on Serena's face after seeing Pikachu's cute expression )
Shauna : So , So , Aint its just Cute ?
Serena : Ah , Yes !
Ash : Huh ,they seem to forgot about me !
(Then Shauna look at Ash with sparkling eye )
Shauna : Oh , Is this Your Pokemon ?
Ash : Yes !
Shauna : So what its name ? Where did you catch it ? Do you have even more cute Pokemon like this ?
Ash : Welllllll
(Then A Boy show up behind them )
Trevor : Its call a Pikachu ! They found in Kento region , Specially in Viradian forget . Its a electric type Pokemon and its release electricity from its cheek .
(Ash , Shauna & Serena see's Trevor behind Ash with his Pancham )
Shauna : Hello , Trevor ! showing off your brain again .
Trevor : Just answering you question .
(Then he look at Ash )
Trevor : Your must be the new boy who moved from Kento , right !
Ash : Yes , My name is Ash ketchum .
Trevor : Nice to meet you , My name is Trevor ! I guess those 2 haven't told you their name
Shauna : Well , He didn't ask !
Serena : Ya , And thing happened !
(Serena look at other way blushing while saying that . Trevor & Shuana look at her with strange expression while Ash look at her with worrying expression )
Shuana : No Way , Did Something Lovevy-Douvy happen between you two .
Serena & Ash : NO !!!!
Trevor : Why don't we talk somewhere else .
(Then suddenly we hear a sound of Stomach grumbling . Everybody look at Serena While her face turn Red)
Serena : W-Well , I didn't have good breakfast !
Trevor : I know a good cafe , Let go there .
(Everybody head there ) [/QUOTE]
[/SPOILER]
-8) As they go there , they find Tierno there .

-9)There Ash get introduced to other 3 character .

-10) Shuana got surprise when Ash said his goal is to be a Pokemon Master Because thats what Serena wants to be . But her shy and low self-esteem personality held her back from going on her own journey . Trevor also reveal that he want to see every single Pokemon . Tierno want to create his own Pokemon Dance team while Shauna still looking for her own goal .

-11) Ash proudly told everyone about how he travel to 5 region already and compete in those region league but fall into the state of depression when Shauna joke about Ash falling to win all those League .

-12) Trevor's Pancham tries to intimidate Pikachu with its glare while Pikachu laught it off . Ash try to scan Pancham in his Pokedex but Pokedex failed to give any Data about Pancham .

-13) Trevor look at Ash's Pokedex and reveal that Ash's Pokedex is too outdated and unsuitable for Kalo region .But Trevor can get him a better Pokedex .

-14) Trevor took Ash & other to the regional prof's lad . There Ash see his father working with him .

-15) Its reveal that Ash has Issue's with his father due to absent from his life.

-16) Ash meet the regional prof and the 3 starter of Kalo region . There the group learn new thing about Pokemon and got themself a new Pokedex.

-17) After the Group goes Outside , Serena ask Ash to have a Battle with her .

-18) Serena reveal to have her own fennkin . She use it against Ash's Pikachu .

-19) Fennkin & Pikachu seem evenly match . But Pikachu starts to overwhelm Fennkin due to his [B]Experience level .[/B]

-20) The Battle get interrupted When Tierno suddenly shout because he just found a new dance move from Ash & Serena's battle .

-21) As he mumble about Pokemon Dance , Ash & the other look at each other and smile . Tierno ask why are they smiling ! In response , They tease Tierno about his obsession about Pokemon Dance .

-22) However Team Rocket was watching them and show up in disguise to steal Pikachu , Pancham & Fennkin .

-23) However Ash saw though it which even [B]Surprise[/B] Team Rocket .

-24) Ash reveal that he's being trick by Team Rocket So Many Time that he's gain an ability to see though their trick .

-25) As Usual , Team Rocket try to us a Mecha ! However , Ash & his new join force and have a group battle against Team Rocket for the first time .

-26) Afterward , Ash came back home in evening and found out his mother throw the Birthday party for his ''Eleventh'' Birthday .

-27) So , The First XY episode focus on Ash making new friend .

-28) In the second episode , The Kalo region champion show up in Vaniville Town.

