ChemGeek

Dialogue:

A)

1.“Hi Susan how are you?” Said Joe.
2.“Hi Susan, how are you?” said Joe.
3.“Hi Susan, How are you?” said, Joe.

B)
1.“It is 5:30.” Replied Bob.
2.“It is 5:30,” Replied Bob.
3.“It is 5:30,” replied Bob.

C)
1.“I love pancakes.” Marge smiled.
2.“I love pancakes,” Marge smiled.
3.“I love pancakes,” marge smiled.

Comma usage:

A)
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Originally Posted by ChemGeek

Dear Journal,

Sorry I haven't written to you for almost a month now. Things have been really busy lately getting the gym up and running. You wouldn't believe the amount of work it has taken choosing a theme, a name, decorating, and getting my office together. Not to mention all the applications I have gotten for Gym Trainers. I swear, I've interviewed half of Hoenn by now. Anyway, guess it's time I give you an update on what's going on.
So I've finally chosen a

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Originally Posted by ChemGeek

Dear Journal,

Many people are constantly asking me, why would anyone put a gym in Odale Town? That town in the boonies of Hoenn? Well, you could say the same for Lavaridge as well. Besides, trainers from all over the world stop at Odale coming from Littleroot anyway. I figured, heck, might as well give them a choice whether to start off thier gym quest early.
So, anyway, I was finally able to get the permit to build a gym from the Pokemon League. Let me tell you,

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