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Update: Banner Completely Redone

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by , 31st October 2009 at 11:00 PM (304 Views)
After looking over my old banner, I decided "...this thing sucks."

So I made a new one.



I do hope the tagline sounds more original this time.

As an aside, I'm stuck near the end of Chapter II. Description really isn't my strong point. And I seem to be describing everything in great detail, making the story sound a little monotonous. I shall have to work on that.

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  1. Ho-oh's Avatar
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    If you put too much detail, chances are you have too many adjectives. This is known as purple prose. And it's bad. Real bad.

    Cut down on the adjectives.
  2. Glitchipedia's Avatar
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    It's not really that so much as...well, I seem to be stopping the story every five minutes to explain what something looks like.

    Take out all of that description...and the story seems too fast-paced. Actually, some of it seems fast-paced anyway. I may have to change my deadline.

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