-29) Ash have a Breathtaking Battle against The Champion . Even though Ash lose , This battle has important impect on Ash's new friend .
Specially on Serena who finally make up his mind about going on a Pokemon Journey .

-30) Trevor & Tierno also make up their mind about traveling .

-31) Shauna decide to follow Serena to look after her and find her own dream .

-32) Before Serena leave , Her Mother gave her a [B]Red hat[/B] to protect herself from Sun .

-33) Ash & The group decide to travel together until they pass a Forest . Afterward they split up while promising to meet each other .

-34) The Show no longer have anything call Cast Character . Any Character can be a Cast of any Episode . In other word , All character are Cast character While Ash is the only Stable Main Character .

-35) As Ash meet new friend & rival , His Group expand until it become an Army that take down the Evil Team & There Plan .

-36) Kalo Battle Club has new feature called ''Ranking'' . All trainer register there get a Rank depending on there skill . The Lowest rank trainer are ''F-class'' and Strongest Trainer are ''S-class'' .
Ash become the quickest trainer to reach ''S-class'' after he register in Kala Battle Club . But there already other 7 other ''S-class'' Trainer around . (Or we can say Unseen rival Who will appear in future)
Trainer who reach E4 level become ''SS-class'' Trainer And Trainer who reach Champion level become ''SSS-Class'' Trainer .

-37) The Champion of Kalo Region & Ash treat each other like fierce rival . Like how Cynthia & Mitsumi (Pokemon DPA) treat each other .

[B]I won't accept anything WORST then this ![/B]

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Updated 24th June 2013 at 10:56 AM by Hurricane Kishore

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  1. SatoHaruFan2248's Avatar
    I think Ash should be replaced. Not to be rude but I think a new hero should take over.
  2. Hurricane Kishore's Avatar
    [QUOTE=SatoHaruFan2248;bt287914]I think Ash should be replaced. Not to be rude but I think a new hero should take over.[/QUOTE]

    @SatoHaruFan2248 Its the WORST Idea after Unova League !
    If Writer wanna replace Ash then they should do it after making Ash a Pokemon Master .
  3. FANG-TAN's Avatar
    It's a nice idea for an episode plot, but I really think Satoshi's dad should be kept out of it in terms of it being the reason Satoshi moves to the XY region. In series construction, Takeshi Shudo intended for Satoshi's dad to be an irresponsible trainer who left his wife and newborn home to be a Pokemon trainer, and never came back. So, in spirit of that, I think it would be more interesting if you include a meeting with his dad later in the plot as an expansion to that, as it creates more turmoil à la Edward Elric and Hohenheim from Fullmetal Alchemist. It also gives a bit of that emotional edge like the early episodes and the first three movies.

    I'd think it would be better if you gave another reason for Satoshi being in the region, like finally concluding his plot with Houou? Just a suggestion.
  4. Hurricane Kishore's Avatar
    [QUOTE=FANG-TAN;bt287924]It's a nice idea for an episode plot, but I really think Satoshi's dad should be kept out of it in terms of it being the reason Satoshi moves to the XY region. In series construction, Takeshi Shudo intended for Satoshi's dad to be an irresponsible trainer who left his wife and newborn home to be a Pokemon trainer, and never came back. So, in spirit of that, I think it would be more interesting if you include a meeting with his dad later in the plot as an expansion to that, as it creates more turmoil à la Edward Elric and Hohenheim from Fullmetal Alchemist. It also gives a bit of that emotional edge like the early episodes and the first three movies.

    I'd think it would be better if you gave another reason for Satoshi being in the region, like finally concluding his plot with Houou? Just a suggestion.[/QUOTE]

    @FANG-TAN Lot of thing in Takeshi Shudo's Novel wasn't suitable for a E-rated Anime .
    I think it better for Ash to moved to Kalo region since I want Ash to be Kalo region's champion.
    Re-challenging Kento League is a STUPID idea .
    So if Ash moved to Kalo region and become Champion , Then in a sense Ash will become the Champion of his new home region .
    Updated 24th June 2013 at 01:07 PM by Hurricane Kishore
  5. FANG-TAN's Avatar
    Quote Originally Posted by Hurricane Kishore
    Lot of thing in Takeshi Shudo's Novel wasn't suitable for a E-rated Anime .
    Didn't stop some episodes of the early anime, and the first/third movies from having the theme of parental abandonment explored. I think a tender way of going about such topics would be good for kids of all ages. Plus, it would make a great conclusion to an up-in-the-air question about where Satoshi's dad is, rather than him just "working far away."

