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NiGHTS
07-25-2005, 05:02 PM
I warn you, there is a bit of profanity here...

This peom is about Pokémon, vaugly, as I perfer not to be blunt. Kudos to those who can figure it out.

This is one of my most recent poems, and was pretty popular when I posted it at SPPf so...

Truth

Walking out away from home,

You seem to forget that you’re alone,

The same happens all down the street,

Walking forward to whom they meet,

Holding these truths, holding these lies


Fed with what they saw through the window

Ready and restless to watch a different show

Soulless, thoughtless unified machines

Filled with shit they call dreams

Falling behind, falling away


River running lie-driven and wide-eyed

Knife stained in regret, the grudge died

Dropped down to echoes at the stone

Freedom fallen a right to be alone

Just a machine, another machine


Eyes open to another day,

In a different light, angle or way

A soulless, thoughtless alienated machine

Filled with the pain of a hopeless dream

Holding these truths, holding these lies

Barb
07-29-2005, 09:36 PM
I'm not sure if I truly 'get' poetry or not, but this is terrific.

NiGHTS
07-30-2005, 11:54 AM
Basicly it is about the naivety of trainers, and how one person hates thier dreams because at it he himself failed. He holds a grudge against trainers and tells him that they will phayl..

I just wrote from a third person.

BookThrower
07-30-2005, 12:47 PM
WOW!! This is really good no this is great stuff you have here my friend.