    I think it better for Ash to moved to Kalo region since I want Ash to be Kalo region's champion.
    Re-challenging Kento League .
    So if Ash moved to Kalo region and become Champion , Then in a sense Ash become the Champion of his new home region .
    That's all fine, but you need to conclude the plot with Houou, and I think it'll work better if Satoshi was actively looking for Houou in the first place. I think it would be much easier to work with if that was his reason for being there in the first place. And since this is meant to be made with this saga being the conclusion in mind, I think a reason like that for being there wouldn't be a hindrance, since that's a huge plot point that's been present since the first episode of the OS that really, really needs an explanation.

    He could still be Champion of the Karosu region, and if his hometown were still Kanto, they could easily mention his further exploits in an epilogue, like winning his home region's Pokemon League.
    Updated 24th June 2013 at 01:15 PM by FANG-TAN
  6. Phoenixon's Avatar
    I think you should make it Ash's 13-15th birthday, and in it, they'll just lampshade the other birthdays, by showing small flashbacks which means they in fact did happen, but they were not in any of the episodes.

    Also, about "If Writer wanna replace Ash then they should do it after making Ash a Pokemon Master. " Then they could replace him if he does that by the end of BW....(In your opinion....?)
  7. Hurricane Kishore's Avatar
    [QUOTE=Phoenixon;bt287930]I think you should make it Ash's 13-15th birthday, and in it, they'll just lampshade the other birthdays, by showing small flashbacks which means they in fact [I]did[/I] happen, but they were not in any of the episodes.
    [/QUOTE]

    @Phoenixon , I can't because those stupid writer announce Ash 10 year old at the begining of BW !
    I don't think myself as God like Pokemon Anime writer does So I have come up with a logical excuse about what Ash did in 2 year time-skip .
    Off course , I could bring Bruno/Rilley at the End of BW Who tell Ash that he subconsciously let his guard down against opponent who has a Disadvantage against him .
    Like Kotetsu (6vs 5) , Trip (Rookie) , Homika (6 vs 3) etc .
    So Bruno/Rilley Offer to train Ash for 2 year which create a new perfect Ash .
    But I don't have the Authority .
    Only Pokemon Anime Writer can Do it and THEY WONT DO IT !

    [QUOTE]Also, about "If Writer wanna replace Ash then they should do it after making Ash a Pokemon Master. " Then they [I]could[/I] replace him if he does that by the end of BW....(In [I]your[/I] opinion....?)[/QUOTE]

    After that Trash Unova League , Nothing will make BW Ash good .
    So , If he become Pokemon Master by beating some shit at the end of BW then it will make ''Pokemon Master'' sound Bad. Also The Trainer Ash will beat to become Pokemon Master will look like complete weakling who got a Legendary pokemon by luck !
    Updated 24th June 2013 at 01:48 PM by Hurricane Kishore
  8. Phoenixon's Avatar
    Quote Originally Posted by Hurricane Kishore
    I can't because those stupid writer announce Ash 10 year old at the begining of BW !
    My reaction to reading that: MOTHER F_____ NOOO!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
    I don't think myself as God like Pokemon Anime writer does So I have come up with a logical excuse about what Ash did in 2 year time-skip .
    Off course , I could bring Bruno at the End of BW Who tell Ash that he subconsciously let his guard down against opponent who has a Disadvantage against him .
    Like Kotetsu (6vs 5) , Trip (Rookie) , Homika (6 vs 3) etc .
    So Bruno Offer to train Ash for 2 year which create a new perfect Ash .
    But I don't have the Authority .
    Only Pokemon Anime Writer can Do it and THEY WONT DO IT !
    I do like this idea though.

    After that Trash Unova League , Nothing will make BW Ash good .
    So , If he become Pokemon Master by beating some shit at the end of BW then it will make ''Pokemon Master'' sound Bad. Also The Trainer Ash will beat to become Pokemon Master will look like complete weakling who got a Legendary pokemon by luck !
    I actually don't usually watch the anime, so no comment here, but I do trust you about BW making Ash look bad.
  9. クリスタル's Avatar
    Well, being faithful to canon is a good thing. But unfortunately the anime canon is already suck as it is, so faithfully following it will consequentially bring the old boredom on as well.
    What I mean it Ash is merely 11 years old at the beginning of Kalos region (If he is 10 at beginning of BW, he should be 11 already at the end of BW, so Ash should at least be 12 now); Team Rocket continues their purposeless and effectless stealing of Pikachu and any other Pokemon at is seen around it at that specific moment, and to be blast off by Pikachu again; etc et cetera.
    Well, in any case, I'm had completely no interest in watching any Pokemon anime nor reading any anime related stuff if Ash Ketchum is around. I would go for a complete different anime like those of the promotion video for Pokemon B2W2.
  10. Hurricane Kishore's Avatar
    @Phoenixon, @Akzivx V, @Sakuraa , @FANG-TAN
    What If Pokemon X & Y start with a glimpse in the future .
    Which Show Ash battling somebody in PMT meaning Ash won the Kalo League.
    Then the Story move to '' [I]1 Year Before[/I]'' .
    How Do you will feel ?
    I can expect 2 reaction-

    -You will lose interest because You know Ash going to win the League this time.

    -You will be glad to finally see a League quest which Ash Will Win and get excited to see the first League Conference Ash going to Win . It will also mean that this is Ash's last quest .

    I will have the 2nd reacting . I seriously don't want to wait for 3 year only to see Another BULLSHIT League Conference that Ash going to Lose So I will be glad If its ensured that this League isn't going to be a Troll .
  11. Phoenixon's Avatar
    Yeah, mine is the second reaction too.
    It would actually make me want to watch the anime, cuz I know it will end well.
  12. Sakuraa's Avatar
    Well, I'd be glad that Ash would finally win a league, but that is kind of a big spoiler and I kind of find it weird. Though I guess my overall reaction would be the second one since we've all been waiting for Ash to win the league for years. Even more I'd be happy that Ash would be replaced afterwards.
  13. Silktree's Avatar
    Quote Originally Posted by Hurricane Kishore
    What If Pokemon X & Y start with a glimpse in the future .
    Which Show Ash battling somebody in PMT meaning Ash won the Kalo League.
    Then the Story move to '' 1 Year Before'' .
    How Do you will feel ?
    If that happened, I'd suspect that the glimpse wasn't a taste of the future, but rather of an alternate timeline. The writers would still make Ash lose.
  14. Akromatic's Avatar
    A mix of the first and second reactions.
    I'd lose interest, because I already know the ending (come on, if Ash actually won a league, we'd all be surprised), but I wqould be glad that we could finally move on from Ash.
  15. Hurricane Kishore's Avatar
    [QUOTE=Akzivx V;bt288005]A mix of the first and second reactions.
    I'd lose interest, because I already know the ending (come on, if Ash actually won a league, we'd all be surprised), but I wqould be glad that we could finally move on from Ash.[/QUOTE]

    Actually , You don't know the Ending .
    You will simply know that Ash Won the League.
    But How he won the League and Whom did he face at the end will be a Mystery .
    Also , It doesn't show the End of PMT Ark .
  16. flyingblueshellder's Avatar
    Ash is SO out of character in the first half of that skit.
  17. Hurricane Kishore's Avatar
    [QUOTE=stickerstaryoshi;bt288201]Ash is SO out of character in the first half of that skit.[/QUOTE]

    @stickerstaryoshi

    Blame the writer who doesn't Move on himself and doesn't let Ash Move on ether !
    Anime Character Or Real person
    [B]They all should Move Forward , Not Backward ! [/B]
  18. 97SaturnSL1's Avatar
    Quote Originally Posted by Hurricane Kishore
    @SatoHaruFan2248 Its the WORST Idea after Unova League !
    If Writer wanna replace Ash then they should do it after making Ash a Pokemon Master .
    We dont want Ash's dream to end up like the GS ball...